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Awful
Tina: Patty, let’s get you ready.
Patricia: Okay Mommy.
Patricia was still in her PJ’s and Tina washed the little girl’s face and hands and then dressed her in a jean and a red sweater and little black shoes. She also put on her daughters pink coat and zipped it up.
Tina: So, you are ready.
Tina was already dressed and she was ready to go out. She walked back into the living room with Patricia right behind her.
Tina: So, do I get a hug from my favorite boy?
She asked her son. Nathaniel smiled and ran over to his mother. She hugged him.
Tina: Good luck with the match, baby.
Nathaniel: I’m going to win, Mommy! Daddy told me I’m going to win.
Tina: You will baby.
She let go of her son and walked over to her husband. She found that she had to give him a hug or something just to not let him suspect she was actually dying to see Bette and do something without him, watching her. (the last few weeks Eric had been almost spying on her… she felt a little scared but the last 3-4 days it had gotten a little better, he trusted her again.) She walked up at him and hugged him.
Tina: I’ll see you when you get home.
Eric: Okay. Just give me a kiss before you go.
Tina didn’t really want to kiss him but she pulled herself together and thought ‘let’s just get it over with.’ She leaned in and gave him a soft and sweet kiss on the lips.
Eric: Okay, love you. Bye.
Tina: Bye.
She couldn’t say she loved him again… One time a day was the maximum. She took her daughter’s hand and walked out of the door. When they reached the car she and Patricia got in and drove a few blocks before Tina stopped the car and pulled her cellphone out. She dialed the Gallery’s number.
Bette: Hello, Bette Porter Gallery.
Tina: Bette? It’s Tina… Kennard.
Bette: Oh, hi.
Tina: Can I come over? For my earring?
Bette: Yes, that’s no problem.
Tina: My daughter is with me I hope she is allowed.
Bette: Off course. No problem…
Tina: Okay, see you soon.
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(34 votes, average: 4.18 out of 5)
Wow! I have to say that it’s sad what happened to Tina and I want to see Eric in jail forever! He said that he loved her and he raped her… Monster! Love the story!
Wow what a story. It’s official, I’m addicted. I hope Eric gets what he deserves! I also hope Nathaniel gets to do ballet too.
I hope the WEHO dykes kick his ass and abuse him so he can know what it feels like. Put him in jail and throw away the key.
Brilliant story, well written. PLease tell me that Tina gets her son! Can’t wait for the next chapter. Its such a powerful plot line.
Wow, that was intense! I’m impressed! I feel so bad for Tina and especially for Patricia…
DAMMMMM.. that bastard… ok now lets nail his balls to the wall… will read on when i get some more time… (I’m at work…lol…)
Great story.Let Eric suffer.PPS.
What happened to tina and patty was a hard read. I would love to see Eric in every aspect of pain for the rest of his life and beyond that. Great job on the story. You got me.
Great story! Can’t wait to see how it’ll continue, sad that Patricia was molested, there’s nothing worst than that. Please post soon, again very interesting story!
What a tragic begining to a beautifully written story. Keep up the good work.