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Apogée 9
“Hello?” A velvety British voice hummed in the widow’s ear.
“Tina…how are you love?” The widow sighed at the familiar voice on the other end,
“Helena…I’m alright…you got my message?” the young heiress spoke softly her accent soothing Tina, despite the inconvenient interruption.
“I did, and I’m terribly sorry. I know how much Marcus meant to you.” Tina took a deep breath letting it out slowly as she spoke,
“He did…and now there’s just so much to do…with his job and his side business I just have no idea where to begin.”
“Say no more Tina, Marcus’ estate can wait a few more days, I’ll be there in one weeks time. I’ll bring my accountant and lawyer; they’ll handle all of the details. You shouldn’t have worry at a time like this, only friends.” The widow smiled, Marcus had met the young heiress, two years before they’d married. Helena and Tina had become fast friends, and even though Helena moved around a lot, they managed to stay in touch. Marcus was always pleased that Tina never grew jealous of his close friendship with the heiress.
“I really couldn’t accept that Helena, I know how busy you are and I wouldn’t—“ the heiress interrupted,
“I won’t hear it Tina…I’ll be there in one week,” the widow chuckled to herself Helena’s mind was made up and when the heiress said something, it was rare when it wasn’t done. They gave their goodbyes and Tina hung up looking at the clock again. 2:43,
“Shit…” The widow knew sleep wasn’t going to come easy tonight, Bette was buzzing in Tina’s brain and the widow knew the dark-haired beauty wasn’t going to be easy to shake. Tina put a pillow over her face yelling into it as loud as she could, hoping to tire herself and melt off some of this frustration. The widow was interrupted by a knock at the door, Tina rose from the bed and made her way to the door quickly, attempting to catch the neighborhood kids that played games late at night. Tina swung the door open quickly, her breath catching suddenly.
“Bette.”
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(43 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
I can’t imagine how hard it is to come up with new plots every time, but I’m glad you continued this story. :D And yes, no arguing from me on forgiving Dana easily. I would totally do the same. :P Your Helena has the personality of S3, I really like that. :) She will be joining them soon? So Alice is gonna help Dana out. I hope Alice really is trustworthy and doesn’t take it to the paper. The slapstick duo has golden information in their hands…they could asked a lot more money (if they only knew). :) Shane had a troublesome childhood. I would like to explore that a little deeper. And I’m with theotherlife, why is Carmen crying? I saw you added me on IM. We’re in different time zones..but I’ll be there for a snippet. Don’t know if I can handle it tough? ;)
Good update!! I can’t wait to see what happens between TiBette…why was Carmen crying? Just a question…and what will happen if Alice’s cover is blown?? anyways, KEEP IT COMING!!!! Thanks!
Excellent update. I just wanted you to know that I did leave a comment the day you posted the previous update but it never showed up. So…you get 2 in 1 today because I don’t feel like doing 2 seperate comments. Sorry I guess I’m being a little lazy. I’m going to try and remember what I wrote for the last one. Here goes. Read it, loved it, want more soon. I’m really enjoying this story. I loved the last chapter due to all the Danish. I think that you write the characters very well. I’m actually able to picture the characters doing these things, which is really amazing. I loved it when Alice scratched here head with her pen and pushed her glasses up. It was something so little, but it fit her perfectly. I think you do a very good job with detail, without over doing it. Keep up the excellent writing. I can’t wait for more.I think I got it all…or most of it anyway.oh yeah! I loved that the “drive-by” comment stuck. I had to laugh about it. :)
guest bedroom or her bedroom??jeje
I’ve just caught up — this story is great fun.
i left one last time. but it didn’t show… thought i’d try again since i did sign up just to tell you that i’ve read your story.glad you didn’t take the hiatus.your story’s a rare harmony of the foreign and the familiar and i adore it very much.
Thank you very much for the name comment, I wish I made it up but I don’t know who did, great chapter though, post soon!!
Agent Alice – awesome! Your special person has great taste.
Now to which bedroom is Tina taking Bette to? I love that Dana trust Alice enough to bring her into the case. She not only trust her but allows her to voice her own opinion. Shane I believe is fighting her own feelings towards Carmen. I would love to see those two move closer together. As for Kit she just scares me. Is the reason that Bette had Marcus killed because he was stealing money from her? If that is true then maybe when Helena’s people go over his books they will find the missing money. Then maybe Tina will not look on Marcus as the once suitable mate for her. Great post.
Hope this doesn’t float off in cyper space.been having a time with comments Sometimes its hards to keep up with this story, makes me stop and think. So I go a wee bit slower and ,yes I understand it. I will read if you write. thanks
YOU RULE!!! Keep the updates coming please. I love this bette:)
I’ll have you know I left three lengthy comments the last time but I was rejected(guess I wasn’t worthy enough to get approved… makes me want to cry) Does that mean three strikes I’m out? Hope not. I know I’m fortunate to get to read all or most of your story ahead of time but I was tricked by the Tina/Bette daydream again. I love that you have Alice/Dana working together… I’m hoping for some of that wonderful tension. No offense but i hope you pull the plug on Jenny the circus freak. The woman drives me insane….and I would rather have you drive me crazy, lol. You have me curious as to why Carmen is crying. I love a late night visit… er Bette/Tina. My stomach does flip flops when I’m feeling that lovely sexual tension…you know what I mean? I’d say more but I’m so very tired…. and my mind has been occupied with so many torturous thoughts. Love the story and the way you make me feel!
yay! bette and tina goodness! I love this story cause it’s got my three favorite couples in it. and shane being an assassin=mad hottness
Ahh so nice and like it!
Awesome, Keep it coming :)
grat update, as usual. keep going with this fic, its good.
really cool, probably a stupid question but why is carmen crying? :(
Great story, lots of complexity which makes it interesting.
nice work closetdana, have to add more of that danish love though :P
I love your story and it is getting better and better. Such an ingenius story. And the frequency of posts makes me very happy, and helps me brighten up my dull days at work.BTW, I agree on the bit about Hawkgirl. But her feistiness and her aggressiveness is so enticing. And she is gorgeous. Reminds me a little of Carmen too…
So glad you decided to continue with this story. I don’t always comment, but I always admire and appreciate your work. Thanks Dana
Great Chapter Hun, can’t wait to read the next one =)
this story is ace, please don’t stop writing x
I’m usually solely a Sharmen supporter, but you’ve got me hooked onto your version of Bette & Tina, very nice.
Well I haven’t started from the beginning yet. lol I’m still trying to catch up on some other stories, plus I’m probably gonna fall behind due to spending the next month playing an online game hardcore. It’s a juggling act, but I promise to find time to start on this. :)
I’m so happy that you didn’t go on hiatus. I love this story and I love where you have taken it thus far and am still dying to see what happens next.
I would’ve really missed your story! I save it to read where it’s nice and quiet and I can give my full attention! Which bedroom is Tina leading Bette toward? Let us know soon! Thanks for writing.
It’s safe to say if I read the back installments, I’m in it for the long haul. ‘Nother chapter. And I definitely like where B&T are headed! ;)
Tina leading Bette to the bedroom.MMMMMM, oh this can be interesting. I like it.
now ths sizzlin i like tht tension between them tht sexual energy
This is a great update . . . please continue and soon as you can . . . LYLAS ;-D
Great update ClosetDana. Got to love the danish in this story. Could use some more. Please keep going.
Great update! The combination of strong, confident Dana and quick- witted Alice is so sexy…not to mention Alice taking note of her ass. I love it, it’s so Danish. Can’t wait for the next installment!
I love this…I feel so bad for Shane, she’s still on my good side though; even if she kills ppl. Yeah, shag is universal, and my fav. word. You keep working your magic w/this fanfic & I’ll do mines…LOL…ta mate.
greattt update! cant wait for the next!!!
…yeah…why is carmen crying? Great update…kinda makes me want update a few of my own…