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Archipelago
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Harold laughed, “And I don’t, Ms. Porter. But love has always been one of my most favourite subjects.” He finally relented his gaze and smiled at Bette. “As I’m sure you can appreciate.” he continued, looking down at Bette’s mobile phone. Bette looked down at the phone and put it in her pocket. “Go home, Ms. Porter. It’s late,” Harold called walking out of the room.
Alice turned off her alarm clock. A big day already and she hadn’t even gotten out of bed. She thought of her events as she fumbled upright to her feet giving a huge stretch and yawn. She had an interview at 10, a lunch thing with Dana at 1, then she had to hurry off to plan her radio show which would air later that afternoon. After all that, she was meeting with Helena to go to some posh meet and greet thing she had been talking about for weeks.
Alice paused as she looked into the mirror. Lunch with Dana at 1. She questioned why she let herself agree to it. Dana had just rung her and asked. Alice had just answered and said yes.
“Great,” Dana had started. “I’m looking forward to seeing you.” Alice thought about that. Before she could take it back and make up some excuse not to see her for lunch, Dana had already hung up. Alice moved through her closet tossing things aside looking for her white crumpled blouse. Helena told her that she had been obssessing with Dana for a while now and it was probably a good idea to have lunch with her. To get her out of her system so to speak. Alice threw her clothes onto the toilet seat as she turned on the water.
“My relationship with Dana is fine,” Alice had protested. “It’s her I have a problem with.”
She washed her hair making little moehawks as she went. Her. She thought. Lara. The cutie Chef Lara. She didn’t really understand why she had hated her so. She had once even made sure Lara would go out with Dana. She chuckled over the memory of the whole gang sizing her up to see if she had any intrest in her one time best friend. She knew they were perfect for each other. What then, she thought, made her so obssessed with Lara. I mean Dana, she thought. Obssessed with Dana.
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Yay aussie ur back and i didnt have to wait!! Ok so now i have to read the story I’ll be right back.LOL
God, your good ! I can’t believe this is your first fic. You left us hanging with Shane/Carmen , I can’t wait to read the next one!! 5 stars!!!
great story,your one of the better fanfic writers i’ve came across, you seem to know the characters well. hope to read more soon
oh, and forgot to add, just a suggestion, and this is the only fault i could find, maybe leave a double space when you change scenes, i got a little confused
An Archipelago is a series of small islands surrounded by a huge body of water, luvs_the_l-word. I felt that information I gave were small islands surrounded by a bigger story.
RedFrog I shall put in Double Spaces next time since you believe it would allow the story to flow better. Thank you for the constructive criticism.
and i forgot to mention that your grammar was excellent!!
Okay so i lied, i wasn’t going to come right back but hey at least i came back to tell you how amazing this story is and just out of curiousity how did you come up with the title and what does it mean? i have a feeling that I will be asking that question over and over again. Can’t wait for your next installment please post soon!!!
i was reading it again (cuz i just cant get enough of ur stories) and i noticed something does the mysterious black book in the beginning have anything to do with the black book that jenny’s mom had? just another question and thanx for answering my other one i jus love ur titles!!