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Archipelago
“Going home,” Jenny started. Catching herself in explanation she continued, “for research. About my family.” Shane breathed a sigh of relief.
“As long as you’re coming back,” she relented. Jenny chuckled and nodded her head.
“Of course I’ll come back,” she went on. There was silence for a moment then quickly she decided to change the subject.
“So, um, Will. You’re a Carvington?” Jenny grasped for straws. Will shook her head.
“Relunctantly and expectingly, I am. Please don’t judge me too harshly for it,” Will joked. Jenny again flushed.
“I wouldn’t judge you,” Jenny meekily responded.
“Hey Alice, over here,” Dana waved happily as she patted a seat next to her. Alice crossed the Planet quickly and swiftly as she headed straight toward Dana. She found herself smiling the closer she got to her. “Hey,” Dana said as Alice sat down.
“Hey,” Alice answered back. Dana had already ordered herself a coffee which she had already given a taste. Foam clinging to her lip Alice smirked as she stared at her clueless friend. “Um you have foam,” Alice started. Dana furrowed her brow as Alice indicated to her top lip. Dana looked into a spoon and blushed.
“Oh, foam,” she answered wiping away the remnants of cappucino foam and cinnamon off her lip. She grinned and sat in a brief amount of silence till they both began speaking at once.
“How have you.. I’ve been.. It’s good to..” they laughed quietly at the hillarity of the situation.
“You can go first,” Dana offered.
“I’ve been good. I’ve uh, got some more responsibility with the magazine. I’m a bit more glorified than an “Ask Alice” girl now. I actually just got done interveiwing Robyn Hawthorne,” Alice explained. Dana, having had another sip of her coffee while Alice spoke, nearly choked.
“Wow, Robyn Hawthorne. Relationship specialist to the stars. How’d that go?” Dana asked inquisitively. Alice shook her head thanking a waitress as she walked away.
“Yeah, it was great. She’s a very deep, you know. Very deep. She gives a lot of good advice. I had to actually ask questions, though, not just like, what lip stick do you wear, or what’s you’re favorite restaurant, but actual questions. It was fun, as if I was a real journalist you know?” Alice responded enthusiasticaly. Dana leaned on her words trying to show Alice the most support she could in the akwardness.
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Yay aussie ur back and i didnt have to wait!! Ok so now i have to read the story I’ll be right back.LOL
God, your good ! I can’t believe this is your first fic. You left us hanging with Shane/Carmen , I can’t wait to read the next one!! 5 stars!!!
great story,your one of the better fanfic writers i’ve came across, you seem to know the characters well. hope to read more soon
oh, and forgot to add, just a suggestion, and this is the only fault i could find, maybe leave a double space when you change scenes, i got a little confused
An Archipelago is a series of small islands surrounded by a huge body of water, luvs_the_l-word. I felt that information I gave were small islands surrounded by a bigger story.
RedFrog I shall put in Double Spaces next time since you believe it would allow the story to flow better. Thank you for the constructive criticism.
and i forgot to mention that your grammar was excellent!!
Okay so i lied, i wasn’t going to come right back but hey at least i came back to tell you how amazing this story is and just out of curiousity how did you come up with the title and what does it mean? i have a feeling that I will be asking that question over and over again. Can’t wait for your next installment please post soon!!!
i was reading it again (cuz i just cant get enough of ur stories) and i noticed something does the mysterious black book in the beginning have anything to do with the black book that jenny’s mom had? just another question and thanx for answering my other one i jus love ur titles!!