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Babe Chapter 9 completed
Tina gulped as she met Bette’s blazing eyes. “Just like that?” She responded saucily. She found herself aroused by Bette’s possessiveness. “Maybe you’re too late.”
Bette quickly closed the distance between them. “I’m not too late and you are not going anywhere.” Tina felt her skin tingle and her breath caught. Her Queen almost smirked; when Bette raised both her eyebrows she knew that Bette was still attuned to her and to how much she wanted her, no matter what. “Why do you run, T?” The causal tone did not fool Tina. She jerked her head around as the answer hit her.
“Because I don’t want to be like my Mom.” Tina turned and moved a small distance away from the heat she felt so close to Bette. “She was so in love with Dad and he took full advantage of that. He would have mistress after mistress and no matter what she still loved him so desperately. There was no other love for her. She was crazy about that man. I hated it. She put up with so much crap and when I would get angry she would just smile and say, Babe, one day if you’re really lucky you’ll find someone who you love without reason. That’s what true love is she would say. It’s unreasonable. I ran as fast and far as I could as soon as I could.”
Bette listened intently. While Tina had talked about living in suburbia and that her Mom was a lone star, having only been with one man, this element of the story had never come out before.
“You were not my first lover, Bette. You are my first love. I love you without reason. I understand part of what my Mom talked about. I refuse to let myself sit by while you give yourself to one woman after another. I know there is a line of women ready and willing. I saw it. I see it every time we are out. There is not a woman or man who does not follow you with their eyes when you enter a room. I was so sure of us until Candace. It never got to me before. I used to feel so secure knowing that you were mine and I didn’t have to worry about sharing you. I don’t want to share you so I run.”
“To Helena, to Josh, to Henry?” Bette threw up her arms. What is that? She thought. The pain that filled her over the thought of Henry in her bed squeezed her heart. That place was sacred to her. She knew now that being with Candace violated just as sacred a space for Tina. Could they really argue over who caused who more pain?
“To whom ever who can help me not be the unreasonable person I don’t want to be." Shit, the thought crossed her mind that now Bette really knew how hopelessly in love I will always be with her. Squaring her shoulders and with complete honesty she declared, "I can’t be reasonable when it comes to you." I wish I could she thought to herself. I wish I could.
Tina, shoulders braced, glanced at her and for the seconds that their eyes met, Bette saw the unguarded love that she knew from this woman. This was her woman. The fear that always shadowed her receeded. She understood that kind of love that was beyond reason. She knew that the only woman she ever willingly surrendered that part of herself to stood vunerable before her.
“Don’t be reasonable, T. You don’t need to run anymore.”
Bette moved closer and Tina was enfolded in her embrace. Bette felt Tina begin to tremble in her arms. She kissed and licked the exposed shoulder and worked her way up the neck as she tightened her grip on her woman who suddenly seemed to lose her legs. Arms reached up circling her neck and the urgency with which that warm hot tongue that she knew so well filled her mouth made her groan. Pressing her body closer still she cupped and squeezed the firm buttocks that moved with her.
Tina felt herself falling again and pressing her hands against Bette’s shoulders she pushed herself away. She bent her head and waited until the pounding rhythm of her heart slowed a bit. “I have to know. Can I be enough?"
THE END
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(38 votes, average: 4.58 out of 5)
what the end???
i’m fairly sure you can’t end it like that!!! isn’t there a rule somewhere about ending like that!!! we so need an epilogue … plz! a nice, fun one! something like angelica poutting about the new baby b/t have! lol great story
Dalloway…there IS such a rule…it is article 4 section 5 paragraph 3 that states “a story can’t end with a question followed by pondering of the said audience on a 2nd tuesday of the 11th month of a even year…if such a occurance happens then the author MUST immediately prepare a suitable ending namely called a epilogue”….Kelika…thank you dear…and please post many more stories…we love this.
Oh my goodness, this comment is hysterical. I laughed so hard.
Epilogue please! Thanks!
I sure hope you don’t end it there. You can do a sequel.Yeah…that’s it. Hope you keep writing no matter what you decide. Thanks.
WE NEED MORE!!! THAT CAN NOT BE THE END? PLEASE POST MORE
T shouldn’t even have to answer that question, but I know why she did. The fact that Bette came back after what Tina told her (about Henry in their bedroom) should tell Tina that Bette’s love for her isn’t “reasonable” either. But T had to ask because of what she watched her mother go through. She has to hear it – she feels it in her heart; but her head has to hear it too. Great story Kelika! An epilogue isn’t necessary, but would be nice…even nicer would be for you to continue this story, or write a continuation of it. Your writing is exquisite and I would love to read more of it!
That was very real. I think was holding my breath during part of it. Not so much waiting for something to happen, but because it felt real…and painful and exposed. Wow, this was excellent. Now T’s last question could actually be the tagline for a new fic.. But as an ending cliffee? *shaking my head* Come on….no fair….PPS
This story was amazing and I hope there’s more to come. Thanks a bunch.
I agree with Rau and AmandaMG ( and not because they are 2 of my favorite writers), so PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE give us more of this story :o)
Yes please an epilogue. What I would like most is for you to continue to write for us. I loved every second that I took to read this story so please continue with whatever.
What end?????
Great story! Epilogue please!!!
I agree with skycaptain. There will be no ending with questions and pondering. Please post the epilogue!
Agree with all the above… :)
plz!!! Don’t end it here what happens next?
yes u believe i have read the rule that skycaptain speaks of…..no endings with questions. so i guess that means we NEED an epilogue. great story. pps
Kelika dear, my first comment on this story, even though I’ve been following and loving this. Sorry but I don’t think you have a choice here… This ending SCREAMS for an epilogue! Thanks!
OMG, More please.
i just read the last 5 chapters… (I was at the convention)… you can’t leave us there… you have to post more… there is so much you could do with this story… just reach back and let it pour out… i know you have it in you… they just aired all of their dirty laundry… now its time for them to start over… a new beginning… think about it… we are not running away… we will always be here…
Thanks for sharing a wonderful story. I’ve enjoyed every chapter.
It can’t be the end. You must write more please.Its a great story.
aww u skycaptain is rite on u cannot end a story with a question!! always a pleasure!
i hope you get another chapter for us cause you can’t let us like this, please what do you think abaut second part?
duh…i meant BUT not BUY…
Yeah, sorry, but that’s gonna need an epilogue.
well i loved them exchanging details of their moms, great stuff buy …um…i think I definitely need an epilogue…ok? soon please.
How is that the end?
Damn this is so good and excellent story and can’t wait to see more, please don’t ending it!
That was good communication between the two of them.