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B.I.T.C.H. Chapter 22: THE CULPRIT
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Helena: “they have to, whether reporting they got her or they’ve failed, they must answer to their boss”
Alice: “we should tell Peggy”
Louise: “not yet, let’s find out what happened”
Suddenly an incoming call was detected by the hacking apparatus.
Shane: “there”
Bette: “shush”
They all listened to the audio
Man 1: “boss?”
Melvin: “it was about time, you have her?”
Man 1: “not yet”
Melvin: “what happened?”
Man 1: “we had a fight, that woman has bodyguards”
Melvin: “fuck you! Bring her to my office, whatever it takes”
The phone call ended and the girls looked at each other, half of them knowing and the others intrigued.
Alice: “is this important? Because, if it is, we should tell Peggy”
There was silence, Tina looked to the floor, Louise, at her side, looked at Bette, who was looking at everybody else, without articulating a word.
Alice: “Bette?”
Bette: “I’ll talk with her later, now we should keep listening”
Helena: “is it supposed to come more?”
Bette: “we don’t know, just wait”
Aware of the concern on her sibling’s face, Louise, pulled Tina to the pool.
Louise: “we’ll go for some drinks from the icebox; maybe we could put some burgers and chicken on the grill for dinner, while we’re waiting”
Bette: (assenting) “sure, take your time”
Helena: “I’ll go with you”
Louise: “no, you stay here”
Once Tina and Louise were gone, Alice took Bette aside.
Alice: “Bette, it’s been a while since I had this question, perhaps you can answer it”
Bette: “which question?”
Alice: “are Louise and Tina related?”
Bette: “what?”
Alice: “they are very alike, I mean physically”
Bette: “don’t be silly”
Alice: “I’m not the only one with that question; Helena and Shane share my curiosity”
Bette: “enough, let’s find out what’s in the other spy drones and phones”
Alice: “… fine, but sooner or later you’ll have to answer my question”
Bette walked away toward the master computer to check for other conversations, asking Helena to listen to them and then went to the pool to help Louise and Tina with the food.
After dinner, again the computer announced another phone call to Melvin Porter.
Watts St. Manhattan – Sunday late evening – Faye Buckley house
The advice she received from Dembo has, already, sunk in Buckley’s mind, she needs to avoid Melvin from destroying her plan; Miranda is extremely important for her, the long time ago vanished woman from who she is infatuated and obsessed is also the owner of a big fortune including the debit of her own family to the central bank. She needs to find Miranda and she believes that beautiful blonde, her daughter, maybe the key to finding her.
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¡Hola,Proteonomics!Que bueno que estés de vuelta,me encantó el capítulo y esperando el siguiente,gracias.
Hola Escorpion:
Que bien que te gusto el capitulo.
Voy a subir el otro esta semana que viene.
Gracias por seguir esta historia, espero que te guste la siguiente que voy a subir tan pronto esta historia se termine.
Cuidate.
P
So are Sharon and Joyce Wishnia dead? Attacked by whom? Melvin’s thugs? With the intent of getting Peggy?
Looks like things are being revealed to almost everyone…. Melvin is close to guessing that Tina is alive. Peggy says the girls know everything, but do they really? Something tell me Peggy still has a lot more to reveal. Where’s Miranda? How did Melvin get on the board of B.I.T.C.H. Why is Melvin still looking to make more money?
And it looks like Henry and William Halsey are now co-conspirators against Melvin.
Bette needs to mature a little more….. jealousy is not a very good trait to have. It shows a huge lack of trust for Tina. How can she believe that Tina would flirt with anyone in a public place and knowing her friends would be watching and would report to Bette in an blink of an eye? She wouldn’t…. that’s just not who she is. She would not flirt in private much less public. To be protective is one thing, but to be jealous is a whole different emotion and can be detrimental to their future relationship.
This is a great chapter….. the revelations of what is going on is intriguing…. hope to see more soon….
Thank you.
Hi Martha.
Thanks for reading this chapter.
About Sharon and Joyce, let’s not jump to conclusions, maybe they aren’t dead, maybe they are just injured or who knows.
It wasn’t Melvin neither any of his thugs; you should go back to page 21 in “Someplace near Central Park” where you could read that a dangerous man, a fugitive, is looking for revenge and on the next page related to the same man it says “all he has to do is shoot that rifle”
Yes, Melvin needs to make more money before her ex-wife comes back to New York, Why? you’ll read it in the next chapter.
You’re right, it looks like Henry and William are working together.
Yes, Peggy is hiding more things; but Bette and Tina will find out about those (or most of those) things, through another person.
Yes, Bette needs to mature a little more, but I couldn’t blame her for her jealousy after the ten years he thought Tina left her for a man. fortunately, Tina was able to soothe her.
I would post the next week, hopefully, if nothing wrong happens to me,
Thank you for your valuable comments.
P
Hi proteonomics,
I am so happy you posted this chapter and without problems?!
Beautiful picture of our ladies, could clearly picture one jealous Bette. I can understand her reaction, all though a little extreme. But Tina was able to calm her down.
My god, i hope Joyce and Sharon survided the shooting, it was clearly a attemp on Peggy’s life. And if i am not mistaken, it was that bastard Henry who did it?
What an incredible web of stories and events, there is so much going on in this story that it is at times difficult to remember or not to confuse.
It’s a battle between the old bad guys and the young ladies who do everything they can to expose them, but also try to get the truth from Peggy, for example.
A great story and I enjoy it!
I hope you are doing ok, take care my friend ♥️
Hello, my friend.
I’m glad you liked the picture, it isn’t bad.
I share your concern and hopes about Sharon and Joyce, perhaps it wasn’t that bad, or perhaps other people were the victims.
I agree with you, Bette’s reaction was understandable, not because of Tina, but because of all that she has gone through in the 10 years, she didn’t see Tina.
Of course, it was Henry, it’s written in the last part of the chapter, and as we see his next targets would be Bette and Melvin.
I’m sorry, the story has many twists and questions and it is my fault that I couldn’t post more frequently, unfortunately, so many things happened in my life the last year, I’ll try to post more regularly.
Yes, there is a generational battle and I hope the girls could learn the truth soon.
Thank you very much, Bibi, for following this story
P
Thanks for the update.
This is quite a story and you really need your wit’s about you to keep up. So, here am I full concentration and how am I rewarded? A Cliffhanger !!!
Seriously though thanks for this intriguing story, I look forward to getting away from hanging off the Cliff soon.
Hi SG.
Thanks for reading the chapter.
I am so sorry about the cliffhanger, I almost didn’t notice, it wasn’t about Bette and Tina, but it was a cliffhanger.
For me, cliffhangers are a kind of marker in my stories, they make me stop at a certain point in the story; otherwise, I would keep writing and perhaps never posting.
I plan to post next week, and hopefully more mysteries will be solved.
Thanks for your comments and for following this story.
P
Hey P,
Lots of twists & turns & DRAMA!!!!
Great job.
Can’t wait for what comes next update.
Thanks
Hi, Collins:
Thanks for your kind words. my friend.
P
I agree with SG about cliffhangers!!!
Waiting to see where this goes and what comes next.
Thanks
Hi LeighS.
I’m sorry for the cliffhangers, as I said most of the time is my way to determine when to stop the chapter.
The main problem is that I’m not posting as frequently as I planned, sorry again.
Hope the story will be interesting.
P