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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 11
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"Thank you for everything, Rob" Bette looked up and smiled at Rob who had tipped his hat to the two women.
"My pleasure, tell Kit I said hello. It was nice meeting you, Tina" Rob leaned over the edge of the carriage to take Tina’s hand in his and gently kiss the back of her hand. The blonde blushed slightly and smiled shyly at the polite man before taking her hand back.
"It was nice to meet you too, thank you"
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Bette and Tina quietly walked up to the blonde’s loft apartment building, holding hands and tossing each other an occasional loving glance. When they reached the elevator, Tina pressed the button to call it down as she smiled happily at the brunette.
"Bette, thank you so much for tonight. I had so much fun"
"I’m glad" Bette smiled and wrapped her arms around the blonde’s waist, linking her fingers and resting them on the curve of Tina’s rear, "And I want you to know that when you leave to New York, everything’s gonna be okay"
"I’m sure it will . . I’m just . . I’m gonna miss you so much" Tina’s voice broke at the end as she held Bette tighter, tangling her fingers in her lover’s thick curls.
"I’m gonna miss you too baby but don’t worry, those two weeks will fly by. You’ll be back before you know it" Bette smiled and kissed her lover tenderly on the lips as the bell to signal the elevator went off and the doors opened a second after. Bette gestured for the blonde to enter first, holding the doors open as she followed inside. From the second Tina told her about New York, Bette had already planned a surprise for the blonde. Though she didn’t want to see Tina leave, Bette was excited about what she had planned.
"You’re right. I mean . . we went without seeing each other for four months. We can hold out for two more weeks, right?" Tina said pressing the button for her floor as the doors closed behind them. She turned to Bette who was leaning against the elevator railing and eyed her lover suspiciously, "What?"
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Wow, this is getting so good. PPS
ava is just evil, she won’t get her way this time i hope, PPS
That was a *great* first date! Lol, @Hellbent & Merlion, I immediately thought the same thing about the hand-kissing! About Sam and Ava… they deserve whatever karmic ickiness that’s coming their way. Ugh. I really hope Tina’s trip to NY goes well, cos Bette seems like she’s in for some Ava-induced havoc in the interim. Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
Lovedthe chapter, but damn Ava is such a B***h I hope Tina is not that gullible to fall for anything she says aout Bette. PPS
I just want to slap AVA. Thank you for this story.
too bad sam, you had the girl before you got all screwed up with a horrible chick like ava. i’m sure if sam or ava are going to try and win their ex back but
Oh shit drama coming, please don’t give Bette and Tina too much drama, they are so cute and hot, love them. Please post more, thanks!
Okay I vote for a kill Ava club
Dammit!..Now Ava knew…Tina’s going to N.Y.C. …And you said “In my stories bad things happen to bad people”… …Can I make a suggestion?.. ..Well, goes like this “Ava is reading her text mess,totally unaware of her surrounding..then suddenly out of nowhere a “Taxi” speeding in her direction …then BAM!…..Ava is gone” ……uhmm?..think too familiar?… Welll…… ….^_^… …Need pps…cuz….I’m afraid….: (
Well, hopefully both Bette and tina will remember who they’re dealing with when the wrath of Ava enters their lives. Be strong ladies and kick her out the door!
😨 OMFG!!!!!!!
Think again bitch face! SUPER AWESOME POST!!!! …just wondering…the hand Rob kissed…LOL…could have been the one that was just inside Bette!!! lololololoud!!!!!!!!!!
Great update. Knew I was right about ava and sam. Now Bette and Tina have to be strong enough to throw her to the street when she shows up and call the police. And yes, let ava admit to Tina that she was with sam that day in her apartment. Then let those two get whatever is in store for them and let it hurt. They deserve it. Please keep Tina and Bette safe. Thanks for posting.
Please not too much drama.I hope our girls are strong.Thank you for the update.PPS
I think Ava has a death wish and an sure Tina will happily assist her with that wish Stupid cow.
Ava is a spiteful, cruel beeoytch.
Grr Ava u little fuck! SHES THE ONE WHO HAD THE AFFAIR WITH SAM FIRST!!! I hope Tina finds out the whole truth about Sam and Ava fucking around while she was with Sam and I hope both Sam and Ava get a good kick in the ass! Anyway love the story sweetheart ur an excellent writer and hav a big fan in me! PPS :D
i was right… it was ava in bed with sam… they both deserve each other… to bad now ava knows that bette and tina are together… i do like the idea of a taxi hitting her… great chapter… maybe tina can hire a horse and buggy and go through central park with bette… love this… pps
Whoa…. So it’s really Ava AND Sam!!! Oh dear God please grant Ava a bit of brain so she realized that she is the one who initiate the affair and may she is not going to do something stupid or harmful! .. I am curious how Heather finds out!! And also speaking of curiosity.. Liah… Would you please clarify that when Rob kissed Tina’s hand, it’s not the one which has been doing the .. Uhm, well.. You know! … :-p LOL.. Anyway.. I am so want Tina and Bette to find out the truth about Ava and Sam!! And since Bette has that kind of power to pull the string, maybe she can do something to ensure Tibette is ok ;-) hehe.. Thanks for another amazing update Liah!! Pining for your next posting! PPVS :-)
Oh, this is so good! I can’t wait! I can’t wait!