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Bette’s mouth opened but no further sound came out. She looked at Tina and her eyes narrowed ever so slightly. She’s kidding right? She did not fuck that asshole in our bedroom. Bette closed her eyes and refused to open them.
“You did not say what I think…” she paused, “I just heard you say Tina.” Bette’s eyes remained closed and she held her hands up as a stop signal. “You did not just say that you fucked Henry in our bedroom.” The quietness that Bette’s voice assumed was ominous. Her breath became shallow as the rage filled her. Tina would never do that to her she reasoned. No matter how angry she had been she couldn’t fuck someone, anyone, not even HENRY, in their bed. She couldn’t even allow Candace to come to their home much less their bed. She didn’t just say that. I’m going to open my eyes and this is all going to be a bad dream. She forced her shoulders to relax and opened her eyes. The blonde was still there and the look on her face told her that she had not been dreaming.
“Tina,” she began in a tone that was filled with rage. “I need some time. I need to take a drive… and clear my head a bit… before I respond to what you just said to me.” Her breath remained uneven. “I don’t trust myself and it’s really important to me that you understand that I am not leaving you.” Bette gritted her teeth and Tina could see how hard Bette was struggling not to explode. Tina was touched that Bette was aware enough to try to reassure her of her motives and not leave her in the cold. “Can you stay with Angie?”
Tina nodded. Bette turned and walked out the door. Tina wondered who would be walking back though those doors.
Bette stayed within the speed limit until she reached Pacific Drive which hugged the ocean. She pressed down on the accelerator and the Saab surged with her. She pulled into an overlook and climbed out of the car. Once she was certain she was alone she gave voice to her feelings. TINA she screamed at the top of her lungs. Tina she screamed again. Fuck, Fuck, Fuck. She stomped and raged until she was spent. The waves crashed with fury against the rocks and the sound ironically calmed her.
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Wow…Bette had a point…Tina knew what she was doing when she f*cked Henry in of all places their bedroom…and I don’t understand…Okay I know it shouldn’t be tit for tat but what…. Okay Bette slept with Candace…but Tina slept with Helena…AND flaunted her around in Bette’s face…and knew Helena was trying to ruin Bette’s career. THAT was payback… being with Henry was twisting the knife in more…how many more people would Tina have to sleep with and rub Bette’s face in it before they are quote unquote even? She decimated Bette…including taking away her daughter. You can’t end this story!
Tina had sat out to hurt Bette with Helena and Henry. Bette wasnt right but she didnt set out to hurt Tina. She didnt bring Candace to their home. Who is right and who is wrong. It is different but not different. thanks
Oh this is just purrfectly delicious! Makes me want to roar! Keep ’em coming and yes, let the magic flow…isn’t it awesome?
Bette is correct. They are different situations. Tina was vindictive in the relationships after Bette. All were meant to purposely hurt and humiliate Bette. Candace, while not to be condoned, was an affair that was just about sex and Bette did not flaunt it in Tina’s face as Tina did w/Helena and Josh and Henry.
What they are doing to each other is hurtful but most of all helpful. By getting all of the stuff out in the air that has caused all the major mountains between them they then may be able to climb over them. It takes time and a lot of effort to get to a point that they can trust each other again. The love is there they just have to trust that love and take those baby steps again.
They can try to go blow for blow all they want, but I still seem to think that, ultimately, Tina is way more in the wrong, particularly for f*cking Henry in their bedroom, which is just unforgivable. Should be interesting what Bette has to say. And honestly, how can you make someone stay after you cheat? Is that what Tina really wanted? Wouldn’t that have made the situation worse? Anyway… I’m so hooked.
oh smack….post again soon……
I so hope you post again soon.
Okay – could you just get the next post up here as soon as possible? What a great scene!!!!!
Oh the agony!!!!! Post promptly please.
bette knew whatshe was doing when she fucked Candace and went on fucking her after T walked out: that continuation musta near killed Tina and then to come back, how long after and say “I told (the woman I’m fucking) that you are the love of my life is CRAZY MAKING MATERIAL believe me I’ve been right there…anything Tina did after that was about pain, survival and the never ending torment of knowing Bette absolutely betrayed her…IMO…however there comes a time when even tho’ you know you’ll never love anyone in the same way as you loved that person…you just get so damned tired of fighting for her…I think Tina hit that and hence Henry!!! in the bedroom?? to prove to herself that she no longer gave a damn…probably soon after she knew Henry wasn’t the one but if he put distance between her and Bette which helped her healing process then he would do…all this from someone who loves Bette but has been in Tina’s shoes…PPS
both of them hurt each other so much but the person who start all this was Bette and she have been dealing with all the consequence of her actions but Tina was so far with Henry, but i think that you can hurt the person that you love almost with the same strong with you lover her. they need to focus in her future and past trought this and trust in each other wich i think will be the most difficult, the next chapter please
The problem here is that even today, Tina thinks she was justified. Even now she hasn’t said she wished she hadn’t or that she’s sorry for hurting Bette so profoundly, what a prize!
Ok since everyone’s pointing fingers, I wanna point a finger too. Bette really is the reason why they are in this deep shit. The affair and the continuation of the affair was the worst thing she could’ve done. It’s painful,because in actuality, Bette chose Candace over Tina. She kept sleeping with Candass after Tina left her. She didn’t flaunt Candy around,because Hello, That’s the whole point of having an affair.Bette was vindictive in this situation. I don’t think Tina was flaunting Helena is Bette’s face at all. Besides B&T were brokenup. But Tina sleeping with Henry in thier bedroom was wrong,but not any worse thna Bette continuing to sleep with Candace. Bette’s affair is the reason why they’re in this situation.
Cheating is cheating. They need to fight for each other…thanks for the update and please post very soon.
whoaaaaaaa more plz more
ok this only get’s better!!!! don’t leave us hanging to long and we need a happy ending don’t forget!!111
Yeaaaah, I love it. Woman up…speak…girls..speak…Seriously, this is the only way to see if there is anything to salvage. PPS-oh you already did….Thank you. And ummm…I thought the next line was….What we gonna do, baby…I don’t wanna let you go…no no no no…
:O lioness? i like the sound of that… :D oh, and the picture too :P post soon :)
damn girl! yeah I want to see a fight, with some hot make up sex afterwards….but do what you must. PPS
Would you like to finish me off by twisting the knife?! Kelika please put me out of my agony..Can’t take it!!!!!!!!!!!
I do believe the lioness is about to roar, and justifiably so. These two have definitly got to stop hurting each other. But I have to go with Bette here. Yes, Bette screwed up when she had the affair with Tina, but as it is with most affairs, she was relatively discreet, and did not bring it into they’re home. Tina, was down right vindictive. First with Helena, and definitly with Henry, and she broke the cardinal rule. You never bring it home, and especially into your bedroom. Not to mention she knew exactly what she was doing. Love this, and I want to see them together, but man is this stressing.
Neither is right, both are wrong, work on building the relationship back up nnot seeing who can hurt whom the most
WOW!!!!! Talk about DRAMA!!! I hope you post real soon PLEASE!!!!! Thanks , Please do not end this story to soon.PPS
DAMN DRAMA KEEP COMING!
OK first, Tina was DEAD WRONG SLEEPING WITH HENRY, but I have noticed and it was before I started commenting on story that ALL IF NOT MOST of the people watching the show and writing the fan fiction GETS IT WRONG, Tina DOES NOT SLEEP IN THEIR BEDROOM with Henry, by this time Bette has kicked her out of their bedroom and Tina is sleeping in the GUEST BEDROOM . That is were she let’s Henry have sex with her and it is actually up on the door. NOT TO JUSTIFY BUT TO CLARIFY.