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Badlands – Chapter 6
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“Shane…?”
“Yeah…” I turned to look at her.
“You don’t think this is all a mistake… do you?” She asked me. Man, she sure knows how to catch me off guard, this girl.
“No, not at all…” I smile.
“Hey… I love you…” she grinned.
“………… Love you too…” I said.
Yes, it is Carmen. It is a mistake. I should’ve never said those words to you. It was a selfish thing for me to do. It is a mistake that I am in love with you.
Eventually I fell asleep, I fell asleep thinking how we are going to start our day tomorrow. I fell asleep thinking that Jenny shouldn’t know about this. I fell asleep thinking that if I do continue this thing we have for each other… I couldn’t even fathom the thought of it.
I fell asleep asking these questions to my self.
“Carmen… will you ever forgive me if I’ve hurt so deeply that you couldn’t even look at me… will you still be with me even though you know all I bring to you is nothing – ness…”
The morning came. I can feel the heat of the morning sun through the window. I opened my eyes slowly and looked to my side, she’s not there. She got me worried for a second but I could hear her walk downstairs.
I put on my clothes quickly and I looked at my messy hair, I tried to finger combed it but it seems not to be working well. I stormed my way down the stairs and into the kitchen.
“Carmen…” I said. I turned into the kitchen and was surprised to the person sitting around the kitchen table.
“Morning Shane…” she said to me, with a cup of coffee in her hand.
“Jenny… Morning…” I said to my friend. Her face is still that emotionless expression. She’s reading the LA times.
“How did you get in…” I said and sat next to her.
“Well, I was waiting for you outside in the car… then… your friend, Carmen… she came out taking the trash out with her and saw me… so, she invited me in…” She said and looked at me.
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Sorry guys, a bit of typo before… this is actually chapter 7!
I hope that Shane ignores most of what Jenny has to say and tries her darnest to seize some happiness with Carmen and try to make Carmen happy as well. I’m invested in your story … so keep it coming. PPS.
When I think about it I can see Carmen understanding Shane’s life.. But if I think too much about it, I don’t know anymore. All I can do now is hope that she will understand everything.. Because Shane will tell her, right? Great chapter!
Man, you’re turning out to be one brilliant writer! The chapter was intense, absolutely wonderful. It must be hard for Shane telling lies to Carmen. I wonder what will happen next, update VERY soon,okay?:)
this is so good! i m so loving this fic! pls update soon!
i loooved this chapter…i’m looking forward to the next chapter every day. thanks for posting regularly =)
Wow this story keeps getting better and better. I am seriously hooked. I have been going crazy at work lately so I don’t get a chance to comment as often as I’d like. But I am still reading…and loving every word.