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Apogée 24
“The car flips and we know that the two agents and Carmen are still inside, Jenny and Shane get into it and all of the evidence suggests that Jenny won the fight but Jenny ends up with a bullet in her back and the only two people missing are Carmen and Shane. We know that Shane didn’t kidnap Carmen, that’s not her style and makes no sense, why would she kidnap the witness she’s trying to kill. Which says….” Alice leaned back and Dana stared at the paper,
“It says that the only able-bodied person at the scene was Carmen which means that Carmen took Shane. It makes sense physically, but it doesn’t make sense anywhere else, why would Carmen help the person trying to kill her?” Dana said sighing, Alice shrugged.
“Don’t know, advanced Stockholm’s Syndrome,” Alice chuckled, as the agent rolled her eyes.
“Ok moving on to Shane, this is an assassin that appears to have hemophilia, I think she’s working with Kit to pay for her procedures. She’s also working both sides of the fence, she’s worked with the Peabody’s and the Porter families.” Alice said sipping on a drink at the corner of the table,
“What I don’t understand is why anyone would pay someone as high profile as Shane to kill a fucking accountant…Hell, I could have killed the accountant.” The writer mumbled deep in thought, Dana’s eyebrows rose.
“Wow Anne Oakley, you think it’s that easy to kill someone?” the agent said a little surprised, Alice never looked up from the paper simply grinning.
“You know what I mean, this isn’t a tough mark Dana, either someone was desperate or…” Alice said shuffling through some papers in a bag, pulling out a previously drawn chart.
“Or?” Dana wasn’t quite following this train of thought, Alice seemed to be scattered but the agent had seen more genius in the writer then anyone she’d worked with in a while, and she wasn’t just thinking that because she was sleeping with her. Alice bit her lip and looked to the ceiling,
“Or….maaaaaaaybe it was a favor. Where are Marcus’ accounting books? Do we have them?”” The writer asked quickly, still scribbling on the now almost black paper.
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(37 votes, average: 3.78 out of 5)
YAAAAY! CD CD CD CD CD! CD is back!!! I am going to write a song about it…later babe…oh…awesome update as always :-D
i read the WHOLE thing up to this last one, and its so damn good. Cant wait for the next posttt. love the shane and carmen.
i wish i knew what happened next…
Woohoo, you’re back. I was actually just thinking of this story the other day and wondering if we were ever going to get all our questions answered :). Thanks for the update, can’t wait to see where you take us :)
Great to see this continued. Please don’t make me wait as long again. Really appreciate you taking the time to write and post. Thanks!
welcome back!! im luv the story – can’t wait 2 c where u go with all thiz. hope 2 c another update soon!!
Missed you. You are still great.
Glad to see you’re resuming this story. Don’t take too long with your next update as things are getting quite interesting :)
I’m SO HAPPPY TO SEE that you’re back with a new chapter!!! I missed this story so much, and I’m glad that you came back ClosetDana. It’s been a very long hiatus, but it was worth the wait!! Well-written and I love the obstacles and the turns of these women’s lives…I can’t wait to see what else you have in store for them.. Thanks again PPS!!!!
What a wonderful surprise to see this story posted again! It had been one of my favorites (especially the B/T dynamic). I remember! Not your favorite! Every character has a little something to pull us in though, and it was like picking up a good book you’d thought you’d lost. Thanks for continuing!!!!!!
Ah CD. Nice to see you writing again. Loved it babe. Can’t to see where you take it! (BTW, loved the Steak n’ Shake reference)
Great to see a new Chapter CD =)I love this story.. As you know I have been a follower of it from the beginnig =) Hope you post another chapter real soon.
This is so good and drama everywhere lol. Pleas post more, thanks!