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Apogée 18
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“What they fuck happened in there?” Alice asked inspecting Dana’s eye, the agent hissed as the writer touched the blackening eye.
“I could ask you the same question.” Dana said pulling back and starting the car, and shifting it into drive.
“I don’t know, I got into the office and I got into the cabinet but I didn’t even have a few seconds before some guy jumped through the window. I hid behind the door, you walked into the office and I was going to warn you but the door flew back so quick…it must have knocked me out.” Alice sighed holding crumpled file in her hand, hoping that whatever was inside would be of some use to them.
“Kit was on her way to her office and I distracted her, I went to pull you out and I got blindsided. We barely got out of there I think Kit was at the door just as I pushed you out of the window…I’m not even sure why she stopped I thought I heard a voice—“ Dana immediately paused, as they drove past the club the agent caught an unmistakable figure walking past the club. Alice was busy rubbing the welt on the front of her head,
“You heard a voice…who’s voice?” the writer asked leaning back and relaxing, she was anxious to read the file but it was dark in the car and she wanted to rest for a moment. Dana stared hard at Dunne, Alice looking in the direction of the agent’s eyes.
“What is it?” Alice asked straining to see what had Dana so silent, the agent snapped out of it, pushing that bit of information back until later.
“Nothing I just thought I saw the guy that hit me…but it wasn’t him, all of his fingers are functioning.” Dana chuckled as the writer looked to her seriously,
“You broke his fingers?” Alice asked in awe, the agent nodding in response.
“Well he punched me for no reason…” Dana laughed and yelping at the pain smiling caused on her eye. Alice laughed kissing the agent on the cheek,
“Ok Rocky let’s get home and get something on your eye.”
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Josh waited patiently on Tina’s doorstep with two large books in his arms, as the widow arrived the accountant stood.
“I’m sorry Mr. Brecker I didn’t realize you were waiting, is there something I can help you with?” Tina asked as Josh chuckled,
“I think there is something you can help me with Miss Kennard, may I come in?” The accountant asked, Tina letting him and ushering him to the couch.
“How can I help you?” The widow asked, and Josh laughed,
“You know the moment I met you I thought ‘that is a classically beautiful woman’,” Josh said smiling, Tina smiled nervously,
“Um…thank you.” Tina said growing uncomfortable, the widow shifted in her seat as Josh’s eyes grazed her body.
“I thought wow a woman that beautiful can’t have that much smarts…but you really do…you want to know how I know?” Josh asked, Tina’s eyes growing serious and her body becoming tense.
“I know because there is not another woman on this Earth who could pull this off.” Josh opened Marcus’ books and laid them before Tina who read them carefully,
“I’m afraid I don’t know what you’re talking about, and to be honest you’re making me very uncomfortable.” The widow said nervously, she didn’t know what the accountant was talking about but the look in Josh’s eyes looked dangerous. His eyes were a little wild as if he’d had a few. Josh smirked,
“Of course you understand what I’m talking about,” the accountant reached out and grabbed Tina’s hand firmly tracing her finger to a passage in Marcus’ books. Josh leaned in close to Tina’s ear and whispered,
“You know exactly what this is, and if you don’t want to be exposed for the slut you are I’d suggest you get very comfortable with me.”
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Fuckin’ awesome!!! Lovin’ my peps, Shane and Carmen, even more!!! Please continue and soon!!! Like always, LYLAS ;-p
uh oh! i seem to be saying that alot when it comes to this story! drama drama drama, cliff hanger cliff hanger cliff hanger! and i cant say im complaining yet! now i dont feel so bad about bette being with tina because it seems she has a dark past we have yet to discover! im sure you’ll show us the light though, wont you? amazing update as always!
kick hiss ass tina!!!!!!!!!! longer
Go, Dana! She totally hauled off and knocked Mark into next week. I wonder what deal with Marcus’ books is and if Tina really knows anything about them. Josh needs to die. Bette can off him and look like a hero because no one messes with Bette’s woman.
Layer after layer of mystery. I love it! I am glad things are going so well in your life. Thank you for posting.
great update. you can really tell you have this planned out very well. excellent writing. go dana!
The story is awesome. Looks like you have life by the short hairs and have a great personal life.
Argh… I don’t believe you! how could you not finish what you started with the Shane and Carmen scene before cutting to the next. Or at least come back to it after the flashback… You are a tease. And who says I didn’t wait long. Any day I wait is a day longer in hell since I check in 3 times a day just for your story. Thanks for the fix for this addicted girl. Great Update!
We’ve been totally sucked in by this Tina! She was the power behind Marcus’ throne all along, and then some. (Am I right?) If so, you have only touched the Tibette iceberg! A worthy adversary or a worthy partner? Which will it be? Thanks for writing?P.S. Jennifer Lopez and John Travolta? What would Miss Ellie say?
Thanks for the dedication sugar… I’m honored and loving your attention. I hope that doesn’t get me in trouble with your woman. No sex scenes…. not even one for your brteyes? aww.. thats not fair. Uh oh Dana with a black eye, lol… thats not going to be pretty. Glad both Alice and Dana made it out alright. I’m surprised the comment about Bette’s other woman remained a secret after how your last chapter ended. Poor Alice getting pushed out the window…. and by Dana no less, lol. I like the Shane/Carmen chemistry… it’s seems so forbidden, lol. I like how you change gears.. going back in time with Nikki. Damn… this Josh sounds like a real sleeze ball… watch out Tina. I loved this latest chapter. Hey, it sounds like I have a chance here… if your girlfriend ever changes her mind.. do I have a chance? Hmmm… hope I don’t get in trouble here… better go. I’ll be waiting for the next chapter… and your answer.
What the hell is up with this Joshua guy? Anyways, I’m loving Shane and Carmen as always..Danish, just wonderful and a lil’ bit of comical relief. But why the fuck was “Agent” Dunne following them for? I just hope that goes smoothly with Bette at the mansion..POST SOON!!!
Lol, I’ll admit it, I’m cheating. But that doesn’t mean I can’t keep guessing…I’m still clueless on lots of parts of this story. :D I knew it, Dana can kick some ass, yay! And Dunne came to their rescue?! ;) It made me laugh that the door was the reason that Alice was knocked out…it’s just so adorable. ;) She didn’t even get to see Dana in action. :P Only Bette can stay cool and collected (at least for others) when her world is falling apart. Still loving Nikki/Shane (even more so than Sharmen…but then again, I like your Sharmen much more than on the show). Erm…was Josh suggesting what I was thinking or are we talking about a real deal here? Talk to you later!
Great update. I loved it…as usual. Dana beating the crap out of people rocks. Totally hot! Now that Dana has a black eye and Alcie has a bump on her head they both need a little TLC. Maybe a little doctor play is in order? I hope that Alice was able to get what she needed in that file. I’m personally in favor of the good guys in this fic. Imagine that! I’m on the Danish side! Who would have thought? Keep up the great writing. I’m enjoying the other storylines too. I can’t wait for more.
Yes! Awesome update. Shane should just let Carmen into her heart! I can’t help but find Kit also very funny as to the role she’s playing in this story. I can just she her getting all worked up and the faces she has with that lol!
Okay just what is Tina into that she too has secrets? This is getting really good with all that is going on. All these couples together but not together. Hopefully what ever is hidden in both Bette’s and Tina’s background will not hinder their new relationship. I hope that Dunn gets his ass kicked and it would cool if Dana or Alice is the one to knock him down a notch or two. Post when you can.
I swear you’re content to let us suffer … give us just a little taste & make us wait for more … great update!
Damn this is awesome and love it. Hope Bette there to kick this josh ass or Tina can kick his ass herself. OK post soon plase, thanks!
Yay! I just turned on my computer for the first time in a while and the first thing I did was read this update. (I’m glad that I did, too.)I don’t really skip over sections, but damn it, sometimes I just have faves:)Anyways,I can’t wait to find out what happens next, so please post soon!
Ok, I know you are probably tired of hearing this, but I loved this chapter, yet again. You’re writing is so dead on, even though the characters are different from the way they are in the show. This is an excellent story, and it’s a great mix of Danish, TiBette, and Sharmen (even though I dont like the latter two, you even have me interested in what happens to them!) Please post again soon! I’ll be waiting impatiently. Oh, and I would love to read your Alias fics! I loved Alias!
Thank you for the great chapter =)
So I read your entire story all the way through as I was getting a bit lost trying to piece it all together bit by bit and I have to say, well done. You’ve done a truly remarkable job and it’s turning out to be a great story.
Holy crap, way to make my morning! Definitely looking forward to learning more about Tina’s past!
Me thinks Tina has been a bad girl…or..not..LoL great as always keep it up, highlight of my day really, something about ready a great story after getting teeth pulled makes me smile…LoL
Wow! I have to say with every update this story gets just better and better! Did I mention that this is my favorite story before?? Well, yeah, I think I can remember me telling you that for about 20 times… but I just can`t say it enough! ;) You`re so good and this is such an awesome story! Liked the Sharmen scenes, as always (and, of course, the Shane/Nikki ones)! Please continue soon… ;)