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“Please don’t cry, T.” I whisper. “You know it kills me when you cry.” I drop my hands quickly back down to my
sides, suddenly afraid to touch her.
Tina slides her hand from my wrist to my shaking hand. She’s tracing my fingers and stroking the
back of my hand slowly and then she starts to speak.
“I didn’t mean it.” She cries. “I didn’t mean it.”
I don’t know what she’s talking about, but I immediately
want to comfort her. “T, it’s okay. What are you talking about?”
“This changes everything.” Tina says as she looks me dead in
the eye. “Ten minutes ago you were naked
in my arms. This changes everything.”
“T. I” I stammered.
“This has to change everything. I love you.”
She says as I stand there looking at her as if she has just told me
she’s an alien. “I love you babe. I never stopped. I never could stop. And I’m sure that I never will stop.” She finishes and she just looks at me for a
response.
In 30 seconds, the woman standing before me has gathered all
the pieces of my heart and put them back together. I want to say something meaningful,
romanticanything to show her how much this means to me, how much she means to
me. But at the end of the day I’m still just Bette and being eloquent isn’t
going to happen anytime soon I don’t think.
“Yyyou lhuh?” I’m
not speaking anything close to English at this point. I glance at Tina and she is just
smiling. She looks like an angel. “you love me?” I whisper as I start at her in awe.
For a split second I fear that I’ve done something wrong
because Tina hasn’t said anything.
Before my fears take over she grabs me and pulls me into her arms.
“Yeah babe. I love
you.” She whispers into my ear.
“I love you too.” I
whisper back just before my body is wracked with sobs. “I love you so much Tina.” I say again as I hold her as tight as
possible.
After all these months, she’s come back for me. In a matter of minutes she picked up the
broken pieces of my heart and put them back together. She hasn’t returned the united pieces
though. She can’t. My heart, as always, belongs to her.
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oh don’t i wish…
Sooo heartbreaking, come on it’s too good to be true. or is it ?
Holy freaking crap I wished that happened on the show! Loved it!
That is just so gripping. That is truly the way I would have loved for it to go Thanks for the telling
this is how it should be. Thanx. Loved it!
I agree with luvrgrl and Reba, I wish!! Beautiful=)
Awesome just simply awesome if only eh!
Quick! forward this version to TLW production office. Maybe they can reshoot ep. 9!
Leave in the ‘good’ (woo-woo) parts and end the ep like this. Foxworthy be damned!
Thanks!
Very sweet! Well written. How much do I have to write before you write more? ;)
I wish,Oh, how I would for it to be true, I’m so tired of Bette being slap around from everyone. Lets give her some happer times.
This would have been a wonderful ending to that episode…wonderful. Glad to see you are experiencing this incredible community that is fan fiction. I hope that my comments will join the others, who would love to see you continue to write your heartfelt stories. Thank you.
Nicely done. I always look for you on the boards keep writing your good:)
Please write for the show. Just wonderful.
I loved reading every word and could see this happening.You are a talented writer so please keep them coming.Thanks!
This was so great. It would have been so wonderful to see things play out like this.
Good job! I hope this happens for B&T. please continue to write…. you are very good.
Sniff..god that was sweet and beautifull. This is how it is supose to bee. Can we please have some more very soon. I think we need some B&T loving
Why aren’t you writing for the show? Just go there and end this nonsense with Bette and Tina…THEY WERE MEANT FOR EACH OTHER! I loved the story!
I am so broken after reading this, but also grinning like a bloomin’ idiot!>> *big sigh* …*heart beating out of control*…*slack-jawed*…”aahhh!” Thanks
if only….
great writing give us more please.
My God! I am emotional and speechless right now! I loved it! It’s so touching!