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    Apogée 3

    Story written on May 10, 2006 by ClosetDana.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=60799
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    Dana interrogates Carmen as Alice waits for her to come home. Shane gets closer to Carmen, and Bette decides to go to the funeral.

        Dana stepped foot on the crime scene fifteen minutes after she was called, her team was already working hard collecting evidence and talking to suspects. Normally, she wouldn’t interrogate witnesses but today was different, today someone had actually spoken to the woman that the FBI had been chasing for close to two years. Dana stepped into the hotel manager’s office that had been turned into a temporary interrogation room. Carmen sat quietly in her chair and immediately something was amiss for the agent, she seemed too…comfortable, Dana dismissed this for a moment, pulling up a chair an making an effort to sit on the same side of the table as Carmen. She spoke firmly slowly flipping though the bartender’s file,

        "I apologize for keeping you here so late Miss Morales, a few more minutes of your time and you’ll be free to go… you’ve only been working here two weeks, correct?" Dana leaned forward, her elbows on her knees,

    reading the file in front of her. Bartending in South California, high school the same, nothing out of the ordinary. Dana looked up to Carmen for an answer to her question,

        "Yes, two weeks this Wednesday," Dana nodded again leaning back in her chair,

        "I do realize you’ve gone through this story more than once, but could you please one more time, from the moment you saw her." Carmen looked distant, and detatched as she spat the full story for the fifth time that night.

        "I clocked in at three and she walked in around three twenty, she sat down ordered a burbuon on the rocks, opened The Wall Street Journal. I made her drink, brought it to her and asked if she was into stocks and she replied not exactly…" Carmen sighed placing her head on her forehead frustrated,

        "I asked her name, she told me it was Shane and I told her my name was Carmen. She stood up and said I’ll see you around and I said I guess I’ll see you around and walked away." Dana bit on the end of her pen balancing it in between her fingers, she still smelled faint traces of Alice on her own digits. Dana smiled at the thought or the journalist waiting in her house for her, she looked away quickly standing up and moving to the other side of the room.

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    4. Oi, I totally agree about Kit and am glad to be able to catch her in a power role…Shane is still cool and I love the way Dana is so sweet and tough at the same time. I can’t wait to find out what happens next. I hope you post on your other fic too, love that one. Cheers mate!!

    5. Well you do write fast…I’m sure you have big plans for a cliffhanger, can’t wait to read. That was a close call for Carmen.I’m actually looking forward to hearing Dana’s embarrassing story. Love that they got so close so fast, lol. Kinda left me hangin with the accident. You do a great twisted tale, my dear. Update real soon… send me a little something to appease me.

    6. For a sec’ I thought Carmen had a kid, when Shane walked into that pink & blue room. Also cool that Dana is a cop. Every character seems to be important to your story, they’re all linked in this assassination. Great job.

    8. Damn girl there is so much drama here that I do not have a clue where to start. First of all, can you just steal the girls away from that mean lady over at Showtime. She has no clue how to make them work. Yes, I am a Tibetter but all the girls should have been treated better than they were last season. I am still trying to figure out why Bette wanted that guy killed. He must have stole more than just money (like maybe her girl). Okay, bad joke sorry. I love this novel and would have a terrible time putting it down. Keep it going.

    10. Wow, you update so fast, I couldn’t even comment on your last chapter (btw, I loved bed head Alice!)! I really like the direction this story is going. :D I wonder what Jenny is up to.

    11. Woo hoo! Danish! Your writing has officialy made me come out of lurking. This is the first time that I’m leaving a comment here. I’m really enjoying you fic and I can’t wait to see where it’s headed.

    15. Hey this is a great story, really interesting and diffirent, I love your Dana, but not much about B&T yet. I’m looking forward to how you will make Tina fall in love with her husbands real murder!!!! Keep’em coming….

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