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    Apogée 9

    Story written on June 1, 2006 by ClosetDana.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=61132
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    Shane takes her own shower, Mark and Gomey might not be as stupid as they appear. Agent Alice? Tina shows Bette the bedroom.

    “So does this mean she’s not working alone?” A random agent raised his hand and pointed out the obvious, Alice shook her head silently biting her pen. Dana noticed Alice’s reaction turning to her, not wanting to treat her any differently in front of her agents but wanting Alice to get a chance to earn her stripes, so to speak.

    “Agent Bell you have something to add?” The writer’s eyes widened, taking a moment to get her bearings.

    “…I doubt that’s the case, assassin’s rarely work in teams. I mean think about it, you work with another assassin and you have to cut the money down the middle, not to mention Marcus was shot point blank.” The agent that originally spoke piped in defensively,

    “What does that have to do with McCoutchen having a partner,” Alice turned around.

    “What would be the point? She walks in, pops the guy and walks out…what’s the other assassin getting paid for? And if there was a teammate, how did Morales get away?” Dana smiled to herself, Alice was dead on and everyone in the room knew it, the agent spoke above the ruckus that Alice’s comment caused,

    “Alright guys the point is…Morales is gone, so is McCoutchen, and since Agent Shecter hasn’t regained consciousness yet there is no way to ask her what happened.” Alice took notes along with everyone in the room, the writer paying special attention to Dana ass as she moved to write on the whiteboard.

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    Kit helped her servers during busy hours at The Planet, taking orders and serving tables when someone called in sick. Today was no exception, the coffeehouse was packed and as Kit was running to grab the next tray Mark and Gomey walked in. Heavy black jackets and dark glasses drew the customer’s attention, Gomey jumped into a child’s face causing the small boy to shrink back and the goofy assassin to chuckle. Kit looked around trying to reassure customers as she pulled them back into her office.

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    1. I can’t imagine how hard it is to come up with new plots every time, but I’m glad you continued this story. :D And yes, no arguing from me on forgiving Dana easily. I would totally do the same. :P Your Helena has the personality of S3, I really like that. :) She will be joining them soon? So Alice is gonna help Dana out. I hope Alice really is trustworthy and doesn’t take it to the paper. The slapstick duo has golden information in their hands…they could asked a lot more money (if they only knew). :) Shane had a troublesome childhood. I would like to explore that a little deeper. And I’m with theotherlife, why is Carmen crying? I saw you added me on IM. We’re in different time zones..but I’ll be there for a snippet. Don’t know if I can handle it tough? ;)

    3. Excellent update. I just wanted you to know that I did leave a comment the day you posted the previous update but it never showed up. So…you get 2 in 1 today because I don’t feel like doing 2 seperate comments. Sorry I guess I’m being a little lazy. I’m going to try and remember what I wrote for the last one. Here goes. Read it, loved it, want more soon. I’m really enjoying this story. I loved the last chapter due to all the Danish. I think that you write the characters very well. I’m actually able to picture the characters doing these things, which is really amazing. I loved it when Alice scratched here head with her pen and pushed her glasses up. It was something so little, but it fit her perfectly. I think you do a very good job with detail, without over doing it. Keep up the excellent writing. I can’t wait for more.I think I got it all…or most of it anyway.oh yeah! I loved that the “drive-by” comment stuck. I had to laugh about it. :)

    6. i left one last time. but it didn’t show… thought i’d try again since i did sign up just to tell you that i’ve read your story.glad you didn’t take the hiatus.your story’s a rare harmony of the foreign and the familiar and i adore it very much.

    9. Now to which bedroom is Tina taking Bette to? I love that Dana trust Alice enough to bring her into the case. She not only trust her but allows her to voice her own opinion. Shane I believe is fighting her own feelings towards Carmen. I would love to see those two move closer together. As for Kit she just scares me. Is the reason that Bette had Marcus killed because he was stealing money from her? If that is true then maybe when Helena’s people go over his books they will find the missing money. Then maybe Tina will not look on Marcus as the once suitable mate for her. Great post.

    10. Hope this doesn’t float off in cyper space.been having a time with comments Sometimes its hards to keep up with this story, makes me stop and think. So I go a wee bit slower and ,yes I understand it. I will read if you write. thanks

    12. I’ll have you know I left three lengthy comments the last time but I was rejected(guess I wasn’t worthy enough to get approved… makes me want to cry) Does that mean three strikes I’m out? Hope not. I know I’m fortunate to get to read all or most of your story ahead of time but I was tricked by the Tina/Bette daydream again. I love that you have Alice/Dana working together… I’m hoping for some of that wonderful tension. No offense but i hope you pull the plug on Jenny the circus freak. The woman drives me insane….and I would rather have you drive me crazy, lol. You have me curious as to why Carmen is crying. I love a late night visit… er Bette/Tina. My stomach does flip flops when I’m feeling that lovely sexual tension…you know what I mean? I’d say more but I’m so very tired…. and my mind has been occupied with so many torturous thoughts. Love the story and the way you make me feel!

    20. I love your story and it is getting better and better. Such an ingenius story. And the frequency of posts makes me very happy, and helps me brighten up my dull days at work.BTW, I agree on the bit about Hawkgirl. But her feistiness and her aggressiveness is so enticing. And she is gorgeous. Reminds me a little of Carmen too…

    25. Well I haven’t started from the beginning yet. lol I’m still trying to catch up on some other stories, plus I’m probably gonna fall behind due to spending the next month playing an online game hardcore. It’s a juggling act, but I promise to find time to start on this. :)

    26. I’m so happy that you didn’t go on hiatus. I love this story and I love where you have taken it thus far and am still dying to see what happens next.

    27. I would’ve really missed your story! I save it to read where it’s nice and quiet and I can give my full attention! Which bedroom is Tina leading Bette toward? Let us know soon! Thanks for writing.

    28. It’s safe to say if I read the back installments, I’m in it for the long haul. ‘Nother chapter. And I definitely like where B&T are headed! ;)

    33. Great update! The combination of strong, confident Dana and quick- witted Alice is so sexy…not to mention Alice taking note of her ass. I love it, it’s so Danish. Can’t wait for the next installment!

    34. I love this…I feel so bad for Shane, she’s still on my good side though; even if she kills ppl. Yeah, shag is universal, and my fav. word. You keep working your magic w/this fanfic & I’ll do mines…LOL…ta mate.

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