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Appreciation (11)
"STOP IT!" Tina screamed kicking desperately, "no!"
She managed to turn around so she was lying on her back, Bette immediately pinned her arms down again. She pinned her down and shook her roughly, "Stop it! Stop it!"
She leaned down and took Tina’s lips. It took all of Tina’s will to stop herself from kissing her back, those same lips that had kissed another woman. Bette moved her lips to Tina’s throat and Tina started moaning. Her body filled with anger at the reaction that Bette provoked in her so easily, she had always been enough for Tina, but obviously Tina wasn’t enough for her.
Panting heavily and angrily she flipped Bette onto her back and gripped her wrists in a vice grip. "How dare you!" she screamed as Bette sobbed in pain.
She lifted Bette up by the wrists and slammed her back down twice yelling out, "fuck you! Fuck you!"
"Fuck you!" she screamed delivering two hard punches to Bette’s shoulder. She pinned her wrist back quickly, ignoring the sound of Bette’s sobs. Panting heavily, Tina leaned down and bit down hard on Bette’s ear.
"GAAAHHHH!" Bette screamed, pain ripping through her entire body, "please!"
Tina moved her head down biting as hard as she could on Bette’s breast gripping her wrists tighter as Bette kicked and screamed desperately. Her sobs were silenced when suddenly Tina snapped her head up and kissed Bette on the lips passionately. Bette, even through all the physical pain, responded instantly letting Tina’s tongue slip into her mouth violently.
Tina sat back as Bette let out a small grunt of pain, her body had taken quite the beating. Suddenly, Tina grabbed Bette’s hand and pushed it under the remains of her dress. Moaning desperately she pushed two of Bette’s fingers deep inside herself. Bette dropped her jaw in a gasp at the amount of wetness she felt there. It was already unbearably tight, Tina was about to blow.
Bette instantly curled her fingers hitting the spot she knew would unravel Tina in her arms. Tina sat back dropping her head as Bette sat up and laid her head on Tina’s chest. Tina wrapped an arm around Bette’s head and the other across her back, digging her nails deep into it when the sudden orgasm washed over her.
Tina let out a small whimper as Bette hugged her head, falling back onto the bed with her on top, before retrieving her fingers. Then all the shame and guilt came crashing back and Tina broke into hard sobs as Bette hugged her. She hugged her as tight as she could knowing that this would truely be a goodbye. Sweet and innocent little Tina, would be gone forever. And it was all her fault.
Tina sat up slowly and climbed off of Bette. She didn’t know how long they were sobbing together, but she was all cried out, there wasn’t a single tear left inside of her. With a cold mask and harsh eyes she stood up and went to the closet to change her clothes. Bette sat up slowly and watched her, not daring to say a word, she didn’t deserve anything, especially not a wonderful woman like Tina.
Tina was dressed in her jeans and shirt as she returned from the bathroom to grab her car keys.
Bette couldn’t just watch her leave, "T, pleas…"
"SHUT UP!" Tina screamed. There was such a despair, such an anger, such a darkness in her normally kind caring hazel eyes, Bette felt her heart was ripping out. "Don’t you fucking call me T!" Tina yelled surprised as new tears formed in her eyes, "you lost that privilege when you fucked another woman."
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WOW! Well now I get why you said these last two chapters were so hard for you to write! This was the one ep I haven’t been able to watch again because it was so painful to see the first time. Still you’ve done a wonderful job incorporating this into your story. Here’s to better times ahead for our favorite couple…. yes?
how difficult it must be to re-live it all again…that pain all at once
So sad, but really great update!
Brilliant chapter so intense, thanks ;D
DAMN this is so freaking good and love it. Please post more, thanks!
I’ve been bad about commenting, but I’m hooked on this story. I love the way you’ve written in scenes from the show and have expanded them to include your own thoughts. Although many of the flashbacks are difficult and sad, you’ve written them beautifully.
WOW! Bravo TB24, bravo! You’re one of the few authors on this site who actually have the guts to write about that scene and you did it brilliantly!
Brilliant!!! For me the breakup sex in the last episode of SE1 is the most difficult, painful but beautiful scene in the series and you’ve done a super job.. Loved it… I really APPRECIATE this story:-D Cant wait for more, thanks!
Kudos for tackling a difficult scene. Although, I have to say that was one of my most favorite of the series because of the brilliant acting. You reached it with brilliant writing! Bette may not like remembering this time, but she needed to. Can’t wait for more!
Very good. Respect. It’s not easy to write. PPS.
Wow, what an update. More, pleaaaaaassssssseeeeeee.
Intense is right.
Hard to read but well done.Thank you for the update.PPS
i love your story please post more thank you!!!!
It is true, some things are better forgotten
I agree with the others, amazing chapter and so emotional. But not my fav moment >.< PPS!
Just read both your updates on this story! WOW! Awesome update. thank you.
finally caught up, bloody brilliant as always. you really are great! nicely put. Bette and TIn ahave so much work to do but i’m sure they will get there.