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Patricia: Yes, Mom. Daddy is letting me help.
She smiled widely. Tina smiled back. Suddenly the phone rang.
Tina: Oh, I will take that.
She walked over to the phone and picked it up.
Tina: Hello?
Bette: Hello, its Bette.
Tina felt herself getting nerves. Eric wouldn’t get it was Bette, right?
Tina: Oh, hi. How are you?
Bette: Good. And you?
Tina: Very good. Why are you calling?
She knew exactly why Bette was calling but she didn’t want to let Bette know that.
Bette: I found your earing. Do you want to pick it up?
Tina: Yes. But I will call you back, okay? I’ve got some stuff to do.
Bette: Okay. Good. Bye then.
Tina: Bye.
She hung up and looked at Eric who didn’t seem to care who she had been talking to. The rest of the family was now sitting at the table waiting for Tina to come and join them. She smiled and sat down and began to eat.
Tina: Wow, its delicious guys.
Nathaniel: I made the toast and I made the juice!
Eric: Yes you did champion.
Patricia: I helped mommy!
Tina: You three did a great job.
She smiled at her kids and her husband.
Eric: So, Tina… Who called?
She heard in Eric’s voice her DID care. Tina had to think fast.
Tina: Oh, someone from work. Is it okay if I go over there later and help her with some business?
Eric gave her a look.
Eric: Its Sunday so I have to drive Nathan to football. What will I do with Patricia?
Tina: Well, I could take her with me, it’s no problem.
Eric: Okay then. Just be back before King and I return.
Eric called Nathaniel King sometimes. It was kind of his nickname… Tina found it a little weird but she didn’t dare to say anything about it.
Tina: Okay, sweetie.
They ate and talked with the kids and for just half an hour everything seemed okay and normal. When they had cleaned, Tina wanted to go to the Gallery and see Bette. She had thought about her the whole breakfast even if it seemed like she had only eyes for Eric, she was constantly thinking how it would be if Bette would be in Eric’s place. Tina shook the thought out of her head and went to get Patricia ready.
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Wow! I have to say that it’s sad what happened to Tina and I want to see Eric in jail forever! He said that he loved her and he raped her… Monster! Love the story!
Wow what a story. It’s official, I’m addicted. I hope Eric gets what he deserves! I also hope Nathaniel gets to do ballet too.
I hope the WEHO dykes kick his ass and abuse him so he can know what it feels like. Put him in jail and throw away the key.
Brilliant story, well written. PLease tell me that Tina gets her son! Can’t wait for the next chapter. Its such a powerful plot line.
Wow, that was intense! I’m impressed! I feel so bad for Tina and especially for Patricia…
DAMMMMM.. that bastard… ok now lets nail his balls to the wall… will read on when i get some more time… (I’m at work…lol…)
Great story.Let Eric suffer.PPS.
What happened to tina and patty was a hard read. I would love to see Eric in every aspect of pain for the rest of his life and beyond that. Great job on the story. You got me.
Great story! Can’t wait to see how it’ll continue, sad that Patricia was molested, there’s nothing worst than that. Please post soon, again very interesting story!
What a tragic begining to a beautifully written story. Keep up the good work.