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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 11
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Tina brought her lips to Bette’s ear, breathing heavily into it as she pumped her fingers in and out of her lover, increasing her pace with each thrust. When she pressed her thumb against Bette’s clit, she felt her lover’s inner walls tighten around her fingers. Bette was going to come.
"Look at me" Tina whispered, rubbing her lover’s clit and pumping her fingers in an out with a pace that quickly unraveled the brunette.
Bette struggled to do as she was asked, finally opening her eyes right before her orgasm hit. Her jaw dropped in a silent scream as her hips arched completely off the seat, holding Tina’s gaze after a wave of intense pleasure washed over her.
Bette let out a whimper and nearly screamed out as she came but Tina quickly covered the brunette’s mouth with her own and fed her a deep searing kiss. Tina worked her slender fingers inside her lover until all of the spasms died down, slowly and lovingly massaging between Bette’s legs.
When Bette came down from her high, she looked down to her mischievous lover and smiled. Tina returned the loving smile, tilting her head up for another kiss much like the one that started it all.
"That was so bad" Bette smiled, pressing the side of her head against Tina’s and whispering into her lover’s ear.
"There’s plenty more where that came from" Tina smirked.
"I love you" Bette pulled back to look her lover in the eyes, the love there was shining bright.
"I love you too"
They leaned in to kiss again just as the Rob’s voice boomed in their ears, startling them.
"Anywhere specific you want me to drop you off, ladies?"
Both women quickly sat up to right themselves as Bette’s shaky voice answered the man.
"Umm . . you can just take us back to the park, Rob. My car is parked there"
"Not a problem, Bette"
Tina brought her hands to her mouth to stifle a laugh and Bette tossed her a look of disbelief, pursing her lips to hide her own smile.
The ride back was relatively awkward, both women giggling to themselves and wondering if the Rob had heard their little . . interaction. Once they arrived back at the park, Bette was the first to get off the carriage, outstretching her arms to help Tina get down. She placed her hands on Tina’s hips as the blonde placed her own on Bette’s shoulders, falling easily into her lover’s arms. Bette slowly lowered Tina onto the ground, their noses slightly brushing in passing. With a smile, Bette leaned forward and rubbed her nose against Tina’s again before kissing the tip tenderly.
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Wow, this is getting so good. PPS
ava is just evil, she won’t get her way this time i hope, PPS
That was a *great* first date! Lol, @Hellbent & Merlion, I immediately thought the same thing about the hand-kissing! About Sam and Ava… they deserve whatever karmic ickiness that’s coming their way. Ugh. I really hope Tina’s trip to NY goes well, cos Bette seems like she’s in for some Ava-induced havoc in the interim. Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
Lovedthe chapter, but damn Ava is such a B***h I hope Tina is not that gullible to fall for anything she says aout Bette. PPS
I just want to slap AVA. Thank you for this story.
too bad sam, you had the girl before you got all screwed up with a horrible chick like ava. i’m sure if sam or ava are going to try and win their ex back but
Oh shit drama coming, please don’t give Bette and Tina too much drama, they are so cute and hot, love them. Please post more, thanks!
Okay I vote for a kill Ava club
Dammit!..Now Ava knew…Tina’s going to N.Y.C. …And you said “In my stories bad things happen to bad people”… …Can I make a suggestion?.. ..Well, goes like this “Ava is reading her text mess,totally unaware of her surrounding..then suddenly out of nowhere a “Taxi” speeding in her direction …then BAM!…..Ava is gone” ……uhmm?..think too familiar?… Welll…… ….^_^… …Need pps…cuz….I’m afraid….: (
Well, hopefully both Bette and tina will remember who they’re dealing with when the wrath of Ava enters their lives. Be strong ladies and kick her out the door!
😨 OMFG!!!!!!!
Think again bitch face! SUPER AWESOME POST!!!! …just wondering…the hand Rob kissed…LOL…could have been the one that was just inside Bette!!! lololololoud!!!!!!!!!!
Great update. Knew I was right about ava and sam. Now Bette and Tina have to be strong enough to throw her to the street when she shows up and call the police. And yes, let ava admit to Tina that she was with sam that day in her apartment. Then let those two get whatever is in store for them and let it hurt. They deserve it. Please keep Tina and Bette safe. Thanks for posting.
Please not too much drama.I hope our girls are strong.Thank you for the update.PPS
I think Ava has a death wish and an sure Tina will happily assist her with that wish Stupid cow.
Ava is a spiteful, cruel beeoytch.
Grr Ava u little fuck! SHES THE ONE WHO HAD THE AFFAIR WITH SAM FIRST!!! I hope Tina finds out the whole truth about Sam and Ava fucking around while she was with Sam and I hope both Sam and Ava get a good kick in the ass! Anyway love the story sweetheart ur an excellent writer and hav a big fan in me! PPS :D
i was right… it was ava in bed with sam… they both deserve each other… to bad now ava knows that bette and tina are together… i do like the idea of a taxi hitting her… great chapter… maybe tina can hire a horse and buggy and go through central park with bette… love this… pps
Whoa…. So it’s really Ava AND Sam!!! Oh dear God please grant Ava a bit of brain so she realized that she is the one who initiate the affair and may she is not going to do something stupid or harmful! .. I am curious how Heather finds out!! And also speaking of curiosity.. Liah… Would you please clarify that when Rob kissed Tina’s hand, it’s not the one which has been doing the .. Uhm, well.. You know! … :-p LOL.. Anyway.. I am so want Tina and Bette to find out the truth about Ava and Sam!! And since Bette has that kind of power to pull the string, maybe she can do something to ensure Tibette is ok ;-) hehe.. Thanks for another amazing update Liah!! Pining for your next posting! PPVS :-)
Oh, this is so good! I can’t wait! I can’t wait!