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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 13
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"Surprised?" Bette asked with a smile, her lips still tingling from Tina’s kisses.
"You have no idea" Tina beamed as she continued to play with Bette’s hair. It was as if she couldn’t stop touching her, convincing herself that her beautiful love was indeed real. It felt so much like a dream.
"I got you something" Bette smiled and pulled back, holding out the flowers and Teddy bear. Tina excitedly took them, hugging the bear tightly and admiring the beautiful flowers.
"Oh my God, Bette! These are beautiful, thank you" With a wide smile she leaned forward to kiss Bette deeply.
"There’s more" Bette smiled and gestured her head to the Teddy bear. Tina examined the bear carefully, her eyes widening when she saw the gold bracelet attached to the bear’s furry brown paw.
She placed the flowers down beside the large vanity mirror and carefully removed the bracelet, her expression was priceless.
"Oh baby . ."
It was a beautiful 24 karat gold charm bracelet with four charms attached, a diamond encrusted heart with a key beside it, a music note, a record disk and a paintbrush. Tina was in awe, she had never received anything so beautiful.
"Each charm is pretty self explanatory"
Bette beamed when she saw the expression on her lover’s face. Tina looked up from the bracelet and into Bette’s, her own tear filled as the brunette helped her put on the bracelet while she continued her explanation.
"The music note is for you of course, the record disk is for me and the paintbrush represents our love for art"
"And this one?" Tina whispered with a smile, tapping on the heart and key charm.
"This one . ." Bette said softly as she gently took Tina’s wrist, "This one represents the love I feel for you. I was so messed up and miserable before I met you, Tina. I lied to myself for so many years and kept the best parts of myself locked away . . but you changed all that, T. You unlocked my heart and set me free"
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Just the best. Ava needs her card punched. Some folks feel entitled.
Excellent update. I wish Tina had landed a punch on her as well. Thank you for this story.
How did one small women slip out of the bodyguards hands? They do need to be fired. Absolutely loved it. So much fun.
That was great, poor Tina got punch but glad Bette there with her. Ava is a bitch and hope someone kick her ass soon. Please post more, thanks!
What a psycho! think Bette will have to break up with Ava several times ha!I hope Bette and Tina don’t get into Ava’s game, because a person like her could be very manipulative.Excellent chapters and as always with your stories i keep wanting more more and more.PPVS
Great update. I love this story. Can’t wait for you’re next update. Have a nice weekend.
looks like tina or bette caught what ava was saying about sam… i am wndering if they say any thing about that… ava just about told tina she was the one who sam was with… any way… ava needs hers now… maybe a fewe lost teeth too, this way she can’t sing any more…now that would be her due justice… love this story… and it will be sunday here in NY in about 4 and 1/2 hours… :)
Ditto, ditto, ditto. Excellent chapter as usual. Never a dull moment with Ava around. She hung herself with her actions as Tina and Bette will make it official soon. Looking forward to more good adventures. Thank you!
i wish Ava got punched too and for a minute i thought she was going to spill the beans on her and Sam! Hope Bette get’s her next time with a nice right hook and a black eye! more soon pls thanks Liah!
Ohhhh heeelllll nnnooooo!!! *takes off earrings* I’m gonna beat the shit out of that Ava bitch myself!!! Lol
I thought they were already a couple? I can’t believe Ava was even mobile after sucker punching Tina. I would’ve been waiting out in the parking lot with a ski mask, bat and Cadillac. I read the Ava fight scene with Kanye West’s Flashing Lights and it totally went together. Thanks Miss Liah 😘
Can’t wait for it to come to light that Ava was the one sleeping with Sam! She needs to be totally humiliated after that stunt. Great uodate!
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Ooohh, Ava is going to absolutely get it, and it cannot come soon enough, even though I think she has a lot more crap and trouble-making up her sleeve. Once the truth about everything is out though… >:D On another note, everything else about Bette and Tina’s reunion was really sweet. Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
oo~~~ohh no!! I knew I have to save the update till Sunday! But even though I tried to read slower, I still reach page 11 before that!! … :-( that might lead me to another round :-p and dear lord how come Ava manage to go inside there!? And bypassed 2 bodyguards?! And punch Tina!? Ugh!! She must be so small* and slimy* so she managed it huh!? *pun intended* so looking forward to what happens next! :-) thanks Liah for the update and enjoy your weekend getaway! Will be waiting patiently for more update from you :-) btw when will Ava spill the beans about Sam!? And … Do you have a Jenny somewhere to match Ava’s craziness?!? You know.. ;-) LOL… PPVS :-)
OOOOOooow… can i have the permission please to sucker punch Ava? please?? god… i hate that biatch. but i have to admit, ava makes this story more juicier.it’ll bring out the ever protective Better Porter. wooohooo!i love this story. please post soon. =)
Bette is to week,to soft.Great story,great update.P.S. Have a nice weekend.
exciting chapter. seems like what ava said about sam and tina hasn’t sunk in yet. some more drama there. i can’t wait. i love a protective bette because she is really romantic
the mirror assault was pretty hot. lol