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Badlands – Chapter 10
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“Hey! I’m talking to you!!” She said; frustrated at me.
“I heard you…” I said quietly.
“You were gonna kill him Shane!” She said desperately. She was in a frantic; she can’t believe I just did that. Now; this night turning even harder. I stay quiet and listen to her anxious words.
We got back to our place and she got to my side of the car. She opened my door and grabbed my hand. She looked at my hand and touched it slowly. It stings with her touch and I let out a little wince.
“Shit… we need to clean this up; you have a few cuts…” She said worriedly. I got out of the car and followed behind her.
“It’s fine… it’s only a cut…” I said as I walked behind her. I didn’t want her to worry about this little thing. There are more important things that we should discussed about.
“It’s a couple of cuts… and you don’t want it to get infected…” She said. We made out way through upstairs and into the bathroom. She’s holding my good hand as we got the bathroom. She scanning the bathroom; where she kept the first aid kit. I looked at her as she hurriedly open each drawer and found it. She looked really worried and it’s only a cut. I wonder what she would be like if get shot.
I saw the trickling of blood on my hand and thought I must’ve hit him good. She kneeled in front of my now taking my hand into hers and starts to clean it. I reached out and touched her hair. She didn’t seem to realize it. I saw my hand and it’s cleaned by her. I saw the cuts near my knuckles; it’s nothing bad but she seems worried about it.
She was pulling some sort of orange liquid on the cotton ball. She wiped slowly on the two cut and placed a band aid on the cuts. “You’re too good…” I whispered.
“What…” She stopped and looked at me.
“You’re too good for me…” I said.
“What are you on about…?” She said. I got off the edge of the bath tub and sat down in front of her. I took both of her hands into mine.
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I really loved and enjoyed reading this chapter. I know we shouldn’t praise violence, but nevertheless I liked the tough Shane =P I think Carmen should have thought about her descision before she says yes, but as you already said – they are too much in love. anyway…i hope you’re going to post (very) soon !
wow… i love it! your story is so different and i like it a lot… i want a happy end for them.. if i cant get it on tv, maybe i can get it here!update soon, please!
What everybody else said.. Great.
oh thank good! But I guess somethings going to happen soon or later…But please I want a Sharmen Happy End!!!Great story by the way!
Mmm… this is all good, but I’m wondering about Jenny… somehow she seems up to no good, but maybe I’m being paranoid some ?
oh! I love it soooooo much! I mean, it’s too cool… and u ARE a GENIUS! I mean, ur writing is wonderful! Shane told Carmen the truth… she was too sweet and Carmen was sweet too! Please, post soon!!!!!!! They r great together… and Alice, I just adore her… when she thought Shanw was going to propose! Well, wouldn’t be a bad idea…
awesome. this story is fantastic. thank god Carmen decided to stay with shane. great writing!
Wooo!!!! This was intense! I love Shane as a tough girl who isn’t putting up with any crap. I’m so happy Carmen knows and wants to still be with her. UPDATE QUICKLY!
Whew! Carmen knows and the world is still spinning. Even though she’s decided to stay with Shane, Carmen still needs to let this all sink in. Then there’s Jenny…who knows what’s really going through her mind. Even though she is supposed to be protecting Shane she still takes her orders from Shane’s dad, so if he finds out that Carmen knows there may be nothing Shane can do….but now I’m getting ahead of the story and actually starting to freak myself out. This story is great…it’s got my mind working overtime! PPS!
Fuckin’ genius baby!! BUT I fill somethin’ iz about to happen to my girlz Shane and Carmen . . . Like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!!