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"Heartbreaker?" Bette repeated to herself.
She looked back on the page reading Jodi’s notes about the artwork aloud, "This work is the audiovisual representation of a heartbreaker. A woman who leads you on, makes you leave everything you’ve ever had, known, or believed in and takes you into her own private world. You think you’re safe there. You think she’s all yours. But she’s never yours to begin with. This is for all the women out there who have been hurt and cheated."
Hot tears spilled out of her eyes and she dropped her head forward.
"No! It can’t be! I can’t be a…Oh my God Tina was right!" Bette sobbed, "I cheated!"
Through her wracking sobs she clicked on the CAC website, trying in anyway to find out who she cheated with. She had to know who it was. She had to know who was the one she broke Tina’s heart for. Who was the one that made her lose Tina in all these horrible, heartbreaking ways.
Her eyes widened when she saw the word. There were no pictures, no long articles, or at least Bette didn’t see them. She felt herself falling out of her wheelchair and the world blurring around her.
As everything faded to black, the only thing she saw was that word. That word written in red letters. The word that represented the night she knew that everything changed forever.
"Provocations."
Bette was hanging her blouse in the closet when she saw a glimpse of Tina in the mirror next to the bed. Tina was sitting on the bed stool with a look of disappointment that Bette couldn’t even begin to imagine. She turned around to look at her directly, the expression on the blonde’s face said it all. Bette immediately knew what happened, she felt so horrible inside like her whole world was starting to crumble, but the worst part was that she didn’t know if she was terrified at what she did, or if she was terrified for being caught, and that brought tears to her eyes.
She walked towards Tina slowly as the blonde stood up in her spot.
Tina could only whisper out a few words, "I know…I saw it."
Tears spilled out of Bette’s eyes, she had destroyed the woman she loved with all her heart. 7 years together were suddenly pointless, insignificant. She made it that way.
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WOW! Well now I get why you said these last two chapters were so hard for you to write! This was the one ep I haven’t been able to watch again because it was so painful to see the first time. Still you’ve done a wonderful job incorporating this into your story. Here’s to better times ahead for our favorite couple…. yes?
how difficult it must be to re-live it all again…that pain all at once
So sad, but really great update!
Brilliant chapter so intense, thanks ;D
DAMN this is so freaking good and love it. Please post more, thanks!
I’ve been bad about commenting, but I’m hooked on this story. I love the way you’ve written in scenes from the show and have expanded them to include your own thoughts. Although many of the flashbacks are difficult and sad, you’ve written them beautifully.
WOW! Bravo TB24, bravo! You’re one of the few authors on this site who actually have the guts to write about that scene and you did it brilliantly!
Brilliant!!! For me the breakup sex in the last episode of SE1 is the most difficult, painful but beautiful scene in the series and you’ve done a super job.. Loved it… I really APPRECIATE this story:-D Cant wait for more, thanks!
Kudos for tackling a difficult scene. Although, I have to say that was one of my most favorite of the series because of the brilliant acting. You reached it with brilliant writing! Bette may not like remembering this time, but she needed to. Can’t wait for more!
Very good. Respect. It’s not easy to write. PPS.
Wow, what an update. More, pleaaaaaassssssseeeeeee.
Intense is right.
Hard to read but well done.Thank you for the update.PPS
i love your story please post more thank you!!!!
It is true, some things are better forgotten
I agree with the others, amazing chapter and so emotional. But not my fav moment >.< PPS!
Just read both your updates on this story! WOW! Awesome update. thank you.
finally caught up, bloody brilliant as always. you really are great! nicely put. Bette and TIn ahave so much work to do but i’m sure they will get there.