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Standing on the front porch, the images from tonight, from
the first moment I laid eyes on Tina and every moment in between have once
again rendered me absolutely frozen. The
tears are flowing faster now; something I didn’t even think was possible.
I love her. I’ve
never been surer of anything in my entire life.
A year ago I questioned whether or not I was falling out of love. The thought summons a strangled chuckle as I
mock my own stupidity. I had fallen out
of love. Out of love with myself, never
Tinanever her.
And now she was gone.
I pushed her away. I had
succeeded in killing everything that I had ever loved and ever wanted. I’ve always though we’d get back together, if
only I could show her how much I love her, how sorry I am and how life just
isn’t worth living without her by my side.
I finally got my chance.
I poured my soul into making love to her. I know she felt it. I know she felt my tears as I finally touched
her just as I felt her tears when she whispered my name. I had finally gotten my chance and she was
still able to walk away. I love her and
she doesn’t love me.
My eyes are searching the court yard looking for an
escape. An escape from the pain, an
escape from the broken pieces of my heart that I just left on Tina’s
floor. Just as I’m about to step into
oblivion, I feel it
A warm hand clasped around my wrist. The contact sends sparks through my body once
again. In eight years, my body’s
reaction to her touch has never changed.
I tilt my head down to glance at her long slender fingers that are
wrapped around my wrist.
I don’t want her to see my fears, the lost and pathetic
person I’ve become, but I don’t have the strength to be strong anymore. It hurts too damn much. I love her enough, without any conditions or
barriers, I love her enough to show her who I really am. So when she turns me around, I follow
willingly and look deep into her eyes.
Tina is crying and my soul sobs at the thought of her in
pain. I bring my hands up; one hand
still has her wrist attached almost as if she refuses to break contact. Slowly I wipe her tears away.
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oh don’t i wish…
Sooo heartbreaking, come on it’s too good to be true. or is it ?
Holy freaking crap I wished that happened on the show! Loved it!
That is just so gripping. That is truly the way I would have loved for it to go Thanks for the telling
this is how it should be. Thanx. Loved it!
I agree with luvrgrl and Reba, I wish!! Beautiful=)
Awesome just simply awesome if only eh!
Quick! forward this version to TLW production office. Maybe they can reshoot ep. 9!
Leave in the ‘good’ (woo-woo) parts and end the ep like this. Foxworthy be damned!
Thanks!
Very sweet! Well written. How much do I have to write before you write more? ;)
I wish,Oh, how I would for it to be true, I’m so tired of Bette being slap around from everyone. Lets give her some happer times.
This would have been a wonderful ending to that episode…wonderful. Glad to see you are experiencing this incredible community that is fan fiction. I hope that my comments will join the others, who would love to see you continue to write your heartfelt stories. Thank you.
Nicely done. I always look for you on the boards keep writing your good:)
Please write for the show. Just wonderful.
I loved reading every word and could see this happening.You are a talented writer so please keep them coming.Thanks!
This was so great. It would have been so wonderful to see things play out like this.
Good job! I hope this happens for B&T. please continue to write…. you are very good.
Sniff..god that was sweet and beautifull. This is how it is supose to bee. Can we please have some more very soon. I think we need some B&T loving
Why aren’t you writing for the show? Just go there and end this nonsense with Bette and Tina…THEY WERE MEANT FOR EACH OTHER! I loved the story!
I am so broken after reading this, but also grinning like a bloomin’ idiot!>> *big sigh* …*heart beating out of control*…*slack-jawed*…”aahhh!” Thanks
if only….
great writing give us more please.
My God! I am emotional and speechless right now! I loved it! It’s so touching!