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    Apogée 3

    Story written on May 10, 2006 by ClosetDana.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=60799
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    Dana interrogates Carmen as Alice waits for her to come home. Shane gets closer to Carmen, and Bette decides to go to the funeral.

        "See this is what I don’t understand, why where you in the hallway with McCoutchen, the bar area is two flights down," Carmen sighed again, finally becoming frustrated with the incessant questioning; she slapped her open palm onto the table.

        "Because I was interested in her, and I wanted a fuck, is that what you want to hear?" Dana was blindsided by the bartenders burst of anger, turning around her brow wrinkled in confusion.

        "Miss Morales, please calm down, no one is pointing fingers at you. I simply wanted to know your motive for following McCoutchen upstairs." Carmen visibly calmed, but the tension stayed in her shoulders.

        "I just…don’t want to be a suspect…I made a mistake and it’s probably going to cost me my job." Dana looked at Carmen trying to asses her, she sounded genuinely afraid, but her body language screamed something else. The agent’s eyes squinted, thinking briefly,

        "Well you’re free to go Miss Morales, but we’ll be in contact." Carmen nodded in understanding and walked slowly through the hotel doors. Jenny stood beside Dana watching her go,

        "I don’t know something isn’t right about that Jenny, keep an eye on her." Dana turned quickly to finish her work for the night, or morning it didn’t matter, All that mattered to the agent was the blonde writer that would hopefully be waiting for Dana when she got home.

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        Bette sat rubbing her temples and sorting through her mail, and opened a funeral notification for Marcus Witlen. She shook her head throwing it in the trash can, her assistant James picking it out of the garbage and placing it back on the desk.

        "I don’t need to tell you that you should probably go to the funeral," Bette stared daggers at him, she knew that she should, it would stave off suspicion, not that there was any at this point but every precaution needed to be taken.

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    4. Oi, I totally agree about Kit and am glad to be able to catch her in a power role…Shane is still cool and I love the way Dana is so sweet and tough at the same time. I can’t wait to find out what happens next. I hope you post on your other fic too, love that one. Cheers mate!!

    5. Well you do write fast…I’m sure you have big plans for a cliffhanger, can’t wait to read. That was a close call for Carmen.I’m actually looking forward to hearing Dana’s embarrassing story. Love that they got so close so fast, lol. Kinda left me hangin with the accident. You do a great twisted tale, my dear. Update real soon… send me a little something to appease me.

    6. For a sec’ I thought Carmen had a kid, when Shane walked into that pink & blue room. Also cool that Dana is a cop. Every character seems to be important to your story, they’re all linked in this assassination. Great job.

    8. Damn girl there is so much drama here that I do not have a clue where to start. First of all, can you just steal the girls away from that mean lady over at Showtime. She has no clue how to make them work. Yes, I am a Tibetter but all the girls should have been treated better than they were last season. I am still trying to figure out why Bette wanted that guy killed. He must have stole more than just money (like maybe her girl). Okay, bad joke sorry. I love this novel and would have a terrible time putting it down. Keep it going.

    10. Wow, you update so fast, I couldn’t even comment on your last chapter (btw, I loved bed head Alice!)! I really like the direction this story is going. :D I wonder what Jenny is up to.

    11. Woo hoo! Danish! Your writing has officialy made me come out of lurking. This is the first time that I’m leaving a comment here. I’m really enjoying you fic and I can’t wait to see where it’s headed.

    15. Hey this is a great story, really interesting and diffirent, I love your Dana, but not much about B&T yet. I’m looking forward to how you will make Tina fall in love with her husbands real murder!!!! Keep’em coming….

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