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Archipelago
“I still have a lot more work to do, Tina. I’ll be home when I can,” Bette started. Tina started feeling old habits emerging on the other end of the line. She could feel Bette stressing over an all nighter already as she looked at Angelica in her rocker.
“You promised Angie you’d read to her tonight,” Tina protested hoping she might relent. Bette sighed.
“I think she’ll forgive me if I only miss one night, Ti. I’ll be home soon,” Bette answered. Tina gave up, said she’d see her soon and hung up. Bette walked through the rooms that currently displayed the Fall Collection. She trapsed past the tables being built, and the displays being assembled for a few pieces that had already been prepared. The CAC, despite the obstacles Franklin and the rest of the board were giving her, was really going all out for their Egyptian themed collection.
In the low light room Bette walked past a pedestal of green light. The statue was so out of place among all the acient artifacts strewn about the room. It was clearly not Egyptian but had come with the shipment of artifacts as the array of restoration tools suggested. The statue depicted two warriors in Roman battlement gear. One warrior was holding the other in his arms carrying him across an imaginary battlefield, the other warrior evidently having been hit by a mortal wound.
“I thought you might like that one,” Harold’s voice came softly from behind her. Bette turned and saw him approach slowly from the archway.
“It’s beautiful, but clearly not a part of the rest of the exhibit,” Bette pointed out. Harold came to a stop next to her and rubbed his chin.
“No, no it’s not. I uh had that one flown out especially. It’s one of those things you just have to have,” Harold said. His hand fell away and he locked gaze on the statue. “Tell me what you think? I’d love you’re opnion,” Harold asked.
Bette stared at the statue for a while. “Well, my first inclination would be showing a brave warrior carrying his fallen comrade off the battlefield, but I feel like there is something more to it,” she stated. She stuck out her hand and pointed, untouching and unwavering at the statue. “The face, it looks more solemn and hurt then brave and stoic.”
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Yay aussie ur back and i didnt have to wait!! Ok so now i have to read the story I’ll be right back.LOL
God, your good ! I can’t believe this is your first fic. You left us hanging with Shane/Carmen , I can’t wait to read the next one!! 5 stars!!!
great story,your one of the better fanfic writers i’ve came across, you seem to know the characters well. hope to read more soon
oh, and forgot to add, just a suggestion, and this is the only fault i could find, maybe leave a double space when you change scenes, i got a little confused
An Archipelago is a series of small islands surrounded by a huge body of water, luvs_the_l-word. I felt that information I gave were small islands surrounded by a bigger story.
RedFrog I shall put in Double Spaces next time since you believe it would allow the story to flow better. Thank you for the constructive criticism.
and i forgot to mention that your grammar was excellent!!
Okay so i lied, i wasn’t going to come right back but hey at least i came back to tell you how amazing this story is and just out of curiousity how did you come up with the title and what does it mean? i have a feeling that I will be asking that question over and over again. Can’t wait for your next installment please post soon!!!
i was reading it again (cuz i just cant get enough of ur stories) and i noticed something does the mysterious black book in the beginning have anything to do with the black book that jenny’s mom had? just another question and thanx for answering my other one i jus love ur titles!!