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    Back In Shape- completed

    Story written on September 28, 2008 by geek in the pink.
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    the end

     

    “Eric…”

     

    “I know I’m a heartless dog. I can’t change the way I feel Tina, I tried so hard to make it work… but in some point I guess I needed more than this, more than being a husband”

     

    “How many were they?” Tina asked.

     

    “A lot…” Eric said looking at her “I never wanted to be tied down Tina you did”

     

    “And you never wanted a child” Tina completed. “I had two” She whispered.

     

    “What?”

     

    “I cheated on you with two people.” Tina said. “One was about fifteen month ago.”

     

    Eric looked at her for a second “You’re saying…”

     

    Tina nodded, “I’m so sorry”

     

    “Why… why would you do such a thing?” Eric was shocked. “Do you hate me so much?”

     

    “I wanted to be a mother…” Tina whispered, “When I found out… I just really wanted to be a mother” She cried.

     

    “And I didn’t want to be a father” Eric said, “So you found someone more willing. I thought you wanted a baby to help us get closer…”

     

    “Eric… I’m sorry. He’s still your son… you raised him”

     

    “We both know that’s not true…” Eric sadly said. “At least I can stop feeling guilty for not spending time with him” He sadly said.

     

    “Eric…”

     

    “I still want to be in his life” Eric said his voice cracking.

     

    “Of course” Tina quickly assured. “Whenever you’d like.”

     

    Eric nodded “It doesn’t have to be set in stone”

     

    “Of course… we’ll work something out.” Tina nodded.

     

    “So that’s it? This is what became of our marriage? A business.” Eric bitterly laughed.

     

    “I’m sorry Eric.”

     

    “Were you happy? With me, was there a time we were happy?” He asked

     

    Tina couldn’t really remember. Especially compared to the time she spent with Bette, “Yes” She said, “Only with other people”

     

    Eric laughed sadly, “I should be sad right?”

     

    “You should feel whatever you feel.”

     

    “I feel free” Eric said.

     

    “You really didn’t want to get married?”

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    7. “You’re my happy ending” has got to be the best line! I’m sad to see this story end, but it was a great way to end. I’m glad that things went easily with Eric. Who needs a big mess! Thanks for making my day better and for posting this wonderful story!

    8. Great finish. Its not an easy end, it also is a possible ending in real life. It was an oportunity for Eric to get out of his marriage and daddy’s role. They all are gaining in this. Eric has got his freedom back without a child he didn’t want in the first place and Tina can have her family life with the one she loves and who loves her son as her own, so bless them.Thank you for sharing ths story with us.

    11. Perfect, geek. I hate to see this story ending, but you wrote it beautifully. Love Tina’s letter and Bette marking her… so cute and sweet. Thanks for sharing your wonderful stories!

    16. Applause! This was so beautifully written, especially the letter. I don’t this happy ending to end here. There must be a beginning after this. I want to see their lives as a family. There must be sequel in your head somewhere for this story right? right? yess! want more happy beginnings like this. Thanks and do post some more of your amazing work :)

    20. I absolutely HATE to see this story end but what a terrific closing moment. Bette’s repeated requests for I love you’s was beyond adorable. I will put a sequel to this story on my “wish list”. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

    21. Hi! I loved this story even if it was short. We, fans, are so blessed to have such talented writers writing for us. Thank you so much. Waiting with antisapation for your next story!!

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