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At first sight
Story written on February 19, 2011 by kins40.
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"When you touch me………….it feels good!" she said softly.
Bette swallowed. She remained silent. She could not slip up again. Her heartbeat picked up speed and she found it hard to breathe. She needed to remove herself from Tina’s side.
She moved to sit up and Tina moved with her. They were now kneeling in front of each other atop the bed.
Bette reached out and brushed at Tina’s cheek to wipe away the rest of the tears. Tina closed her eyes and felt her skin tingle where the tips of Bette’s fingers had touched her. She was so gentle, patient, so incredibly understanding of her and her stupid fears. Tension was building up in her stomach.
"Bette…….I don’t want to be scared anymore!"
Bette was now observing the blonde. She had not yet spoken.
Tina moved closer to her. She spoke very quietly, "Bette…….I ……I don’t want to wait anymore".
Bette was still silent, she had practically stopped breathing. A lump had formed in her throat, she desperately tried to swallow it.
"Bette……..make love to me……please!"
"T…….Tina!" Bette breathed out.
Bette did not want to hesitate. Tina wanted her. A nervous knot had developed in her stomach. For the first time she did not know how to approach the situation. She leaned in all the while keeping her gaze on the blonde, awaiting an adverse reaction. It did not come.
As their lips brushed together, Bette opened her mouth slightly and tasted Tina’s lips with her tongue. The contact sent electricity through both of them. They both moaned at the same time, and Tina put her hand on Bette’s thigh to hold on.
Bette reached up with her hands and held the sides of Tina’s face, pushing her fingers into her hair. Tingles swept over the blonde’s scalp, and her fingers gripped the cloth covering Bette’s leg. Her other hand was clenching in the blanket, but she quickly let go and brought it to Bette’s waist, sliding her palm around and up her thinly covered back.
As they gasped for breath, the kiss broke. Tina’s hands rested on Bette’s thighs, and Bette’s hands descended to the blonde’s shoulders in a slow stroking movement.
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How terrifying to fall and not be able to see
More please!
Oh my gosh…you did not let this happen!! Please bring Bette back with the car quickly! Please tell me that some good can come of this! I can hardly wait for more! Thank you!!
I hope Bette sees that Tina is need of her help. Please don’t let Tina be really hurt of die.
This is how life always happens isn’t it. You have the best days of your life and then you fall. Will Tina’s sight come back from this hit? Will she like what she physically sees when she sees Bette? Will any of that even happen? Only you can answer my many questions. Please answer them soon. This is such a great story.
Please give us another great chapter. Can’t believe you left us with Tina bleeding on the ground. I hope she regains her sight.
I’m at a loss for words. Wow. That was *good* Going on your A/N, I’d expected it to be something like Tina getting so scared she called Dana to come and get her or sth like that. Anyway, I hope Bette is able to help Tina by bringing her to the hospital in time. Please don’t kill Tina!
I btw must admit that what ladydove said went through my mind for nanosecond as well – will Tina regain eyesight? That would have quite the impact, her whole life is built on the fact that she’s blind now and although she’d probably be happy to see again, it will also feel so strange and maybe in those first few days or months she would long to be blind again. Anyway, I don’t know nearly enough about science, biology or anatomy to know whether that’s even possible with blindness.
That was both beautiful and heartrending. Whatever happens, I wish this story would go on, and on, and on and on….
Ladydove, I have the answer to one of your questions: “Will she like what she physically sees when she sees Bette?” Come on, my friend… I really have no idea what Kins has in store for us, but one thing I know for certain is that if Tina ever recovers her sight, she might surely go blind again because of Bette’s dazzling beauty… Don’t you agree? ;) Thanks a lot for the update Kins, and please let Tina be okay. K
Oh damn, please tell me you already have the next chapter ready to post. Please make Bette look up and see her lying there bleeding. Maybe this will be the shock to the system that will restore her sight. Personally, I think the force of the airbag hitting her in the face is what caused her blindness and now the force of the fall and hitting her head will cause her to see again, hopefully. Bette please look up the sidewalk for Tina or at least get out of that car and go look for her, she has already been gone to long. Great update. Thanks for posting. PPVVS
OMG,please….Let them be o.k.They suffered enough.Great story.Thank you for the update.
The trust that Tina has with Bette is just beautiful. I hope something good comes out of the fall Tina just had. Please post soon.
Awesome fic! Your descriptions of blind people’s world are thorough and heartfelt, thanks.
i was wondering how you were going to have tina fall and hit her head… and hopefully her eyesight returns… love this story..pps
OMG Kins40…! You left us here?!? So cruel…! LOL thanks for another great chapter :-) I’m looking forward to know what happen next..PPVS. Btw still can’t believe Bette let Tina walk by herself on that condition (slippery, raining, etc) regardless how familiar Tina is with her place, however … I believe you won’t let something bad happen, right?? :-) PS: call me silly, but after you left us on the ending of previous chapter, I thought Tina miraculously gain her vision back. But now.. Would it happen?? …. Anxiously waiting for your next post :-)
OMG u leave us again ahhah. Please let Tina be ok, get Bette back and help Tina. Please post more, thanks!
Good Golly! What more can happen to poor Tina? PPS!!
Are you killing me here?.. You’ve melted me like an Ice Cream in their first time “together”..And after that?..You’ve put a knife in my chest for doing this to Tina?… OH MAN…Now you have no choice but to update!…I want to see if she’s ok ..Or at least this accident can help bring her eye sight again? pps?…