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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 22: THE CULPRIT
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Melvin: “how can I be sure that you are telling me the truth?”
Faye Buckley: “talk to William Halsey and find out”
Melvin: “that’s a little hard…, okay, but if you are lying I will catch you”
Faye Buckley: “I’m not lying”
Melvin: “hmm, supposedly you’re telling the truth, why are you following my daughter?”
Faye Buckley: “me? I’m not following your daughter”
Melvin: “people have seen you at the beach party and a few times in the main building”
Faye Buckley: “I wasn’t after her”
Melvin: “hmm, then who were you looking for?”
Buckley hesitated, she can’t tell Melvin she was looking for Miranda’s daughter, because it could destroy her plans and if Peggy finds out, this one would destroy her, she has to come up with another story.
Faye Buckley: “I was making friends with Jodi Lerner and Kelly Freemont”
Melvin: “now, you’re lying…, but it doesn’t matter I’ll find out”
Long Beach, Nassau county – New York – Bette’s beach house Sunday evening.
The girls have listened to the conversation which made a different impression on them; for Alice, Helena and Shane there was a kind of confusion; evidently, Melvin was suspicious about something they couldn’t guess, and Buckley was obviously lying in her last statements; but Bette, Tina, and Louise knew immediately what was a stake. However, there was no doubt in anybody’s mind that Peggy should be notified.
Bette: “okay, maybe that’s all for today, I’ll call Peggy, I think is time to rest”
Alice: “are we going to work on this tomorrow, I mean from here?”
Bette: “yes, but only tomorrow, I don’t want to arouse suspicion; and we must take turns, to collect and select the information, on Tuesday we’ll be back at work…, why don’t you make a rotation list, I will check it later”
Bette walked toward her studio and closed the door, thinking about all the information collected from the phones and micro drone spies. She was remembering yesterday’s conversation between Peggy and Buckley and was wondering what her father would do if he finds out that Tina, the daughter of his nemesis of several years ago, the child he thought dead, was very alive and actually was the owner of his daughter’s heart. Finally, she decided it was time to call Peggy and inform her about Melvin’s phone conversation with Buckley.
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¡Hola,Proteonomics!Que bueno que estés de vuelta,me encantó el capítulo y esperando el siguiente,gracias.
Hola Escorpion:
Que bien que te gusto el capitulo.
Voy a subir el otro esta semana que viene.
Gracias por seguir esta historia, espero que te guste la siguiente que voy a subir tan pronto esta historia se termine.
Cuidate.
P
So are Sharon and Joyce Wishnia dead? Attacked by whom? Melvin’s thugs? With the intent of getting Peggy?
Looks like things are being revealed to almost everyone…. Melvin is close to guessing that Tina is alive. Peggy says the girls know everything, but do they really? Something tell me Peggy still has a lot more to reveal. Where’s Miranda? How did Melvin get on the board of B.I.T.C.H. Why is Melvin still looking to make more money?
And it looks like Henry and William Halsey are now co-conspirators against Melvin.
Bette needs to mature a little more….. jealousy is not a very good trait to have. It shows a huge lack of trust for Tina. How can she believe that Tina would flirt with anyone in a public place and knowing her friends would be watching and would report to Bette in an blink of an eye? She wouldn’t…. that’s just not who she is. She would not flirt in private much less public. To be protective is one thing, but to be jealous is a whole different emotion and can be detrimental to their future relationship.
This is a great chapter….. the revelations of what is going on is intriguing…. hope to see more soon….
Thank you.
Hi Martha.
Thanks for reading this chapter.
About Sharon and Joyce, let’s not jump to conclusions, maybe they aren’t dead, maybe they are just injured or who knows.
It wasn’t Melvin neither any of his thugs; you should go back to page 21 in “Someplace near Central Park” where you could read that a dangerous man, a fugitive, is looking for revenge and on the next page related to the same man it says “all he has to do is shoot that rifle”
Yes, Melvin needs to make more money before her ex-wife comes back to New York, Why? you’ll read it in the next chapter.
You’re right, it looks like Henry and William are working together.
Yes, Peggy is hiding more things; but Bette and Tina will find out about those (or most of those) things, through another person.
Yes, Bette needs to mature a little more, but I couldn’t blame her for her jealousy after the ten years he thought Tina left her for a man. fortunately, Tina was able to soothe her.
I would post the next week, hopefully, if nothing wrong happens to me,
Thank you for your valuable comments.
P
Hi proteonomics,
I am so happy you posted this chapter and without problems?!
Beautiful picture of our ladies, could clearly picture one jealous Bette. I can understand her reaction, all though a little extreme. But Tina was able to calm her down.
My god, i hope Joyce and Sharon survided the shooting, it was clearly a attemp on Peggy’s life. And if i am not mistaken, it was that bastard Henry who did it?
What an incredible web of stories and events, there is so much going on in this story that it is at times difficult to remember or not to confuse.
It’s a battle between the old bad guys and the young ladies who do everything they can to expose them, but also try to get the truth from Peggy, for example.
A great story and I enjoy it!
I hope you are doing ok, take care my friend ♥️
Hello, my friend.
I’m glad you liked the picture, it isn’t bad.
I share your concern and hopes about Sharon and Joyce, perhaps it wasn’t that bad, or perhaps other people were the victims.
I agree with you, Bette’s reaction was understandable, not because of Tina, but because of all that she has gone through in the 10 years, she didn’t see Tina.
Of course, it was Henry, it’s written in the last part of the chapter, and as we see his next targets would be Bette and Melvin.
I’m sorry, the story has many twists and questions and it is my fault that I couldn’t post more frequently, unfortunately, so many things happened in my life the last year, I’ll try to post more regularly.
Yes, there is a generational battle and I hope the girls could learn the truth soon.
Thank you very much, Bibi, for following this story
P
Thanks for the update.
This is quite a story and you really need your wit’s about you to keep up. So, here am I full concentration and how am I rewarded? A Cliffhanger !!!
Seriously though thanks for this intriguing story, I look forward to getting away from hanging off the Cliff soon.
Hi SG.
Thanks for reading the chapter.
I am so sorry about the cliffhanger, I almost didn’t notice, it wasn’t about Bette and Tina, but it was a cliffhanger.
For me, cliffhangers are a kind of marker in my stories, they make me stop at a certain point in the story; otherwise, I would keep writing and perhaps never posting.
I plan to post next week, and hopefully more mysteries will be solved.
Thanks for your comments and for following this story.
P
Hey P,
Lots of twists & turns & DRAMA!!!!
Great job.
Can’t wait for what comes next update.
Thanks
Hi, Collins:
Thanks for your kind words. my friend.
P
I agree with SG about cliffhangers!!!
Waiting to see where this goes and what comes next.
Thanks
Hi LeighS.
I’m sorry for the cliffhangers, as I said most of the time is my way to determine when to stop the chapter.
The main problem is that I’m not posting as frequently as I planned, sorry again.
Hope the story will be interesting.
P