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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 14: MISSING DAY
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Louise: “shush, calm down, we’ll find out…, and I doubt she is your step sister”
Bette: (crying) “how could you be so calm?”
Louise: “oh come on, Bette, just think, we would have an idea by now, besides if she were your step-sister, Kit would be the first to oppose to your relation with her, and she seems to agree, even when I asked her about you and Tina, several weeks ago, she seemed in some way like pleased”
Bette: “then we must find out who adopted Tina, if it wasn’t my mom, it should be the other Kennard…, Louise, who the hell is Miranda Kennard?”
Louise: “I don’t know, that name sounds familiar to me, like I heard it several years ago…, when I was a child”
Bette: “do you think there would be documents around about the adoptive mother of Tina?”
Louise: “I don’t know, Bette, but I have a better idea of how to find out if it was your mom or Miranda the woman who adopted Tina”
Bette: “what’s in your mind?”
Louise: “you’ll see…, I have to go to the clinic and talk to Kit…, but I don’t want to leave you here alone, you’re so depressed …, you’ll come with me in my car and you’ll wait in the parking lot while I talk with her”
Bette: “okay…, but you’ll tell me the truth, right?”
Louise: “of course…, we better go”
Lower Manhattan, Broadway and Prince Street- Early Monday morning.
Tina has arrived early to her office to start her job and deactivate the microphones already left in her office by Aaron’s people, but first, she has set the beautiful orchid Bette gave her yesterday morning in the Hamptons, close to the window; she had brought orchid food solution to feed the little pod. While doing her work, she thought about last night, she couldn’t almost sleep since midnight, her mind was trying to find an explanation about her strange dream, how could she mix Bette and Alex in the same dream, and worse how could she make love in her dream to they both at the same time…, because that is what her brain believes it happened. When she met Bette Porter for the first time in the Planet, she thought the brunette had a tremendous resemblance with Alex, but she knew Alex was dead from long ago, but then she realized that Bette has been using a suspicious user name in BP “Green Lantern” as the costume Alex used ten years ago, and that was an amazing coincidence… and the way Bette kisses her, a little more sophisticated but the same taste, then her brain started to compare many other things, the scent of Bette and Alex, the way Bette sexually approached her, the tenderness and seduction, the sensation of security, of feeling safe giving herself to her…, amazing, same way than with Alex. Nah, her memories were playing with her feelings for Bette…; sadly, Alex is dead, and Bette is alive, she may never forget Alex, but her feelings for Bette are very deep and as strong as she never felt after Alex.
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A cliff hanger…..so close to realizing the truth – Alex and Randy are together again. They just need to acknowledge it to each other and to straighten out the false assumptions each made about that time ten years ago. This is going to be very emotional for both of them.
Wonderful chapter….so much more to go in this story. But at least our girls are finally alone and sharing themselves with each other.. “we both were so young”. Try not to keep us waiting long….I want to know how Bette and Tina resolve the mystery of Alex and Randy.
Is it possible that the Miranda Kennard is a sister to Maxine. Bette and Louise now have a picture of her from college. If should not be very difficult to find out who she is. So the Kennard sisters are Maxine, Mabel and Miranda. My guess is that Miranda is the adopted mother and Mabel is the birth mother? If Mabel is Louise’s mother and Tina is her sister, is Mabel not her mother? Or is Miranda the birth mother and Mabel was the adopted mother and Maxine is the god mother. Something is missing to make the connections fit. Why was Tina raised apart from both Louise and Bette? Obviously, I need more information.
Get us another chapter really soon. I am on the edge of my seat waiting…..Love this story.
PS…glad Bette and Tina are not sisters…..
Hi Martha, I’m glad you like the story; well, we are at the door of finding new things and to see how Tina would react to the realization that Bette = Alex.
Yes, there are several things coming, and so many adventures and things to uncover in the company (the bureau) as well as in their own lives; I’ll just, slip something here, everything is related, the company with the family situation; this Bureau started as a family business and there is a deep connection and it would surprise you when you find out.
Martha, what may you think that Mabel and Miranda could be sisters? It’s the contrary, but we’ll see this in another chapter.
Miranda and Maxine are not sisters either, but according to their last name they could be related, but everything will be revealed in the far future in this story, now we need to have our girls together and free of the uncertainty of their past.
Let’s the party starts.
Thank you for following this story, and for your valuable comments.
P.
Hola proteonomics que sorpresa tan agradable que subieras el siguiente capitulo
me encanto y mas porque bette sabe que tina es randy y quiero saber que pasa
en el siguiente capitulo por fa y si puedes puedes subir otro de aqui a el domingo
o antes sabes que encanta esta historia gracias
Hola Escorpion:
Que bien que te siga gustando la historia,
Mira, voy a tratar de subir el siguiente capitulo pronto, yo se que esta emocionante la historia, pero no creo que sea para mañana
Solo te digo que la historia se va a poner un poco más compleja, pero nuestra fabulosa pareja va a estar junta.
Gracias por tus comentarios.
P
A Cliffhanger!!!
I repeat everything Martha said!!!
Please please post soon!
Oh, thanks for a great chapter!
SG,
Hi SG:
If you have read the first two pages of this chapter, you could understand why I had to cut the former chapter in a soft cliffhanger, because if I cut when Bette says that she “rather die…” you and the other readers would kill me.
Somehow, I hope that this new cliffhanger will bring something better. I had to cut the chapter here because the length of the chapter was going to be too much and hard to express everything. What comes to require a whole chapter to digest.
Well, I hope to have your understanding of my cliffhangers, though I know you don’t like them.
Anyway, I hope to post the next chapter soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting and following this story.
P
Oh my god, it took me a few days before i could read this, what a shame!
What a fantastic chapter!
I agree ???? with Martha’s comment!
But man, always ending with a cliffy, how dear you ????
I will wait patiently for the next chapter! Take your time, i know how busy you are!!!
Hi, my friend:
I’m glad that you could make it reading this chapter. I know that you like TIBETTE (as I like them) together, so this is my dedication to us, the TIBETTErs.
As I commented in Martha’s reply, the party is about to start, which means that they, our wonderful couple will start their journey together.
I’m sorry for the cliffy, but you know I like them and I’m a teaser ????????????
Well, I’ll try to post soon.
Thanks, my friend, for your kind comments and for following this story.
P