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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 2
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"Tina?"
Bette saying her name shouldn’t have affected her like it did but her feet stopped moving anyway. She froze in her spot right in front of Bette, the narrow hallway keeping them closer than they both knew was good for them. Tina could easily smell Bette’s intoxicating perfume from where she stood, all Bette had to do was push off the wall and their bodies would be pressed against each other.
Tina’s heart was racing, "Yeah?"
Bette thought she had in mind what to say but now with having Tina so close, all her thoughts were blank. She panicked inside, completely unsure of what to say. The usually smooth Bette Porter was about to become a stuttering mess.
"I-I . . you look . . really nice"
*What? Are you serious? Is that the best you could come up with?*
"Thank you" Tina answered softly, afraid to turn and look Bette’s way. She was facing forward and giving the brunette a view of her profile, her mind and heart swimming with the compliment she had just received.
Bette couldn’t help but smile at the way Tina was refusing to look at her by holding the same position. She saw the nervousness in Tina’s face even if she only had a partial view.
"You’re nervous"
"No, I’m not" But she was, her hands were shaking.
Bette’s smile widened as she stood up straight and pushed off the wall, whispering even though there was no one left inside the cafe and the band’s music played loudly.
"Look at me then"
Tina sucked in a breath and closed her eyes for a moment as Bette’s warm breath tickled her ear, she even felt the heat of the brunette’s body from being so close. Her heart was pounding against her chest as she slowly turned her body with her eyes and head pointed downward. Bette placed the side of her finger under Tina’s chin and slowly raised the blonde’s head, she chuckled slightly when she saw that Tina’s eyes were still closed.
"Open your eyes for me, Tina"
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WOW!!! waiting for more..and please get rid of Ava A.S.A.P
omg what’s gonna happen next? please post soon Liah! thanks! loving it :D
woowwww this is amazing story please again thank you i weally enjoy it!!!!
Bette was planning to propose to Ava? Oh man. I hope she doesn’t go through with that, it’d be an utter disaster. Even if she never tries to explore anything with Tina, Bette should start listening to what her brain and heart are telling her. And in Tina’s situation, something is clearly up with Sam. She’d better figure it out. Everyone seems to be settling with their rather unhappy lot, but fear is a powerful de-motivator. Love the story so far, thanks Liah! :)
Love AU Tibette fanfics. Ava needs to go, lol. Tina’s Sam too, I don’t know if she is a “bad guy” like Ava, but her behaviour seems suspicious.
I know a guy who “takes care of problems” if catch my drift. Ava could easily be left in this chapter, just let me know. This was another awesome post. I love the chemistry and you did a great job portraying it. I also love the chemistry between the gang. Okay, I love everything about everyone except Ava. I can tell that Ava is going to be a pain in my ass. Can’t wait for the next post. Thank you Miss Leah😘
go for it Bette,Ava sucks.Anyways Tina is much much better!! Please Post soon..
Oh soooo good. PPS
Propose?! No Bette, don’t do it. Maybe Ava will lose her voice and quick singning and move away.
Oh this is turning out to be one fantastic story!!! Can’t wait till the next chapter
‘I have big plans for these two and it’ll get good’ – its ALREADY good :)
…Damn..this is awful…”somehow felt that if she could be everything that Ava wanted her to be, then maybe their relationship stood a fighting chance.”…..I think if that’s all the relationship is to either one of them.. …No used to be in one…..I’m sad for Bette…I’m wondering ..why she’s like this? What had happened?… thanks for the update.
oh please DON”T propose to someone so toxic. I have no idea why Bette would love – GASP does she even known what real love is at this point? – Ava. Ava is so self-centered. I hope at least Sam is not such a horrible person to Tina even though I would like Bette and Tina together but at least one of them deserves to be treated good. I don’t like the idea of Alpha bette being wuss because of anyone …well except for tina of course. :)
You know Liah you could have written the l word yourself and it would have been better than the mess IC made lol I just love your stories you capture the emotion so well I have to mentally prepare myself for a ride haha
dammmmmmmmm… eva needs to go and fast… maybe she could hook up with sam… lol… love this…pps
Yay!! Another update from Liah!! *🎶lalalala…🎶* :-) Thanks Liah!! you just brighten my day! :-) Though the story made me feel sorry for pathetic Bette who was gonna propose to someone who clearly is manipulative, not care about her and OmG! Not even close to love at all!! Argh! … Is Bette so desperate so she just take whatever the devil’s offered her!? I think being single is much better than that!!! I hope something messy would happen and let there be hurricane and storm between ava and bette/tina and sam… as the sun will shine brightly on the blue sky afterward.. For a new day for Tina and Bette :-) LOL… Pardon my impatience as you are right – that it’s so tempted to place a kick to someone’s @$$ here!! PPVS! :-)
Bye,bye Ava.Great story.Thank you for the update.
Oh god damn it Ava, hope someone will take her away, maybe Helena can do that and where the heck is Helena, we need her here ahahha. Damn poor Bette and Tina, hope they can be together soon. Please post more, thanks!