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Apogée 7
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Dana’s ears burned and her eyes were heavy, two Midiori sours and a shot of vodka, was making the agent tired and depressed. She sat on her couch swirling the remaining green liquid in her glass, looking around the house for something to take interest in, she saw the folder Alice had given, well more like punched her in the chest with. Dana hopped up and grabbed the folder, opening it and pulling a handful of loose papers, and a small cassette. Had Alice complied this all in one morning?
The agent shifted through previous articles, potential leads, even a high school picture of McCoutchen. Dana leaned back impressed with the amount of detail Alice put into her reports,
“Each victim of the assassin is killed anywhere from five to one-hundred and fifty feet away, making it almost impossible to determine how many victims she’s had. Government postulation would suggest that she is a contract killer, and her victims chosen by her clients, rather than her preference. Though this hasn’t been proven nor disproved,
A list of potential clients might include but are not limited to:
The Contradio Family (loosely based in Southern California, though known activity in northern regions)
The Eighth Sanction (religious activists, known for political assassinations)
The Peabody Family (Recognized as the richest family in California, mostly conjecture only thin connections that might suggest McCoutchens involvement)
Bette Porter (laundry list of dirty deals and a brief prison sentence after a verdict was passed for the 2002 murder of Marina Ferrer).”
Dana scanned the file over and over, surprised that this journalist had collected more information on Shane in one day than the FBI in two years. The agent tapped the file on her head, feeling like the biggest asshole on earth,
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Shane’s eyes snapped open as Carmen entered the living room with a video and a bag of chips.
“Do you wanna watch Le Femme Nikita?” Carmen threw a chip in her mouth and popped the video in the VCR,
“I want to get some sleep,” Shane turned over on the couch as Carmen looked down on her happily munching on another chip, moving the assassin’s feet off of the couch and sitting down.
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Great update. I think Dana needs to do a bit more “apologizing”…for like the entire night. Danish is my favorite, but you have me very interested in Bette and Tina. I can’t wait to see what’s coming.
wow. i’ve been reading since the beginning and i love it. I never thought I could be interested in a story that didn’t follow the show, but you do such an amazing job. i always get excited when i see an update from you. i’m ready for shane and carmen to kick some ass or something in the next chapter. this is seriously great.
I loved the part with Mark and Gomey. I really have to go back and reread the story from the beginning. I have such a one track mind – danish, danish, danish – but the rest of the story is really good too!
Gomey & Mark are such idiots, hope Shane and Carmen take care of them. They make a great reluctant team Really enjoying how you write Bette & Tina (plz don’t let your Tina be a punk). Great update, post soon.
You are so naughty… using Shane’s wounds to give Carmen an excuse to touch her. Guess you don’t need the props. I give you ideas?… what kind?lol. You actually have me going with the Tibette now, wondering if something will happen or not. No matter which story, you continually love to tease me. Tell me if I’m wrong. I won’t be expecting much from Alice/Dana for now…. don’t want to get my hopes up to have you yank good times away from me, lol. Gee… the bug bite, sounds oddly familiar… where ever did you get that idea, hmmmm? Gomey and Mark, what a wonderful team, of jokers that is. Thanks for this latest chapter… sorry if I’m not my usually witty self but there is pain involved.
I am so in love with this story, not just the Shane/Carmen parts but everything! Dana and Alice sounds divine together. And Tina is romancing the enemy~! I smell drama… and would be checking in everyday for an update.
Another well rounded chapter with a cliffhanger no less! Glad to hear you’ve got plans for B/T. Enjoy your weekend and thanks for writing!
So Shane has worked for Bette before. Bette sentenced to prison, interesting. I wonder what she looks like in an orange jump suite or black and white stripes. How did Dana mess up Alice professionally? I know that she hurt Alice personally but not how she hurt her professionally. Bette and Tina are firing on 2 of their 6 cylinders. Post soon, please!
OMG…this was great. I love Gomey and Mark, they are really funny, I could just picture Mark shooting critter off the Gomey’s back.LOL…Carm and Shane, awesome, they are so cute together and I’m glad that Dana saw the light about my girl, she sure doesn’t want to make Al mad…hmmm, now does she? Yep, the cabbage patch to Country music is quite a sight, let me tell ya I get paid for it (okay, to stop). But, I still love it. **Doing my dance for ya** CD…cheers mate.
hooray for dana calling alice, sexyness between tina bette, shane and carmen are so good together, i like their situation the best. fantastic job, can’t wait till the next update. i wonder what’ll happen next?
Good chapter. Let see how Dana gonna apologize to Alice, Bette and Tina are getting some hot coming and can’t wait to see it, Carmen and Shane are in trouble now and hope they are ok. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I hope that Dana has a better apology than she had on the phone!! I’m liking the connection with Sharmen, are they going to be the next bonnie and clyde?? LoL..As for TiBette, good as always…Keep it going!!!
Usually when I read stories where all of the pairings are in, I tend to read only the parts with my favorite one (do I need to say which one…yes, it’s Danish). But you got me interested in all of them, that’s a first! :) I especially like the tension with Sharmen I have to agree with brtyes, very naughty to use Shane’s wounds like that :D ). Dana needs to do a lot of apologizing. I hope Alice will fall for it. Mark and Gomey really are the slapstick-figures of this story (but I don’t think I should underestimate them…I think that they’re more capable then they seem (or am I totally wrong?). Let’s hope my notebook doesn’t fall hard on the floor, otherwise I wouldn’t even be able to PM you for a snippet! ;) (Btw, does the name Papi refer to the character who is being rumored to be in S4?)
I just read the last 3 chapters U posted. I loved them a lot. sorry I didn’t comment on them I got way behind Hun.BTW I will wear the title Maestro the Bad Boy of Fan Fiction in my signature from this day forward. =)