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    Babe Chapter 9 completed

    Story written on November 14, 2006 by kelika.
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    The conclusion of Babe.

               “STOP RUNNING TINA.”  She said the words slowly and distinctly.

              Suddenly she was in another place.  She was standing in the shadows where Mommy and Daddy couldn’t see her.  Daddy was crying.  She was scared but did not make a sound.  She instinctively knew that something was terribly wrong.  Daddy didn’t cry. 

              “Stop running Maxine, stay with me, stay with our little girl.” Mommy didn’t like tears, Bette decided.  She wanted Daddy to stop crying.  If she didn’t cry then maybe this time Mommy would stay.  She quietly retuned to her bed and her room.  She pretended to be sleeping some time later when Mommy came and checked on her.  “You be a brave girl.” Mommy whispered.  I will she swore silently.  I will.

              “Shit” Bette exclaimed aloud.  She shook herself to free herself of the memory.  It was just like the dream she thought.  The sense of déjà vu made her skin tingle. 

              Tina observed Bette closely; she could tell Bette had gone someplace but where?  She had heard words similar to that before.  It hit her; those words were so like the ones Melvin had used when he had confused her with Bette’s Mom. 

              “Tina” Bette continued, “You used to say that you loved my passionate beliefs. Integrity and fidelity are important to me.  I was unfaithful to you.  I know that.  I would give anything to change what I did.  I can’t.  I can only say that I’m sorry and I won’t ever do that again.  You say that you love me and that you want to move back home but you keeping running.  Every time we have a problem you run.  If you love me like you say you do then stop running.

                My Mother was a runner.  I couldn’t stop her no matter how much I wanted to… and I did. I thought that if I was strong and good she would come back.  She never did. 

                It just hit me that being strong and good doesn’t work.  I am not a little girl anymore and I don’t want you to leave.  You mean the world to me and I am not prepared to let you go.  You want me to fight for you?  Consider the gauntlet thrown down!  You are mine and I’m going to keep you.”

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    2. i’m fairly sure you can’t end it like that!!! isn’t there a rule somewhere about ending like that!!! we so need an epilogue … plz! a nice, fun one! something like angelica poutting about the new baby b/t have! lol great story

    3. Dalloway…there IS such a rule…it is article 4 section 5 paragraph 3 that states “a story can’t end with a question followed by pondering of the said audience on a 2nd tuesday of the 11th month of a even year…if such a occurance happens then the author MUST immediately prepare a suitable ending namely called a epilogue”….Kelika…thank you dear…and please post many more stories…we love this.

    7. T shouldn’t even have to answer that question, but I know why she did. The fact that Bette came back after what Tina told her (about Henry in their bedroom) should tell Tina that Bette’s love for her isn’t “reasonable” either. But T had to ask because of what she watched her mother go through. She has to hear it – she feels it in her heart; but her head has to hear it too. Great story Kelika! An epilogue isn’t necessary, but would be nice…even nicer would be for you to continue this story, or write a continuation of it. Your writing is exquisite and I would love to read more of it!

    8. That was very real. I think was holding my breath during part of it. Not so much waiting for something to happen, but because it felt real…and painful and exposed. Wow, this was excellent. Now T’s last question could actually be the tagline for a new fic.. But as an ending cliffee? *shaking my head* Come on….no fair….PPS

    11. Yes please an epilogue. What I would like most is for you to continue to write for us. I loved every second that I took to read this story so please continue with whatever.

    18. Kelika dear, my first comment on this story, even though I’ve been following and loving this. Sorry but I don’t think you have a choice here… This ending SCREAMS for an epilogue! Thanks!

    20. i just read the last 5 chapters… (I was at the convention)… you can’t leave us there… you have to post more… there is so much you could do with this story… just reach back and let it pour out… i know you have it in you… they just aired all of their dirty laundry… now its time for them to start over… a new beginning… think about it… we are not running away… we will always be here…

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