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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 21
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Tina’s eyes once more drifted back to Sam so that both women understood she wasn’t speaking to Ava. Her eyes were glossy with tears but she never shed any, Tina was done crying.
"We’ve moved on and if either of you ever really loved us at all, you’ll respect that"
Alice now joined by Shane watched from the window as the scene unfolded. Shane managed to find a milk carton for them to stand on. Both of them were in complete awe, neither having anything to say. They knew that once Tina walked through the door, they should have given the trio some privacy but couldn’t bring themselves to look away.
They watched as Tina took a step back, lingering for a moment longer before turning around and walking away. A few minutes later they heard the rumbling of Tina’s car and watched it drive by the alley, not even giving a second thought to the car trailing close behind. Both were still reeling from the intense confrontation they had just witnessed.
After another minute or two, Alice broke the silence, "Shane?"
"Yeah?"
"How do we get down?"
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"Kit, have you seen Tina?"
Kit turned around to see Bette walking over to her with a worried look on her face.
"Hey baby sis. Um, well I did earlier but she left to take care of something"
Bette sighed in disappointment, "Did she say what it was?"
"No, she didn’t I’m sorry. I just know she got a phone call she didn’t sound too happy about and ran off"
Frustrated, Bette ran her hands through her curly hair, "Fuck, I have to find her. I really fucked up Kit. I have to fix it"
Kit pursed her lips, "I know, she told me and I have half a mind to slap you upside the head for that dumb shit"
"I know, I know. Don’t remind me. I tried to wait until she came back home but I couldn’t take it anymore"
With a defeated look, Bette walked over to a nearby chair and slumped down on the cushioned seat. Kit watched her baby sister with her hands on her hips as she tried not to laugh at how cute Bette looked pouting in her seat. She reminded Kit of when they were younger, very much resembling the little girl who sulked whenever she didn’t get her way.
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I hope Tina is okay and about the ex…there’s only one way to get deal with an ex and that’s too look hot and sexy.
I so love this story and will be very sad to see it end. Can’t wait to read the next update. thank you.
Great drama on all fronts. Thanks for the update. Maybe now Ava and Sam can see each other for who they really are and be honest with their hearts. Thanks for the wonderful story.
Finally Ava does something right. Great update, thanks
I know how that goes with family, they come through for you during your darkest hour. I love the revenge fashion show for the ex. If its any consolation, I would’ve down to hanging out with you if we didn’t live on opposite coasts 😉 thanks for the awesome post.
Tina gets lied to, finally knocks her cousin out *fist pump* and then a crazy fan tries to kill her? Oh i could just hear Tina shout right before she crashed, “I fucking hate women!” hahaha-I really love this story and your writing. thank you, thank you
heart breaking, good to see that maybe things can clear the air with all the drama. hope its two chapters rather than one for this! love this story.
Ava is at least seeing what she’s done wrong and is starting feel remorse. Maybe Sam is good for her. Ava donating blood is the first unselfish thing she’s done. It’s the first step on a long road to Ava’s redemption, if there is any. Poor Tina, her run of bad luck seems to be continuing… she finally gives Ava the punch in the face the woman’s been begging for, and then some new and different whack job nearly kills her! Things can only improve for her and Bette after this… hopefully! ;) Thanks for the post, Liah. :)
stupid crazy fan. that was scary. hope there is a happy ending even for same and selfish ava. it’s going to be tough to recover after an accident…perhaps that could stretch the story! lol anyway, i’m with teegirl….looking hot and sexy in front of an ex is great. you go girl
Please let Tina be ok
Great update. Happy that Tina got her chance to slug ava and to tell them both off. Both of the idiots needed to hear what Tina said to them. I can’t believe you would let anything happen to Tina now. Maybe ava will go back into her hole after the blood transfusion works and Tina’s condition is on the upswing. Thanks for posting.
Great story.Ava did at last something good.
so very exciting of the story,PPS!
Duh! … O neg? Just take mine! No need Ava!! … 😒 … Huh! I kinda upset that Tina is so unlucky! it’s a great thing that she can hit Ava and hopefully it was strong enough to crack some of her bone so hopefully whatever Tina said can be processed and get into her tiny brain! … Looks like Sam got the closure she needed after what was being told straight to her face. So… Let Tina be OK and let them be happy – with the peace of mind ;-) anyway thanks for the update Liah!! :-) so looking forward to more and more and more updates from you ;-) lol