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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 11
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Moments later, there was a soft knock on her door and Tina had to take a deep breath to steady herself. She glanced at herself in the full length mirror near the door, smoothing out her dress and slowly exhaling. She brought a shaky hand to the doorknob and turned, revealing a stunning sight that trapped all of Tina’s breath and words in her throat. She was speechless.
Bette was unbelievably gorgeous in her black, off the shoulder dress. It clung to her in all the right places, showing off her amazingly toned mocha skinned legs and giving Tina a teasing view of her delectable cleavage. Her wild curls framed her face beautifully and Tina found her eyes glued to Bette’s plump lips covered by sexy red lipstick. Tina noticed that it was the exact same shade of the red pumps Bette was wearing, a fact that completely floored her.
Fuck me . .
"So . . do I meet your expectations?" Bette’s husky voice teased the stunned blonde, placing a hand on the door frame beside her head and the other on the curve of her hip. Sexy was too light a word, Tina swallowed hard.
"I think that may be an understatement" The blonde whispered, her eyes closing of their own accord when Bette chuckled huskily and walked over to her, lust darkening her beautiful brown eyes. Tina sucked in a breath when she felt Bette standing no more than mere inches away, lowering her head and lightly grazing her nose on Tina’s right cheek.
"Look at you . . God, you look so beautiful" Bette whispered as she nuzzled her nose against Tina’s cheek, grazing the knuckles of her left hand slowly up and down Tina’s arm. She had intended to tease and play it cool but Tina’s exquisite beauty had Bette losing all of her control.
Her other hand slowly made its way to Tina’s waist before slipping around, her fingers splayed and immediately felt the texture of the lace design on the back of Tina’s dress. Bette’s lips had slowly made their way to Tina’s ear where she let out a soft, deep breath at her discovery, her eyes closing instinctively. Tina bit her lip at the soft moan she heard in her ear.
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Wow, this is getting so good. PPS
ava is just evil, she won’t get her way this time i hope, PPS
That was a *great* first date! Lol, @Hellbent & Merlion, I immediately thought the same thing about the hand-kissing! About Sam and Ava… they deserve whatever karmic ickiness that’s coming their way. Ugh. I really hope Tina’s trip to NY goes well, cos Bette seems like she’s in for some Ava-induced havoc in the interim. Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
Lovedthe chapter, but damn Ava is such a B***h I hope Tina is not that gullible to fall for anything she says aout Bette. PPS
I just want to slap AVA. Thank you for this story.
too bad sam, you had the girl before you got all screwed up with a horrible chick like ava. i’m sure if sam or ava are going to try and win their ex back but
Oh shit drama coming, please don’t give Bette and Tina too much drama, they are so cute and hot, love them. Please post more, thanks!
Okay I vote for a kill Ava club
Dammit!..Now Ava knew…Tina’s going to N.Y.C. …And you said “In my stories bad things happen to bad people”… …Can I make a suggestion?.. ..Well, goes like this “Ava is reading her text mess,totally unaware of her surrounding..then suddenly out of nowhere a “Taxi” speeding in her direction …then BAM!…..Ava is gone” ……uhmm?..think too familiar?… Welll…… ….^_^… …Need pps…cuz….I’m afraid….: (
Well, hopefully both Bette and tina will remember who they’re dealing with when the wrath of Ava enters their lives. Be strong ladies and kick her out the door!
😨 OMFG!!!!!!!
Think again bitch face! SUPER AWESOME POST!!!! …just wondering…the hand Rob kissed…LOL…could have been the one that was just inside Bette!!! lololololoud!!!!!!!!!!
Great update. Knew I was right about ava and sam. Now Bette and Tina have to be strong enough to throw her to the street when she shows up and call the police. And yes, let ava admit to Tina that she was with sam that day in her apartment. Then let those two get whatever is in store for them and let it hurt. They deserve it. Please keep Tina and Bette safe. Thanks for posting.
Please not too much drama.I hope our girls are strong.Thank you for the update.PPS
I think Ava has a death wish and an sure Tina will happily assist her with that wish Stupid cow.
Ava is a spiteful, cruel beeoytch.
Grr Ava u little fuck! SHES THE ONE WHO HAD THE AFFAIR WITH SAM FIRST!!! I hope Tina finds out the whole truth about Sam and Ava fucking around while she was with Sam and I hope both Sam and Ava get a good kick in the ass! Anyway love the story sweetheart ur an excellent writer and hav a big fan in me! PPS :D
i was right… it was ava in bed with sam… they both deserve each other… to bad now ava knows that bette and tina are together… i do like the idea of a taxi hitting her… great chapter… maybe tina can hire a horse and buggy and go through central park with bette… love this… pps
Whoa…. So it’s really Ava AND Sam!!! Oh dear God please grant Ava a bit of brain so she realized that she is the one who initiate the affair and may she is not going to do something stupid or harmful! .. I am curious how Heather finds out!! And also speaking of curiosity.. Liah… Would you please clarify that when Rob kissed Tina’s hand, it’s not the one which has been doing the .. Uhm, well.. You know! … :-p LOL.. Anyway.. I am so want Tina and Bette to find out the truth about Ava and Sam!! And since Bette has that kind of power to pull the string, maybe she can do something to ensure Tibette is ok ;-) hehe.. Thanks for another amazing update Liah!! Pining for your next posting! PPVS :-)
Oh, this is so good! I can’t wait! I can’t wait!