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Apogée 7
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The next morning Shane woke up to the very loud squealing of someone she knew. The assassin was still lying against Carmen and as she moved to the floor toward the window the bartender began to stir.
“You can go back to sleep, I’m going to check it out” truth be told she didn’t need to check it out, Shane knew exactly who it was before she even reached the window.
“Shit…Shit help me man…something’s stingin me in my back.” Mark inched up to Gomey as he flailed his arms wildly. His taller, and mildly more intelligent partner stared at him quizzically.
“Is it like an animal?” Gomey flailed his arms again, trying to reach the center of his back to scratch away the menace.
“Like a bug Mark, a bug is stinging me in the back and you are doing nothing.” Mark moved a little closer still staring at his partner’s back,
“Well I don’t know Gomey there’s some weird shit in the mountains it’s probably an animal.” Gomey began turning in circles in an effort to grab enough shirt to rub the horrible stinging away.
“Just do something, I think it’s starting to suck my blood or something.” Mark pulled out his gun and aimed it at Gomey’s back,
“Ok hold still,” Gomey stilled his movements slowly turning to watch Mark extend his gun.
“What the fuck are you doing man?” Gomey fell on the ground in hopes of dodging the line of fire. Mark chuckled walking toward the house that was three fourths of a mile away.
“Well I offered to help,” As Mark and Gomey inched closer Carmen joined Shane on the floor.
“Who are they?” Shane looked back annoyed that Carmen didn’t stay asleep,
“They’re other contractors, here for me,” Carmen scoffed,
“So when you say contractors you mean they’re here to kill you.” Shane rolled her eyes,
“I think you very conveniently left you out of this, if they’re here for me then they are definitely looking for you.” Carmen nodded, thinking of a way out of this without killing anyone.
“Ok I have a plan,” Shane grinned looking back at Carmen who was already beginning to stand, the assassin pulled her down, the bruised ribs causing her to wince a bit.
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Great update. I think Dana needs to do a bit more “apologizing”…for like the entire night. Danish is my favorite, but you have me very interested in Bette and Tina. I can’t wait to see what’s coming.
wow. i’ve been reading since the beginning and i love it. I never thought I could be interested in a story that didn’t follow the show, but you do such an amazing job. i always get excited when i see an update from you. i’m ready for shane and carmen to kick some ass or something in the next chapter. this is seriously great.
I loved the part with Mark and Gomey. I really have to go back and reread the story from the beginning. I have such a one track mind – danish, danish, danish – but the rest of the story is really good too!
Gomey & Mark are such idiots, hope Shane and Carmen take care of them. They make a great reluctant team Really enjoying how you write Bette & Tina (plz don’t let your Tina be a punk). Great update, post soon.
You are so naughty… using Shane’s wounds to give Carmen an excuse to touch her. Guess you don’t need the props. I give you ideas?… what kind?lol. You actually have me going with the Tibette now, wondering if something will happen or not. No matter which story, you continually love to tease me. Tell me if I’m wrong. I won’t be expecting much from Alice/Dana for now…. don’t want to get my hopes up to have you yank good times away from me, lol. Gee… the bug bite, sounds oddly familiar… where ever did you get that idea, hmmmm? Gomey and Mark, what a wonderful team, of jokers that is. Thanks for this latest chapter… sorry if I’m not my usually witty self but there is pain involved.
I am so in love with this story, not just the Shane/Carmen parts but everything! Dana and Alice sounds divine together. And Tina is romancing the enemy~! I smell drama… and would be checking in everyday for an update.
Another well rounded chapter with a cliffhanger no less! Glad to hear you’ve got plans for B/T. Enjoy your weekend and thanks for writing!
So Shane has worked for Bette before. Bette sentenced to prison, interesting. I wonder what she looks like in an orange jump suite or black and white stripes. How did Dana mess up Alice professionally? I know that she hurt Alice personally but not how she hurt her professionally. Bette and Tina are firing on 2 of their 6 cylinders. Post soon, please!
OMG…this was great. I love Gomey and Mark, they are really funny, I could just picture Mark shooting critter off the Gomey’s back.LOL…Carm and Shane, awesome, they are so cute together and I’m glad that Dana saw the light about my girl, she sure doesn’t want to make Al mad…hmmm, now does she? Yep, the cabbage patch to Country music is quite a sight, let me tell ya I get paid for it (okay, to stop). But, I still love it. **Doing my dance for ya** CD…cheers mate.
hooray for dana calling alice, sexyness between tina bette, shane and carmen are so good together, i like their situation the best. fantastic job, can’t wait till the next update. i wonder what’ll happen next?
Good chapter. Let see how Dana gonna apologize to Alice, Bette and Tina are getting some hot coming and can’t wait to see it, Carmen and Shane are in trouble now and hope they are ok. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I hope that Dana has a better apology than she had on the phone!! I’m liking the connection with Sharmen, are they going to be the next bonnie and clyde?? LoL..As for TiBette, good as always…Keep it going!!!
Usually when I read stories where all of the pairings are in, I tend to read only the parts with my favorite one (do I need to say which one…yes, it’s Danish). But you got me interested in all of them, that’s a first! :) I especially like the tension with Sharmen I have to agree with brtyes, very naughty to use Shane’s wounds like that :D ). Dana needs to do a lot of apologizing. I hope Alice will fall for it. Mark and Gomey really are the slapstick-figures of this story (but I don’t think I should underestimate them…I think that they’re more capable then they seem (or am I totally wrong?). Let’s hope my notebook doesn’t fall hard on the floor, otherwise I wouldn’t even be able to PM you for a snippet! ;) (Btw, does the name Papi refer to the character who is being rumored to be in S4?)
I just read the last 3 chapters U posted. I loved them a lot. sorry I didn’t comment on them I got way behind Hun.BTW I will wear the title Maestro the Bad Boy of Fan Fiction in my signature from this day forward. =)