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Badlands – Chapter 9
I watched her for unrealized minutes as I always do and wait for her to turn around and discover me there, standing and watching her do stuff with the soil and colorful little plants. With one movement she stood up from the ground and turned.
“Oh hey!” That’s always her respond when she sees me there.
“Morning…” I said lazily, loving the sight of her.
“You always do that… next time, you should join me out here… I’ve like never seen you stepped into this little garden of mine…” She said sweetly, and my heart is melting again.
“Well, I can join you now…” I said and made my way to her. I stood in front of her and smile like I always do when we’re close to each other. The sight of her puts me in a trance. She’s my weakness.
“You’re so beautiful…” I let out, hopelessly in love. I traced the bridge of her nose with my finger and she gave me that heavenly smile of hers. I realized what Jenny means now, I am love struck… and sometimes it sickens me too.
“Aw… thanks babe…” She said. “You’re pretty pretty too…” She said, with her hand playing with the collar of my black shirt.
“I’m nothin’ compared to you…” I replied. “You’re like… I don’t even have the words for it…” I said sheepishly. I placed my hand on her cheek and we are so close and so deep into this, that sometimes I don’t think I can come out alive out of this thing we have. And then I kissed her so tenderly on the lips like it would be my last.
“You’re too sweet…” She said. Maybe just around you Carmen. I see her moving her head closer to me.
“Aaaawwwww….. Look at you guys… it makes my heart tingle…” Alice popped out to the backyard suddenly. I didn’t even sensed it
“Hey Al…” Carmen smiled at her friend and I let out angry grunt that made Carmen laugh.
“Hey C… listen, I think Bette found out someone been using her Wi-fi cause’ the net been disconnected or some shit is going on…. so, I’m going to the Coffee Bean…. maybe, I could see Perez Hilton or something… see you tonight??” She said.
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woot
i saw this coming…but i hope you will let them be happy at the end, cause shane isn’t bad…she deserves to be happy
That was good and intense. Let Shane tell her, then have a real hot scene because they’re just too much into each other to deny one to the other even in such a stressful situation… This is good !
i love this fic, saw the whole argument. I think shane should tell her, but at the same time shouldn’t. i don’t know. Maybe something could go down that would reveal her secret but at the same time prove her love for Carmen. Eaither way carmen will find out eventually i just hope they have a happy ending. Shane diserves to be happy.
I think Shane should tell her before she finds out in an other way.. Because I think she will find out one way or an another. I don’t know.. Maybe Shane should ask Alice for some advice on how to tell.. or something. And I LOVE this!
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I want more baby!!!
love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It’s soooooo beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!! They deserve to be happy… I love them together!!!! Thank u 4 posting! By the way, I agree with Irowen69… Carmen should find out… but it owuld be cool even if Shane tells her… Carmen would be happy because Shane would have been honest with her… but please, Carmen has to find out!!!! Shane is not bad… she’s just… she’s just Shane!
Wow this is intense! Shane should totally tell her, but Carmen is gonna freak out…but then again if Shane doesn’t tell her, Carmen is gonna freak out! There are so many ways this could go. I think in the end Carmen will understand why Shane was being so secrative, but Shane’s lifestyle is a lot to take in…I don’t know how I would feel if the person I was in love with told me they have killed people and that they are next in line to take over a crime family! This story is totally kickin ass!!! More Please!!!