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    Apogée 24

    Story written on June 12, 2007 by ClosetDana.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=65927
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    Bette is frantic, Tina is drunk, Shane and Carmen are training, Alice and Dana are eating ;) (not like that, you’re nasty)

        Dana pushed her fries over to Alice, who began devouring them the agent watching in amusement.

        “So do you want to go over what we have? I’ve got all of the paperwork here we can go over everything I have and see what the best move for tomorrow is. You know Dunne is going to have questions, or want something…little prick.” Alice said waiting for the agent’s answer, they’d both had two cups of coffee with their late dinner, so going to bed wasn’t even an option, and Dana was afraid that if they went home there wouldn’t be much work getting done tonight. The agent held out her hand for the files as the waitress came to clean off the table,

        “We might as well do it here, if we go home the only thing that’s going to get done is you and I don’t have the energy for chores tonight.” Dana said smiling, Alice smiled big and plucked a piece of white paper from her bag getting a small pen and scribbling something Dana couldn’t make out upside down.

        “Well I would hate to keep you from your duties so maybe we should make this quick.” The writer said not looking up from her drawing, Dana craned her neck trying to see what Alice was writing. Suddenly the writer turned the paper around.

        “Ok get ready for this, I’m going to tell you my theory and we can break it down and find the problems with it… Carmen and Helena Peabody get into a custody battle over Carmen’s niece. Helena wins and I’m sure Carmen is the opposite of happy so Carmen gets a job at one of the hotel’s that Helena owns and frequents…I’m not sure what her plan was but those are the facts…” Alice says quickly writing down a list on one side of the paper and waiting for Dana conformation to continue.

        “ Shane must have met Carmen at the bar and Carmen thought that Shane was staying at the hotel so she followed her hoping she would sleep with Shane. Instead Carmen sees Shane kill Marcus Carmen runs Shane tries to catch her but can’t so Shane tries to kill Carmen at her house. You suggest the safe house and the two agents pick up Carmen up and escort her to Jenny who’s the transport. Shane attacks the truck trying to kill Carmen…here’s where things get really fuzzy.” The writer slows down tapping the pen on the table and thinking for a moment.

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    4. Woohoo, you’re back. I was actually just thinking of this story the other day and wondering if we were ever going to get all our questions answered :). Thanks for the update, can’t wait to see where you take us :)

    9. I’m SO HAPPPY TO SEE that you’re back with a new chapter!!! I missed this story so much, and I’m glad that you came back ClosetDana. It’s been a very long hiatus, but it was worth the wait!! Well-written and I love the obstacles and the turns of these women’s lives…I can’t wait to see what else you have in store for them.. Thanks again PPS!!!!

    10. What a wonderful surprise to see this story posted again! It had been one of my favorites (especially the B/T dynamic). I remember! Not your favorite! Every character has a little something to pull us in though, and it was like picking up a good book you’d thought you’d lost. Thanks for continuing!!!!!!

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