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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 11
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Tina’s hands made their way to rest on Bette’s hips where she grasped the material of her lover’s dress, her lips parting when she felt Bette’s lips on her neck. Tina instinctively tilted her head to the side, giving Bette better access to do as she pleased. The brunette smirked and oh so lightly licked a trail up Tina’s neck, her smirk growing when she felt Tina tighten the grip on her dress.
"Careful love, you’re going to wrinkle my dress"
Tina tried to loosen her grip but the feather soft kisses Bette planted on her exposed neck made it impossible. She felt her knees shake, almost as if they were going to give out. She held onto Bette for support, intoxicated with lust and completely lost to the moment.
Bette slowly pulled back from Tina’s neck to look her lover in the eyes, smiling at the flawless beauty there. Tina’s eyes were still closed, her lips parted as she struggled for breath. Bette gently grasped Tina’s chin and dipped her head down to feed the blonde a very soft kiss. Tina instantly moaned into Bette’s mouth, parting her lips and silently begging for a deeper kiss but the brunette relented. She knew if she deepened the kiss, neither would be leaving the apartment for the remainder of the night. It was so incredibly tempting but Bette had made plans, she could take Tina to bed later.
Bette slowly ended their magical kiss, feeling a familiar tingle touch her lips. She waited patiently with a smile for Tina to open her eyes, admiring her lover’s beauty even more once she saw those amazing hazel eyes. She lovingly moved the hair away from Tina’s face before placing her hand on her lover’s cheek.
"I could kiss you forever"
"I know the feeling" Tina said softly, smiling at the beautiful brunette.
"Are you ready to go?" Bette asked just as soft, her thumb slowly stroking Tina’s cheek.
Tina nodded and Bette smiled wide, a breathtaking smile that never failed to make Tina’s heart do a back flip.
"Good" Bette leaned in and gave Tina a soft kiss on her lips, "Lets go"
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Wow, this is getting so good. PPS
ava is just evil, she won’t get her way this time i hope, PPS
That was a *great* first date! Lol, @Hellbent & Merlion, I immediately thought the same thing about the hand-kissing! About Sam and Ava… they deserve whatever karmic ickiness that’s coming their way. Ugh. I really hope Tina’s trip to NY goes well, cos Bette seems like she’s in for some Ava-induced havoc in the interim. Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
Lovedthe chapter, but damn Ava is such a B***h I hope Tina is not that gullible to fall for anything she says aout Bette. PPS
I just want to slap AVA. Thank you for this story.
too bad sam, you had the girl before you got all screwed up with a horrible chick like ava. i’m sure if sam or ava are going to try and win their ex back but
Oh shit drama coming, please don’t give Bette and Tina too much drama, they are so cute and hot, love them. Please post more, thanks!
Okay I vote for a kill Ava club
Dammit!..Now Ava knew…Tina’s going to N.Y.C. …And you said “In my stories bad things happen to bad people”… …Can I make a suggestion?.. ..Well, goes like this “Ava is reading her text mess,totally unaware of her surrounding..then suddenly out of nowhere a “Taxi” speeding in her direction …then BAM!…..Ava is gone” ……uhmm?..think too familiar?… Welll…… ….^_^… …Need pps…cuz….I’m afraid….: (
Well, hopefully both Bette and tina will remember who they’re dealing with when the wrath of Ava enters their lives. Be strong ladies and kick her out the door!
😨 OMFG!!!!!!!
Think again bitch face! SUPER AWESOME POST!!!! …just wondering…the hand Rob kissed…LOL…could have been the one that was just inside Bette!!! lololololoud!!!!!!!!!!
Great update. Knew I was right about ava and sam. Now Bette and Tina have to be strong enough to throw her to the street when she shows up and call the police. And yes, let ava admit to Tina that she was with sam that day in her apartment. Then let those two get whatever is in store for them and let it hurt. They deserve it. Please keep Tina and Bette safe. Thanks for posting.
Please not too much drama.I hope our girls are strong.Thank you for the update.PPS
I think Ava has a death wish and an sure Tina will happily assist her with that wish Stupid cow.
Ava is a spiteful, cruel beeoytch.
Grr Ava u little fuck! SHES THE ONE WHO HAD THE AFFAIR WITH SAM FIRST!!! I hope Tina finds out the whole truth about Sam and Ava fucking around while she was with Sam and I hope both Sam and Ava get a good kick in the ass! Anyway love the story sweetheart ur an excellent writer and hav a big fan in me! PPS :D
i was right… it was ava in bed with sam… they both deserve each other… to bad now ava knows that bette and tina are together… i do like the idea of a taxi hitting her… great chapter… maybe tina can hire a horse and buggy and go through central park with bette… love this… pps
Whoa…. So it’s really Ava AND Sam!!! Oh dear God please grant Ava a bit of brain so she realized that she is the one who initiate the affair and may she is not going to do something stupid or harmful! .. I am curious how Heather finds out!! And also speaking of curiosity.. Liah… Would you please clarify that when Rob kissed Tina’s hand, it’s not the one which has been doing the .. Uhm, well.. You know! … :-p LOL.. Anyway.. I am so want Tina and Bette to find out the truth about Ava and Sam!! And since Bette has that kind of power to pull the string, maybe she can do something to ensure Tibette is ok ;-) hehe.. Thanks for another amazing update Liah!! Pining for your next posting! PPVS :-)
Oh, this is so good! I can’t wait! I can’t wait!