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As Good As It Gets – Chapter 4
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"Yeah . . . I was about to suggest the same thing" Bette softly smiled as she lightly grazed her thumb over Tina’s lips, "We need to really think things through. You need to do what’s right for you and . . . I need to do what’s right for me"
Tina nodded her head slowly and seductively licked the pad of Bette’s thumb before kissing it, never breaking eye contact. It was a tease she couldn’t resist. A tease that was really testing her resolve, she was dying for another kiss. Bette obviously felt it too because her eyes widened right before she groaned.
"If you do that again, I might just take back everything I said"
Tina chuckled lightly, feeling a tingle run down her neck when Bette’s hand slowly made its way passed her cheek to cup the back of her neck. Tina shivered as Bette massaged the skin and played with her hair.
"Then you need to stop doing that too"
Bette chuckled at Tina’s breathless plea and reluctantly pulled her hand away. The door to the elevator began to close and Bette quickly extended her hand over the sensor to prevent the doors from closing before looking back to Tina.
"You better get up there before your ride leaves"
Tina smiled softly, her hands had somehow made their way to Bette’s stomach where she had been gripping the material of the brunette’s shirt rather tightly. She used it to her advantage by tugging it and pulling Bette in for one last kiss. It was softer than the one before, much more slower and sensual but it was satisfying all the same.
They gently broke apart and said their goodbyes, Bette watched as Tina got into the elevator before making her way back toward her car. The night had turned out nothing like either woman would have thought. There were so many thoughts running through their mind that weren’t there before, the ones that had been there were now much bigger.
Bette knew that she was in for a rough ride up ahead but for the time being, she couldn’t wipe the smile from her face when she thought back to her kiss with Tina. Her lips still tingled and it made her smile that much more. Kissing Tina was certainly like everything Bette hoped it would be and more. She just hoped that there would be more kisses to follow their first.
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Neither one is married to their GFs so break it off as gently as possible and then see where their relationship can go. It may burn fast and furious and then flame out or it might be the “Eternal Flame”.
wowowow soo romantic and beautiful story like this i love it thank you!!!
Thanks for the posting… Wow! I wish that relationships didn’t get into the desperation phase when their time of completion was over.I know that letting go is hard but when the relationship has come to its end being miserable is truly not the way to go. Holding on to something that isn’t there is a cruel thing to do to yourself. Life is too short to be so miserable. Let go to Sam, Tina! Let go of Ava, Bette. Its okay to do that as being miserable is not evolving. guess maybe its a fear that everyone will look at us as being failures in a relationship, but honestly that isn’t what the truth of it is. Others come into our lives for a reason, a season or a lifetime… to reflect back to us parts of ourselves… our past, our present or a possible future.
Oh, WOW!!! This will be the forever kind of love with these two when they finally get together. Please let them both know somehow that their girlfriends are having affairs and they don’t have to be feeling guilty to break off their respective relationships. They are so right for each other. Awesome chapter. Thanks.
Hey now! My lips are tingling and I wasn’t the one being kissed. Nice update. Can’t wait for more.
That was awesome and can’t wait to see Bette dump Ava and Tina dump Sam. Please post more, thanks!
loving it! I just think if Tina is so eager to get Bette to realize that Tina’s is better for her than Ava then Tina should not seem guilty about Sam, I mean she shouldn’t seem unsure herself. Hope to read more soon Liah! Thanks :D
I hope Bette has now gotten all the encouragement she needs to do the right thing and end it with Ava. Tina has some thinking of her own to do. In the mean time, Helena needs to give up with the pursuit of Tina already. But… if she waits around long enough, she can be there to “console” Ava. They would likely be a perfect match. ;) Thanks for the post, Liah! :)
still with your big smile, just like us when we see each new chapter, your story is amazing and well written. wait to read more, please still post often! :*
Amazing update love your story.Right direction.PPS
There is an analogy that I have in mind for Bette and Tina’s situation but words fail me right now. I love where you have taken this story, I feel like you’re trying on something new. You’re doing a great job conveying Bette’s turmoil, and I love that you made Tina intuitive enough to pick up on it. The fact that she had the audacity to bring it up shows immense courage. I’m glad that they’re taking time apart to evaluate their own relationships. Doing the right thing in other words. I have a question for you, do you feel that a story is easier to write if sides are black and white and Bette and Tina’s? They’re both unhappy in their current relationships and should be with each other. Would they have felt the same way about each other if they were happy with their girlfriends? Ok that’s 2 questions but I just love how you weave your stories. You really do love us. Thank you for the awesome post Miss Liah. I hope I don’t offend you with my questions.
I just read all 4 updates on your new story. I LOVE IT! I can’t wait to read more. Thank you for this excellent story.
ava – is she like 15?? totally immature.
Oh this just getting more, and more interesting . I can’t wait to see how each will handle this situation. And how they deal with they feel about each other. What will each decide and will they end up together . Can’t wait post soon
I’m happy cuz It’s a long post… But I wanna cry!….Dammit!..Lets just kick Ava out A.S.A.P.! And bring Sam with her…Please..??
Really enjoyed it
I really really love this story! You have an awesome way of building this up!! Can’t wait to see what happens next!
What a beautiful chapter! Loving it Liah!
WOOOOOW. That kiss was better than anything I could have expected! I love this story, so full of emotion I can feel it all over my own being. Amazing writing :)