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Apogée 7
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“Get down…what are you going to do? Mix them a drink, they have guns, more guns than we do and I can promise they have more ammo. And although they aren’t very good at what they do they can probably take us right now.” Shane cursed her injuries, thinking so hard about the situation she didn’t even notice Carmen crawling for the door.
“Shane come here, look,” The assassin frowned again moving toward the Latina as fast as possible.
“You really don’t listen, do you?” Carmen shook her head no, placing Shane behind the door,
“Look there’s a good chance they don’t know what I look like, and they definitely don’t expect us to be together so, you stand behind the door with the gun and I’ll try to get them to leave. If something goes wrong at least we have the upper hand or the… element of surprise, right?” Shane thought about it for a moment and realized that this was a better plan than her blaze of glory tactic. Carmen walked up to the door confidently, stopping suddenly to open a small closet behind the front door and pulling out a sawed off shotgun. Shane’s brow wrinkled in confusion,
“Papi really doesn’t like the government,” Carmen opened the door and Shane stood on the opposite side pointing the shotgun at the door positioning it for the belly of whomever came along. Mark stepped onto the porch and Carmen smiled sweetly hoping he wouldn’t recognize her.
“Hello mam, we are here with the Federal Bureau of Investigation doing a sweep of the area,” Mark pulled out an obviously fake badge, flashing it quickly in Carmen’s face.
“We are currently looking for this woman,” Mark held up a picture of Shane, the dark-haired woman wearing something similar to what she wore a few days ago. The only difference was the scowl that was normally plastered all over her face was present in this picture. A content smile tugged at Shane’s lips in the photograph and as Carmen studied it, she realized that this hadn’t been taken too long ago. Mark snapped the picture back in his pocket, looking into Carmen’s eyes his eyebrows wrinkling in possible recognition.
“Do I know you from somewhere?” The arm that Carmen held behind the door became heavy, the bartender recognizing the added weight as Shane’s gun in her palm. The latina smiled at Mark, shifting the gun more comfortable in her fingers.
“I don’t think so, Mr…?” Mark nodded,
“Wayland, Mark Wayland…Agent Mark Wayland,” Shane rolled her eyes behind the door, praying she would get a chance to blow his face off, it was the only way to shut him up. Mark took a step forward and Shane’s finger tapped the trigger,
“I think I have seen you before…did you go to MLK high school, class of 96’ or around there?” Carmen shook her head no,
“I was home schooled in this very house actually, and unless you grew up in Birckenstock, I doubt we’ve crossed paths…” Mark smiled bowing his head a little,
“I haven’t seen the woman you’re looking for I’m sorry.” Carmen shrugged her shoulders, as Mark took a step back to allow Carmen to close the door. The bartender looked at Shane who rolled her eyes,
“That was too clo—“ there was another knock on the door, this one much harder than the first.
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Great update. I think Dana needs to do a bit more “apologizing”…for like the entire night. Danish is my favorite, but you have me very interested in Bette and Tina. I can’t wait to see what’s coming.
wow. i’ve been reading since the beginning and i love it. I never thought I could be interested in a story that didn’t follow the show, but you do such an amazing job. i always get excited when i see an update from you. i’m ready for shane and carmen to kick some ass or something in the next chapter. this is seriously great.
I loved the part with Mark and Gomey. I really have to go back and reread the story from the beginning. I have such a one track mind – danish, danish, danish – but the rest of the story is really good too!
Gomey & Mark are such idiots, hope Shane and Carmen take care of them. They make a great reluctant team Really enjoying how you write Bette & Tina (plz don’t let your Tina be a punk). Great update, post soon.
You are so naughty… using Shane’s wounds to give Carmen an excuse to touch her. Guess you don’t need the props. I give you ideas?… what kind?lol. You actually have me going with the Tibette now, wondering if something will happen or not. No matter which story, you continually love to tease me. Tell me if I’m wrong. I won’t be expecting much from Alice/Dana for now…. don’t want to get my hopes up to have you yank good times away from me, lol. Gee… the bug bite, sounds oddly familiar… where ever did you get that idea, hmmmm? Gomey and Mark, what a wonderful team, of jokers that is. Thanks for this latest chapter… sorry if I’m not my usually witty self but there is pain involved.
I am so in love with this story, not just the Shane/Carmen parts but everything! Dana and Alice sounds divine together. And Tina is romancing the enemy~! I smell drama… and would be checking in everyday for an update.
Another well rounded chapter with a cliffhanger no less! Glad to hear you’ve got plans for B/T. Enjoy your weekend and thanks for writing!
So Shane has worked for Bette before. Bette sentenced to prison, interesting. I wonder what she looks like in an orange jump suite or black and white stripes. How did Dana mess up Alice professionally? I know that she hurt Alice personally but not how she hurt her professionally. Bette and Tina are firing on 2 of their 6 cylinders. Post soon, please!
OMG…this was great. I love Gomey and Mark, they are really funny, I could just picture Mark shooting critter off the Gomey’s back.LOL…Carm and Shane, awesome, they are so cute together and I’m glad that Dana saw the light about my girl, she sure doesn’t want to make Al mad…hmmm, now does she? Yep, the cabbage patch to Country music is quite a sight, let me tell ya I get paid for it (okay, to stop). But, I still love it. **Doing my dance for ya** CD…cheers mate.
hooray for dana calling alice, sexyness between tina bette, shane and carmen are so good together, i like their situation the best. fantastic job, can’t wait till the next update. i wonder what’ll happen next?
Good chapter. Let see how Dana gonna apologize to Alice, Bette and Tina are getting some hot coming and can’t wait to see it, Carmen and Shane are in trouble now and hope they are ok. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I hope that Dana has a better apology than she had on the phone!! I’m liking the connection with Sharmen, are they going to be the next bonnie and clyde?? LoL..As for TiBette, good as always…Keep it going!!!
Usually when I read stories where all of the pairings are in, I tend to read only the parts with my favorite one (do I need to say which one…yes, it’s Danish). But you got me interested in all of them, that’s a first! :) I especially like the tension with Sharmen I have to agree with brtyes, very naughty to use Shane’s wounds like that :D ). Dana needs to do a lot of apologizing. I hope Alice will fall for it. Mark and Gomey really are the slapstick-figures of this story (but I don’t think I should underestimate them…I think that they’re more capable then they seem (or am I totally wrong?). Let’s hope my notebook doesn’t fall hard on the floor, otherwise I wouldn’t even be able to PM you for a snippet! ;) (Btw, does the name Papi refer to the character who is being rumored to be in S4?)
I just read the last 3 chapters U posted. I loved them a lot. sorry I didn’t comment on them I got way behind Hun.BTW I will wear the title Maestro the Bad Boy of Fan Fiction in my signature from this day forward. =)