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Apogée 23
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“Yes the shoes are as beautiful as they are painful.” The writer said groaning and finally giving in once they’d turned the corner, slipping the shoes off of her feet. Dana stopped completely after seeing this.
“Wait, you’re not going to walk on the sidewalk without shoes are you?” The agent asked, Alice sighed in momentary comfort as one of the shoes came off.
“I’d rather take a crack needle in the foot than keep walking in the shoes that Satan obviously designed.” The writer said unbuckling the other shoe and sighing in relief, Dana scoffed.
“Well, I’m not going to let you walk without shoes on.” Dana said simply, Alice’s looking confused at the agent.
“Baby, I can’t walk one more step in those shoes I…” Alice found herself interrupted by sudden movement as Dana easily picked the writer up, cradling Alice as if the writer were as light as a newborn.
“Wait, wait, wait, Dana!” Alice wailed as Dana stopped chuckling, the agent still not letting Alice down.
“Yes?” The agent smiled at Alice who leaned back in Dana’s arms,
“Are you really going to carry me like this all the way back to the car?” The writer asked already knowing the answer. Dana smiled and pecked Alice on the lips her eyes widening for a second,
“Yes I am.” The agent said bouncing Alice until the writer yelped,
“Ok well first my car is that way, and secondly…can we do this as a piggyback ride, this is really weird.” Alice asked chuckling, Dana sighed letting the writer down and waiting for her to hop on her back.
“Wait your car is that way? Why were you all the way over here when I came out of the alley earlier?” Dana asked absently, the writer thought for a moment,
“I was getting a hot dog, when I spotted you…I actually still haven’t eaten.” Alice said sadly, the writer was used to eating regularly. Dana stuck out her bottom lip,
“Awwwww poor baby, what are you in the mood for?”
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“Steak, potatoes…wow Tina everything looks amazing, it’s a shame it’s going to waste on me.” Bette smiled as she sat down at the table, the widow prepared a plate for the brunette and placed it front of her.
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WTF?????? now how long b4 u update?????
Glad to see the post. Things are starting to get interesting between Bette and Tina. Just hated that Bette had to tell that she loves her for the first time rushing out the door. Carmen and Helena connection??? What’s up w/her a Bette. Did Bette kill or steal her lover? PPS
For the answer to your poll I’d say ep. 209. ;) “Climax” would’ve definitely gotten people’s attention as the title. What if “Stained” by Nocturnal was updated after your story? lol So we know Helena has Carmen’s sister’s baby. And somehow Bette and Helena know of and fear each other. It’s all coming together. Will Alice get some dinner soon? =D
samantics lol i still say longer.. anyway that was hottttttttttttttttt
: gags at Bette and Tina : ahh rofl i kid i kid its hard to dislike anything u write! as for the lazzyyy comment thats just me whining lol :sends CD a comfy comfy chair : sit and write! i gotta say this new info that Carmen and Helena are connected threw the kid is awesome! i wonder if shane will go kick her ass and get the kid? yay for Danish any Danish is good Danish but.. i gotta say no fair :( Alice and Dana got to eat too! haha lol great job keep up the fab work and post soon :) xxxxx
Well as usual I’m never first, but I’m hoping my comment will mean more to you then everyone elses… does that sound a little bitchy?lol Ok, I can see that I didn’t get my snippet as usual… I’ll try not to cry, but seriously are you withholding from me? I loved Dana’s outward show of affection by taking Alice into her arms and saying those lovely words. And of course carrying Alice, because her feet hurt from wearing the shoes from hell, lol. Hmmmm… have me wondering about that bottle of wine, poisoned perhaps? I didn’t get my fix from Dana/Alice but you had me with Bette/Tina this time. I actually loved that it was a no tenderness moment… found it to be really fucking hot. I had to read through that part again and envisioned it all in my mind. For some reason something seemed a little familiar about it, lol…. but it wasn’t the drawing blood thing. What’s Gomey up to these days? Missing the dynamic duo, lol. Finally glad to hear Carmen’s story… glad to see the connection to Helena, but I’m sure there is more to it, right? I want to know why Bette has a sick feeling when Helena’s name is mentioned. You write such a great mystery and it’s obvious that you draw so many in. You’ll always have me captivated, in more ways then one. I can’t wait til the next chapter… maybe a snippet this next time? Your creativity is always top notch, baby. I love you!
what’s going on with alice? did she have something to do with the shooting? favorite episode (s2) – loyal. anyway – great story. post soon.
First, let me back hand you for the “Chatty” comment…and now on to the update. I liked it. I loved. I want some more of it. I find it funny that you busted out one of the cheesiest country song ever written, to decribe my feelings…you know I am not a fan…but this story on the other hand…I am a fan for sure :-D You need to throw in some Danish love soon, but other then that…it was perfect. I would go on and on…but I hate you and don’t feel like putting forth the energy to properly decribe how deep that hatred actually runs…but I will just say that it’s VERY deep. This didn’t suck. Keep on truckin’…and get ready to party like it’s…damn it…I really need to decide on a year…well just get ready to party! LMAO. The eloquent, well mannered, well spoken, extremely well defined, super hottie, signing off but not out…I think suzieshitinthecloset will leave you a comment too…just to spite you *sticks tongue out in defiance* haha. Love you babe. oh yeah…(_*_)
You are right about the von willowbrand’s disease. Genetic like hempohilia and can be life threatening in men and women. Super post! The interactions between all the couples really rang true. What a tangled web we weave….. I’m looking forward to more soon! By far, my favorite S2 epi was #9, the brief encounter. Thanks for writing!
Ohhh damn drama coming and big. Ok let see whats next, thanks!
Sometimes I get the feeling that Tina knows more about Bette than she is leading onto. I also feel that she may be covering for Bette but then at other times I feel she has no clue. So Helena has Carmen’s niece. Maybe with Shane’s help she can get her back. Lets see, my favorite episode of season 2 is episode 9, the phyiscal reconnection of Bette and Tina and the black bra scene.
Ok? what does Alice knows? i feel like she’s hiding something from Dana…Shane and Carmen are so cute 2gether, but it won’t last 4 long and to find out that Helena has her niece!! all hell will break loose!! Bette and Tina: very HOT!, but things are about to get nuts! can’t wait 4 the next post!!!!
Great chapter, thanks for all the B&T. I’m anxious to see how you will continue to intertwine everyone’s lives. Ummm…season 2 would definitely be episode 9. But I do really like the one where Alice and Dana finally hook up. That scene is hilarious.
Great chapter closetDana.I hope Shane takes of Helena for Carmen. =)Look forward to the next chapter.
aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww hell, PPS
oh boy! every thing is getting all twisted and what not!! i mean, carmen and helena? wtf??? im perty dang confused as to where this is going. and im seriously hating that alice is looking so damn suspicious. she cant be the bad guy…shes so cute! okay, ill just keep telling my self that nad maybe it will come true!!
And the connections keep coming. You’re killing me here with all this suspense. Stop making Alice look so gosh darn suspicious. I don’t want her to be all shifty and conspicuous. She’s good with Dana, and if she’s all evil and Dana’s all good that’s not gonna work out very well. Dana could leave the FBI and they could be evil together! Okay, I’m getting a little ahead of myself here. I really enjoyed the update. Loved the PDA between Dana and Alice. Dana’s so sweet. Maybe it’s time for that back rub. Alice could probably use a foot rub. Great job. I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen next.