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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 11
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"What? I don’t want to press my luck on our first date" Bette teased with a smirk and received a "are you kidding me?" look from Tina. The blonde took three long strides to the door, grabbing the top of Bette’s and pulling the brunette inside. With a laugh, Bette kicked the door behind her and pulled Tina into her for a deep kiss. The blonde pulled away with a laugh of her own and ran off into the bedroom. After locking the door and removing her shoes, Bette followed Tina with a smile that promised nothing but absolute pleasure.
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"What the hell is wrong with you? Jesus Christ, its like you don’t know how to fuck anymore" Ava angrily pushed her lover off of her and climbed off the bed with a frustrated sigh.
"Look, I’m sorry okay? I just . . I have a lot on my mind"
"Oh, that’s real nice" Ava walked over to a pile of clothes on the floor and picked up a shirt, glancing at it before tossing it aside to pick up another one.
"What else do you want me to say?"
"Nothing, don’t say anything. Shit . . Bette complained a lot but at least she knew how to fuck me. I honestly don’t know how my cousin put up with you, all you do is whine, whine, whine" Ava tugged a loose fitting shirt over her head.
"Don’t you ever talk about Tina. God, I don’t even know how Bette tolerated with you let alone lived in the same house. I should have known better than to get mixed up with you"
"Fuck you" Ava glared at Sam who was now sitting up on the bed.
"Tried that remember, didn’t work" She said dryly.
"What’s wrong with you? You weren’t like this before" Ava crossed her arms over her chest.
When Sam failed to answer and averted her gaze, Ava eyed her suspiciously and took a cautious step forward.
"Oh my . . don’t tell me you’re still in love with her"
Ava had a known reputation of taking things she didn’t have, dating way back into her childhood with Tina. Since the very beginning, Ava had always felt like she was better than anyone else. Growing up she was spoiled rotten, beautiful and had everything money could buy, or everything her daddy could buy her. For years Ava felt like she had it all, never missing an opportunity to put an average looking Tina down. Ava had always seen herself as the most beautiful and everyone told her so, that is until Tina turned 13 and grew into her own. She outdid Ava in everything she once had excelled in, putting the woman to shame. Tina had beauty, she had the adoration of those around her and the even had the most beautiful voice anyone had ever heard. Where Ava lacked in brains, Tina outdid her there too.
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Wow, this is getting so good. PPS
ava is just evil, she won’t get her way this time i hope, PPS
That was a *great* first date! Lol, @Hellbent & Merlion, I immediately thought the same thing about the hand-kissing! About Sam and Ava… they deserve whatever karmic ickiness that’s coming their way. Ugh. I really hope Tina’s trip to NY goes well, cos Bette seems like she’s in for some Ava-induced havoc in the interim. Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
Lovedthe chapter, but damn Ava is such a B***h I hope Tina is not that gullible to fall for anything she says aout Bette. PPS
I just want to slap AVA. Thank you for this story.
too bad sam, you had the girl before you got all screwed up with a horrible chick like ava. i’m sure if sam or ava are going to try and win their ex back but
Oh shit drama coming, please don’t give Bette and Tina too much drama, they are so cute and hot, love them. Please post more, thanks!
Okay I vote for a kill Ava club
Dammit!..Now Ava knew…Tina’s going to N.Y.C. …And you said “In my stories bad things happen to bad people”… …Can I make a suggestion?.. ..Well, goes like this “Ava is reading her text mess,totally unaware of her surrounding..then suddenly out of nowhere a “Taxi” speeding in her direction …then BAM!…..Ava is gone” ……uhmm?..think too familiar?… Welll…… ….^_^… …Need pps…cuz….I’m afraid….: (
Well, hopefully both Bette and tina will remember who they’re dealing with when the wrath of Ava enters their lives. Be strong ladies and kick her out the door!
😨 OMFG!!!!!!!
Think again bitch face! SUPER AWESOME POST!!!! …just wondering…the hand Rob kissed…LOL…could have been the one that was just inside Bette!!! lololololoud!!!!!!!!!!
Great update. Knew I was right about ava and sam. Now Bette and Tina have to be strong enough to throw her to the street when she shows up and call the police. And yes, let ava admit to Tina that she was with sam that day in her apartment. Then let those two get whatever is in store for them and let it hurt. They deserve it. Please keep Tina and Bette safe. Thanks for posting.
Please not too much drama.I hope our girls are strong.Thank you for the update.PPS
I think Ava has a death wish and an sure Tina will happily assist her with that wish Stupid cow.
Ava is a spiteful, cruel beeoytch.
Grr Ava u little fuck! SHES THE ONE WHO HAD THE AFFAIR WITH SAM FIRST!!! I hope Tina finds out the whole truth about Sam and Ava fucking around while she was with Sam and I hope both Sam and Ava get a good kick in the ass! Anyway love the story sweetheart ur an excellent writer and hav a big fan in me! PPS :D
i was right… it was ava in bed with sam… they both deserve each other… to bad now ava knows that bette and tina are together… i do like the idea of a taxi hitting her… great chapter… maybe tina can hire a horse and buggy and go through central park with bette… love this… pps
Whoa…. So it’s really Ava AND Sam!!! Oh dear God please grant Ava a bit of brain so she realized that she is the one who initiate the affair and may she is not going to do something stupid or harmful! .. I am curious how Heather finds out!! And also speaking of curiosity.. Liah… Would you please clarify that when Rob kissed Tina’s hand, it’s not the one which has been doing the .. Uhm, well.. You know! … :-p LOL.. Anyway.. I am so want Tina and Bette to find out the truth about Ava and Sam!! And since Bette has that kind of power to pull the string, maybe she can do something to ensure Tibette is ok ;-) hehe.. Thanks for another amazing update Liah!! Pining for your next posting! PPVS :-)
Oh, this is so good! I can’t wait! I can’t wait!