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Bette stepped forward and hugged Tina who angrily pushed her away. Bette was appalled at the sudden violence of her normally calm lover, had she really hurt Tina so much that she would resort to thing she hates the most in the world? Violence?
Bette shook her head not knowing what to say, she settled for, "I’m sorry."
Tina’s face contorted in pain and anger. Bette had never seen anything like it, and she also never imagined that Tina’s hand would come flying through the air and slapping her right across the face.
Bette gasped and grabbed her face, hot tears spilling out of her eyes. Bette calmed her raging emotions, telling herself that she deserved all of this. She went in for another hug, whispering, "forgive me."
Before she could even finish her phrase, Tina lost it. In a rage of flailing arms, Tina yelled out, "fuck you! Fuck you! Fuck you!"
Bette struggled with her, trying to restrain the arms that were aiming at her face. But Bette only stopped the ones flying towards her face, she didn’t bother to stop the ones crashing against her ribs, stomach, and thighs. She deserved all of that.
Bette stumbled back during the struggle, trying to control the rage ridden Tina. Bette pushed Tina onto the bed oin her stomach and straddled her back, trying to hold her down.
"Fuck you, uhh!" Tina said weakly breaking into sobs as Bette pressed her body over her andheld her arms over her head.
"I love you," Bette whispered trying to kiss Tina’s cheek as Tina avoided her. She repeated the sentiment and tried the other side. Her breathing picked up as Tina started pushing her ass up to try to turn over. In a sudden surge of strength, Bette grabbed the back of Tina’s turqoise dress and ripped it in half, ignoring Tina’s screams of protest.
Bette broke into desperate sobs as she kissed Tina’s now exposed back, knowing that she would probably never get to see it again. She whimpered and sobbed, "I love you, you have to believe me!"
Putting her mouth on Tina’s ear she whispered, "I’m sorry." She moved her hand underneath Tina’s body feeling Tina’s nipples under her touch. "You have to believe me," she repeated trying to push her hand towards Tina’s center.
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WOW! Well now I get why you said these last two chapters were so hard for you to write! This was the one ep I haven’t been able to watch again because it was so painful to see the first time. Still you’ve done a wonderful job incorporating this into your story. Here’s to better times ahead for our favorite couple…. yes?
how difficult it must be to re-live it all again…that pain all at once
So sad, but really great update!
Brilliant chapter so intense, thanks ;D
DAMN this is so freaking good and love it. Please post more, thanks!
I’ve been bad about commenting, but I’m hooked on this story. I love the way you’ve written in scenes from the show and have expanded them to include your own thoughts. Although many of the flashbacks are difficult and sad, you’ve written them beautifully.
WOW! Bravo TB24, bravo! You’re one of the few authors on this site who actually have the guts to write about that scene and you did it brilliantly!
Brilliant!!! For me the breakup sex in the last episode of SE1 is the most difficult, painful but beautiful scene in the series and you’ve done a super job.. Loved it… I really APPRECIATE this story:-D Cant wait for more, thanks!
Kudos for tackling a difficult scene. Although, I have to say that was one of my most favorite of the series because of the brilliant acting. You reached it with brilliant writing! Bette may not like remembering this time, but she needed to. Can’t wait for more!
Very good. Respect. It’s not easy to write. PPS.
Wow, what an update. More, pleaaaaaassssssseeeeeee.
Intense is right.
Hard to read but well done.Thank you for the update.PPS
i love your story please post more thank you!!!!
It is true, some things are better forgotten
I agree with the others, amazing chapter and so emotional. But not my fav moment >.< PPS!
Just read both your updates on this story! WOW! Awesome update. thank you.
finally caught up, bloody brilliant as always. you really are great! nicely put. Bette and TIn ahave so much work to do but i’m sure they will get there.