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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 11: THE DARE
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Alice: “are you going to give up so easily? You are not afraid of Aaron right?”
Tina: “no…”
Alice: “then, you should be there, if he and his people step on your shoes now, they will always do the same…, besides, you’ll see Dr. Porter there…, no, don’t say a word…, you know how she feels for you and she knows your feelings too”
Tina: “I treated her very badly, she must hate me now”
Alice: “hmm, she may be hurt but she doesn’t hate you, and don’t fear her, so, please, show Porter also that you are not afraid of her…”
And here she is, wearing a very short and tight pants and a sleeveless blouse with a broad neckline and high heels sandals. She remained standing for a couple of minutes, taking the opportunity to exhibit herself and show that she is not scared of anything and anybody. As soon as she reaches her table where her name was labeled; she felt someone’s sight on her, even if she didn’t want to see, she raised her head and gaze.
In the other side of the dancing floor, close to the organizers’ table was located the central building employees sector, and in one of the first-row table, Dr. Porter using her mini binoculars was observing her, no that she needed them to seek, but the motion of the gadget in Porter’s face showed that the brunette was checking her from head to toe. Controlling herself Tina also eyed her, that gorgeous body; the brunette was wearing a short top with thin straps and a very short skirt with high heel beach shoes, at the sight, the chair of the mediation committee looked delicious. However her enthusiasm plunges when by her surprise she sees her sitting surrounded by other girls, and even Dana was among them.
In the other side of the room, Bette was sitting with Jodie and Kelly in one side and Shane and Carmen and Dana in the other, suddenly James drop by the table and sat close to Bette who making a sign pointed them across the dancing floor; all of them but Jodie and Kelly looked at Tina.
Shane: “is that who I think it is?”
Bette: “yes she is…, hmm, what do you think?”
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Hola proteonomics me encantó el capítulo siempre tus historias me dejan con ganas de leer más gracias buen capitulo esperando que subas el otro
Hola Escorpion:
Feliz Año Nuevo.
Gracias por tus palabras, y por seguir esta historia. Yo he estado subiendo los capitulos especialmente por los lectores que como tu me lo han pedido, por suerte he estado de vacaciones. Pero mis vaciones de fin de año estan terminando y mi tiempo disponible para escribir es menor.
Yo espero subir otro capitulo en dos semanas, pero si puedo lo hare antes.
Gracias de nuevo por tu comentario y tu apoyo.
Tina…Tina. How could you postpone a night with Bette after that dance, walk on the beach and make out session? This “slow ….slowly” business is driving me to the showers! Get together with Bette and tell her everything and allow Bette to tell you everything. So many of things you could help each other with. So many mutual goals you could accomplish. You need to be together!!!
Great Story… the Dare was nothing like I thought it would be. This was an impressive scenario. and your writing was great. This story is coming along nicely. Most of Tina’s friend Maura is backing down from her original analysis of Bette now that she sees the changes in Bette’s behavior.
Now what is Jody and Kelly up to? And what can Aaron be thinking now that he has witnessed Bette and Tina’s Dare competition? He’s a fool if he doesn’t think he will come face to face with Bette at some point in the future.
Great…Great Chapter…. waiting for more.
Martha
Hi Martha:
Happy New Year.
Yes, I was also pulling my hairs about Tina’s attitude on the beach, yes she was very horny as it was Bette, but she had lots of hard experiences and has an incredible control when it’s about the safety and life of someone she loves, she has done that for her godmother, but that is another story that will be told in very later chapters.
What we learn from this is that Tina is very in love with Bette, and she may not how and when it happened because she was all the time in denial and the same happens with Bette, now it’ll start a new game for them.
Another thing we learn here is how women can support each other, not only Bette and Tina but the friends on each side support them.
Now we have to give them some time to woo each other, remember this is something they don’t know very well, for Bette perhaps it’s a little easier than for Tina who goes easily from friends to one-night stands.
Another thing that we see here is that Aaron is desperate and scared, he is asking her allied Fay Buckley for help, and some scorned exes of Bette will be dragged in this game.
Well, the worse hard times for our couple have passed for now.
Thanks for your valuable comments, Martha.
P
Hi proteonomics,
Happy New Year ????
Wow, what a long chapter and that dare that Bette choose, amazing and sexy!
Tina is a match for Bette, she was very bold and turned Bette in a Pussycat ????
I can’t wait to see Aaron being fired, he is a total asshole along with his supposed friends, treating that Melvin take all from Bette, he knows that Tina is about to expose everything, but he don’t know that she has all the files. He is in trouble and even more a slimy asshole (sorry, my favourite word for him ????) Faye is trying to plot something with help of the two most annoying girls in the world, Jodi and Kelly. Sure hope that will backfire!
Thank you so much for this wonderful chapter. Enjoy the free days you still have!
Hi Bibi:
Happy New Year.
Yes, this is a long chapter, initially, I was going to split it but I decided to leave it like that because the next will be posted in two weeks, though if I can I’ll post sooner.
Well, in civilized times like the current moments, dares are less brutal than like 100 or 1000 years ago, but still are hard, and this dare was especial; the reason why Bette chose this song is that it was the first song she danced with Randy and made her hornier than she was that evening 10 years ago, and Randy danced it batter than her, and it brought a little deja vu for her, and for Tina too.
I’m sorry, you’ll need to wait to see Aaron fired because now is time for the mating game between Tina and Bette, and additionally they need to discover who are they and how to heal their wounds. They need to prepare themselves for the fight.
Question is who is Fay and what the hell she is doing allied with Aaron?
Okay, I stop my clues and will rest a little (btw that story of DBFF “what happened” it’s super great, I’m starting reading too)
Thanks, my friend for reading and your wonderful comments.
P
Bibi28
I get to the point where I enjoy your comments almost as much as the Stories :-)
SG
Wow, what a sweet compliment. Thank you my friend ????
Happy new Year!
Thank you for posting this extra long Chapter. Enjoyed it tremendously!
Looking forward to your next post continuing this Story
SG
Hi SG:
Happy New Year.
I’m glad that you liked the chapter, sorry it was too long, as I said, it’s long because I may not post in two weeks, I hope that the long journey of those 10 previous chapters will be compensated with this new part of the story, just have a little patience, please, with this teasing writer
Thank you, SG for reading and commenting.
P
Nothing from you is too long!
Patiently waiting!,
SG