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Apogée 19
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Dana leaned back and stared at them in the mirror,
“We look like an public service announcement for domestic violence,” Alice muttered, the agent laughing loudly in the writer’s ear. The writer winced at the loud laughter in her ear, turning in Dana’s arms and kissing her lightly on the lips.
“Thank you Dana, you really put yourself out there for me tonight…I mean a lot of what you put out there was your face, but still…thanks.” Alice said staring into the agent’s eyes; Dana smiled her grip around the writer’s waist tightening a bit.
“You’re not going to let this black eye thing go are you?” the agent asked, Alice quickly shaking her head ‘no’.
“Well I think I deserve a jab too, I mean at least I got hit by a person, you got the TKO from a doorknob.” Dana said chuckling as Alice face feigned anger,
“Hey that’s not fair, this is a credible bruise and how was I supposed to know that door was going to swing back like that?” Alice said, the agent shrugging and filling a sink full of water. The writer moved to sit on the toilet seat watching as Dana pulled products from the cabinet,
“What are you doing?” Alice asked leaning back, growing tired, it was late and it had been a physically draining night.
“I’m washing this raw meat juice off my face…and I think your going to have to give me a rub down tonight, my arms and shoulders took a beating, especially since I had to lift your ass and push you out of the window.” Dana said smirking, Alice nodded along with the agent smiling,
“Alright a rub down is in order but just for that last comment all you’ll be getting tonight is a rub down.” The writer said standing up and moving to walk out of the bathroom, the agent giving Alice a smack on the ass as she left.
‘You know you want more than that baby,” Dana said chuckling as the writer’s eyebrows shot into the air.
“You’re right, you smell like meat, and now I kind of want a steak,” Alice said walking out of the bathroom and into the hall. Dana roared in laughter again,
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wow ok im just new to the site and have been following this story for about a week and i just had to register so i can tell u how cool this fic is !! plz update soon :) x x x
A three-pager, yay! Lol, my mind is in the gutter huh…weren’t you the one who put it there in the first place? :PI just realized you did fill me in to (almost) every thing what’s going to happen. But knowing all the secrets to this story, I’m still looking forward to each chapter, as I don’t know how you are going to write it. Btw, I still have some questions though. Where did Mark and Gomey go? And isn’t Kit making the wrong assumption on who stole the missing file? NiSha (is this a good shipping-suggestion for Nikki and Shane…hey I just figured out why I love them so much…I see a resemblance in the name to my favorite pair!) were adorable as always. And yes, do take it as a compliment that I like your Sharmen (or Tibette for that matter). Aww, Tina made Bette nervous…so much for Bette being all cool and collected. ;)And one thing, don’t forget that Alice needs to finish the rub down she was giving Dana. :D
Mmmmmm. Donuts sound really good right now. Oh sorry! Great update. I loved the Danish. Alice definately needs to finish that back rub though. That’s the TLC I was talking about. LOL I loved the whole mirror scene. It was perfect Danish. I was actually waiting for a domestic violence comment from Alice since the end of last chapter. I actually called it for once (*does a little dance*). Great job. I can’t wait for more.
Damn drama keep coming and something is with Tina and she going to hurt Bette. OK post soon please, thanks!
Damn I know that I am suppose to pull for the good guys but I can’t just give up on Bette and Tina. Those two just love desk for some reason. They can’t seem to find a bed but those desks seem to work well for them. Shane is so intense, but I guess after all the abuse that she has had in her life she have become withdrawn. Hopefully Carmen can reach her. Dana and Alice really have that humor going and coming. Loved the raw meat and bumps and bruises that these two have. They are such a hoot together. Thanks for the post.
Now that you’ve given me a little hope of stealing you away… I’ll be giving you all kinds of attention. Sorry… no threeways I want you all to myself. Consider me your stalker.. I don’t suppose you’ll tell me where you live,lol. Ok.. on to the story, you made me LMAO with Dana’s face thing…. and Alice’s battle wounds as well. My favorite line was the one where they look like a public service announcement for domestic violence, lol. I don’t know where you get all this stuff but you amaze me on a regular basis… which is another reason why I’ll always come back. I always want more, lol. I love the flashback of Shane and Nikki especially the comment “our special spot is anywhere we both are.” Leaving me hanging with the Josh thing again… damn. I want to know what happened to Candace… please tell me sugar.. at least tell me before anyone else, lol. You know that I’m not a big Tibette fan but damn… you make it so f**king hot! And to think it all started with Tina in Bette’s lap… then it only gets better from there. It was wonderfully hot but it’s so bittersweet… not sure I like where this is going but we all have to live in the moment… right? “super flipping fuck, lol… priceless.. but so are you sugar. I love your story and I always anxiously wait for the next chapter. I’m in awe of your special talent(s)… lol. I love you sugar.
of course i certainly loved this new update! and i think bette with have a little shock when she realizes that i infact have taken that desk of hers! muhahahaha she thought she would keep it for a very long time! lol anyways…i absolutly love your story and im glad you are enjoying writing it as well!
first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hottttttttttttttttt bette did not kill candance even thought she should have lol… way to short thoght i was going to say it… notttttttttttttt
Haha it was really good, I’m even into the other stories which is a big thing (I’m not generally an ‘Oh my god tibette!’ kinda person…) but the part i love the most is of course the danish. Keep it up.
I don’t care who you kill off as long as it’s not my Bette! Oh by the way, I was wondering if I could borrow your Shane’s professional services because Rau is not being nice to my Bette in her fic!!! How much of a user fee would you charge!!! Still anxious to find out what Bette has stashed in her holds. As yet we still don’t know what kind of criminal she is even!!
haha…. SHane showing off is a really funny deal here, seeing that she is all brooding and all… it was so cute! Great update! so glad you did!
Fantastic! Loved the fabulous scene between B&T. I know they aren’t you favorite, but please don’t kill these lovely ladies. Mark is a fine candidate if you’re looking for someone :). Congratulations on the award. Completely and totally deserved. Thank you for sharing you amazing imagination with us :)
Grats on the award! Dumb and Dumber (Mark and Gomey) can die for all I care. Shane’s flashbacks are awesome, but I have a feeling that one of the characters to get killed off is Nikki from her past. :( HOT OFFICE SEX! Correction: HOT B&T OFFICE SEX! ;)
am so hoping that Tina did not have sex with the ass wipe Josh, that she told him to fuck off and he was fired!!!! HOTT ASS B & T SEX LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE…MUCH MUCH MORE!!!! I also hope that Tina surprises Bette by believing in her when she tells her the truth about Candace, which I hope she takes the plunge and does!!!!!!!!!
Hmmm…interested to hear more about what Josh has on Tina and what she’s willing to do to keep him quiet. I’m sure Bette would help her arrange something! As always, the B/T section was my favorite, but had to giggle at the “watch out for eyelashes” comment from the agent. Hope you’ll post again soon. Thanks for writing!
Super flipping fuck hahaha….you make me laugh so hard. Sorry for my lack of comments lately but I’ve been keeping up with this story. It’s great and I hope you keep going. Look forward to your next update.
Noice… happy day… thanks for the B&T hotness!
Another excellent chapter ClosetDana.=)
Great chapter ClosetDana..I need more though!!! Bette and Tina are amazing as for Dana and Alice. I love that line of the public service announcement!! Will Bette ever find it in her heart to tell Tina about Candace or Marcus? If she does, she knows that she’ll lose Tina forever, but she can’t let it eat her up..PLEASE POST SOON!!!