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Archipelago
Jenny fumbled with the phone. She was standing at the pay phone just outside the Planet. She knew if she didn’t call as she had the confidence it just wouldn’t happen. She let the metal cord slip between her fingers as she picked up the reciever. She watched the coins slide into the slot, her breath quickening. She felt the cool plastic and metal ear piece hit her pierced ears as her finger methodicly walked over the key pad. A tone, another tone, a click. “Hello?”
“Hi, mom. I was uh, wondering if I could,” Jenny caught herself and sucked up as much air as possible. Quickly she finished her sentence so she could pretend like it had never left her lips. “If I could come and visit for a couple of days.” Silently, in her mind she was begging her mother to say no. Something had to have happened that would make her mother say that she couldn’t come. A flood, a plauge, a death in the family. Something. Anything. Her heart leaped, however, when she got a resounding “Yes, of course dear,” echoing in her ears.
Tina snuggled into Bette’s arms as they listened to the radio. Bette had smiled and wrapped her arms a little more tightly around her lover.
“I’m so glad you decided to stay home today,” Bette kissed Tina. Tina followed the outline of Bette’s lips with her finger as she spoke.
“Well, I was shocked when you said you were staying home I thought it was too much of a good thing to pass up,” Tina answered. She sighed and placed another kiss onto Bette’s cheek. Maybe her worries had been unfounded. Maybe Bette wasn’t sinking back into her old routines.
Kit looked around the room where she had been told to wait for the doctor. The usual prep room, as it seemed. She had been in the room several times before and could probably name off all the pictures and charts that hung onto the cream white walls by heart. The respiratory system, a close up of the throat in a color coded plastic mould sat on the bench masked by two cabinets that hung precariously over them. A skeleton reminding her of a biology class in the distant past made her shiver as she sat on the all too familiar padded examining table. Her feet hanging in the air she began to swing them as she sat hump shouldered and sighing. The clock hangning on the wall in front of her ticked by slowly.
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Yay aussie ur back and i didnt have to wait!! Ok so now i have to read the story I’ll be right back.LOL
God, your good ! I can’t believe this is your first fic. You left us hanging with Shane/Carmen , I can’t wait to read the next one!! 5 stars!!!
great story,your one of the better fanfic writers i’ve came across, you seem to know the characters well. hope to read more soon
oh, and forgot to add, just a suggestion, and this is the only fault i could find, maybe leave a double space when you change scenes, i got a little confused
An Archipelago is a series of small islands surrounded by a huge body of water, luvs_the_l-word. I felt that information I gave were small islands surrounded by a bigger story.
RedFrog I shall put in Double Spaces next time since you believe it would allow the story to flow better. Thank you for the constructive criticism.
and i forgot to mention that your grammar was excellent!!
Okay so i lied, i wasn’t going to come right back but hey at least i came back to tell you how amazing this story is and just out of curiousity how did you come up with the title and what does it mean? i have a feeling that I will be asking that question over and over again. Can’t wait for your next installment please post soon!!!
i was reading it again (cuz i just cant get enough of ur stories) and i noticed something does the mysterious black book in the beginning have anything to do with the black book that jenny’s mom had? just another question and thanx for answering my other one i jus love ur titles!!