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    Apogée 3

    Story written on May 10, 2006 by ClosetDana.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=60799
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    Dana interrogates Carmen as Alice waits for her to come home. Shane gets closer to Carmen, and Bette decides to go to the funeral.

        "Just because I need to go doesn’t mean I have to look at the fucking announcement all day long, I know he’s dead." Bette stared him down and chucked the white envelope in the trash again, James sighed sitting on the couch across from Bette’s desk.

        "You’re still not sleeping are you?" Bette stared at James to let him know he was working her patience, her assistant stood up and walked over to a small table and poured a cup of tea, fixing it the way his boss liked and placing it in front of her.

        "You should, go back on the meds like Dr. Allenwood suggested." Bette shook her head ready to rip him a new one but conceding that he was only trying to help.

        "I know that you are trying to help James and I know that you are looking out for my very best interest but I’m a big girl, and I can handle this without a fucking pill." James only nodded helping her go sift through the large pile of mail in front of her.

        "Kit called a few moments ago, she wanted to know if you were up to dinner," Bette shook her head slowly looking into his eyes, even with the heavy masks Bette used James could still see the pain and hurt there.

    "I can’t do that…not yet."

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        Shane picked the lock on the back door of Carmen’s house quite easily. It really surprised her how many people didn’t secure their homes properly, she moved through the house gun raised hoping the bartender was home. Shane opened each door but didn’t go inside, knowing that she’d misplace something and Carmen would know she was there. She crept down the hall the hardwood floors moaned in protest to even the small amount of weight Shane was applying. Pictures of family lined the hallways, grandparents, mother, some sister Shane deduced. Everything seemed quaint and simple, she opened the door to Carmen’s room then the one across from it coming to what looked like a small child’s room,

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    4. Oi, I totally agree about Kit and am glad to be able to catch her in a power role…Shane is still cool and I love the way Dana is so sweet and tough at the same time. I can’t wait to find out what happens next. I hope you post on your other fic too, love that one. Cheers mate!!

    5. Well you do write fast…I’m sure you have big plans for a cliffhanger, can’t wait to read. That was a close call for Carmen.I’m actually looking forward to hearing Dana’s embarrassing story. Love that they got so close so fast, lol. Kinda left me hangin with the accident. You do a great twisted tale, my dear. Update real soon… send me a little something to appease me.

    6. For a sec’ I thought Carmen had a kid, when Shane walked into that pink & blue room. Also cool that Dana is a cop. Every character seems to be important to your story, they’re all linked in this assassination. Great job.

    8. Damn girl there is so much drama here that I do not have a clue where to start. First of all, can you just steal the girls away from that mean lady over at Showtime. She has no clue how to make them work. Yes, I am a Tibetter but all the girls should have been treated better than they were last season. I am still trying to figure out why Bette wanted that guy killed. He must have stole more than just money (like maybe her girl). Okay, bad joke sorry. I love this novel and would have a terrible time putting it down. Keep it going.

    10. Wow, you update so fast, I couldn’t even comment on your last chapter (btw, I loved bed head Alice!)! I really like the direction this story is going. :D I wonder what Jenny is up to.

    11. Woo hoo! Danish! Your writing has officialy made me come out of lurking. This is the first time that I’m leaving a comment here. I’m really enjoying you fic and I can’t wait to see where it’s headed.

    15. Hey this is a great story, really interesting and diffirent, I love your Dana, but not much about B&T yet. I’m looking forward to how you will make Tina fall in love with her husbands real murder!!!! Keep’em coming….

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