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Apogée 19
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Hey guys the here’s the new chapter, things are speeding up and I’m feeling great about the way the story is headed. A couple of things to note…Coming Soon, people WILL die your favorite character might make it but I can’t make any promises. I just want to prepare you so you won’t feel like I ripped the carpet from under you. Also I think Apogee has won a fan fic award, if not then I feel like an ass but I think that’s what I read. Thanks for the support and keep the comments coming,
Much love,
ClosetDana
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“Fuck…fucking hell,” Alice threw the crumpled file onto the table and leaned back on the couch to look at Dana who held a large piece of raw meat on her eye.
“What’s wrong Alice?” the agent asked turning the eye that wasn’t covered with meat toward the writer. Alice sighed,
“You were totally right, this did us no good, I don’t know what the fuck I was thinking. Now your face is all bashed in and this isn’t enough information to seal down anything immediately.” Alice said frustrated, the writer placed a hand on the top of her head and slumped into the couch. Dana stared at the discarded file absently,
“I wouldn’t say my face is bashed in…” The agent said, pretending to be a little offended. Alice chuckled, taking the slab of meat off of Dana’s face and inspecting her swollen eye.
“…I’m sorry baby, you’re right your face isn’t completely bashed in. Wow, whoever that guy was, he went Tyson on you, that’s for sure but, black and blue is a good color on you.” Alice said smiling and touching the dark purpling bruise that circled Dana’s eye,
“Yeah and I think red is a good color on you,” the agent said smiling and pointing to the crimson bump that sat on the writers forehead, Alice’s eye looked up at her forehead though she was sure she wouldn’t be able to see it without a mirror. Alice ran to the bathroom shouting to Dana as the writer stared at the large red welt on her forehead.
“Ok it’s official, I’m not going into the office tomorrow…I’ve got enough shit to deal with I don’t need to attract anymore attention…I have another job that actually pays, maybe I should show my face, it has been a while.” Alice said inspecting the bump further, Dana walked in behind her, the bruise on her eye looking even more painful in the harsh light. The agent hugged Alice from behind wrapping her arms around the writer’s waist and kissing her on the neck.
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wow ok im just new to the site and have been following this story for about a week and i just had to register so i can tell u how cool this fic is !! plz update soon :) x x x
A three-pager, yay! Lol, my mind is in the gutter huh…weren’t you the one who put it there in the first place? :PI just realized you did fill me in to (almost) every thing what’s going to happen. But knowing all the secrets to this story, I’m still looking forward to each chapter, as I don’t know how you are going to write it. Btw, I still have some questions though. Where did Mark and Gomey go? And isn’t Kit making the wrong assumption on who stole the missing file? NiSha (is this a good shipping-suggestion for Nikki and Shane…hey I just figured out why I love them so much…I see a resemblance in the name to my favorite pair!) were adorable as always. And yes, do take it as a compliment that I like your Sharmen (or Tibette for that matter). Aww, Tina made Bette nervous…so much for Bette being all cool and collected. ;)And one thing, don’t forget that Alice needs to finish the rub down she was giving Dana. :D
Mmmmmm. Donuts sound really good right now. Oh sorry! Great update. I loved the Danish. Alice definately needs to finish that back rub though. That’s the TLC I was talking about. LOL I loved the whole mirror scene. It was perfect Danish. I was actually waiting for a domestic violence comment from Alice since the end of last chapter. I actually called it for once (*does a little dance*). Great job. I can’t wait for more.
Damn drama keep coming and something is with Tina and she going to hurt Bette. OK post soon please, thanks!
Damn I know that I am suppose to pull for the good guys but I can’t just give up on Bette and Tina. Those two just love desk for some reason. They can’t seem to find a bed but those desks seem to work well for them. Shane is so intense, but I guess after all the abuse that she has had in her life she have become withdrawn. Hopefully Carmen can reach her. Dana and Alice really have that humor going and coming. Loved the raw meat and bumps and bruises that these two have. They are such a hoot together. Thanks for the post.
Now that you’ve given me a little hope of stealing you away… I’ll be giving you all kinds of attention. Sorry… no threeways I want you all to myself. Consider me your stalker.. I don’t suppose you’ll tell me where you live,lol. Ok.. on to the story, you made me LMAO with Dana’s face thing…. and Alice’s battle wounds as well. My favorite line was the one where they look like a public service announcement for domestic violence, lol. I don’t know where you get all this stuff but you amaze me on a regular basis… which is another reason why I’ll always come back. I always want more, lol. I love the flashback of Shane and Nikki especially the comment “our special spot is anywhere we both are.” Leaving me hanging with the Josh thing again… damn. I want to know what happened to Candace… please tell me sugar.. at least tell me before anyone else, lol. You know that I’m not a big Tibette fan but damn… you make it so f**king hot! And to think it all started with Tina in Bette’s lap… then it only gets better from there. It was wonderfully hot but it’s so bittersweet… not sure I like where this is going but we all have to live in the moment… right? “super flipping fuck, lol… priceless.. but so are you sugar. I love your story and I always anxiously wait for the next chapter. I’m in awe of your special talent(s)… lol. I love you sugar.
of course i certainly loved this new update! and i think bette with have a little shock when she realizes that i infact have taken that desk of hers! muhahahaha she thought she would keep it for a very long time! lol anyways…i absolutly love your story and im glad you are enjoying writing it as well!
first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hottttttttttttttttt bette did not kill candance even thought she should have lol… way to short thoght i was going to say it… notttttttttttttt
Haha it was really good, I’m even into the other stories which is a big thing (I’m not generally an ‘Oh my god tibette!’ kinda person…) but the part i love the most is of course the danish. Keep it up.
I don’t care who you kill off as long as it’s not my Bette! Oh by the way, I was wondering if I could borrow your Shane’s professional services because Rau is not being nice to my Bette in her fic!!! How much of a user fee would you charge!!! Still anxious to find out what Bette has stashed in her holds. As yet we still don’t know what kind of criminal she is even!!
haha…. SHane showing off is a really funny deal here, seeing that she is all brooding and all… it was so cute! Great update! so glad you did!
Fantastic! Loved the fabulous scene between B&T. I know they aren’t you favorite, but please don’t kill these lovely ladies. Mark is a fine candidate if you’re looking for someone :). Congratulations on the award. Completely and totally deserved. Thank you for sharing you amazing imagination with us :)
Grats on the award! Dumb and Dumber (Mark and Gomey) can die for all I care. Shane’s flashbacks are awesome, but I have a feeling that one of the characters to get killed off is Nikki from her past. :( HOT OFFICE SEX! Correction: HOT B&T OFFICE SEX! ;)
am so hoping that Tina did not have sex with the ass wipe Josh, that she told him to fuck off and he was fired!!!! HOTT ASS B & T SEX LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE…MUCH MUCH MORE!!!! I also hope that Tina surprises Bette by believing in her when she tells her the truth about Candace, which I hope she takes the plunge and does!!!!!!!!!
Hmmm…interested to hear more about what Josh has on Tina and what she’s willing to do to keep him quiet. I’m sure Bette would help her arrange something! As always, the B/T section was my favorite, but had to giggle at the “watch out for eyelashes” comment from the agent. Hope you’ll post again soon. Thanks for writing!
Super flipping fuck hahaha….you make me laugh so hard. Sorry for my lack of comments lately but I’ve been keeping up with this story. It’s great and I hope you keep going. Look forward to your next update.
Noice… happy day… thanks for the B&T hotness!
Another excellent chapter ClosetDana.=)
Great chapter ClosetDana..I need more though!!! Bette and Tina are amazing as for Dana and Alice. I love that line of the public service announcement!! Will Bette ever find it in her heart to tell Tina about Candace or Marcus? If she does, she knows that she’ll lose Tina forever, but she can’t let it eat her up..PLEASE POST SOON!!!