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Badlands – Chapter 9
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“Uh huh… see you there Al…” Carmen nodded. With that Alice is gone from my life… for the moment anyway. We turned to each other again, waiting for either one of us to say something.
“Let’s make something to eat…” I said suddenly.
“Okay…” We made out to the kitchen but then she stopped. She stopped in the middle. Something wasn’t right and she’s hesitating to tell me about it. She has her fingers on her lips, tapping it slowly. I looked at her and could only smile.
“What is it Carm…” I stood across her with my arms crossed. Her face serious and almost nervous. It made me nervous for a while.
“Carmen, what is it??” I asked again, my voice a little low and patience near ending now she looked me in the eyes and I’m still waiting for an answer.
“I want you to meet my family… today” She said. She said that she wants me meet the family. Well, hell… what can I say to that? I was left speechless. Of course I’m not ready for this family thing. Carmen and I have been together for only a little while. I let out a word but was stuck in the middle letting a “wh…” to her.
“Uhh… say that again…”
“I want you to meet my family…” She said, letting her hands out as if it’s not a big deal when it totally is. “C’mon you know I’m not out to them… but you can meet my mom and all of them… I can say that you’re just a friend…” She said.
“Just a friend…” I said a little offended. This is still not getting through my head. No way in hell I’m going. I don’t know how to settle around families.
“Baby…” she said slowly. Then we were playing with our eyes again, she’s begging me with that deep intense gaze that I almost fell for it.
“Carmen….” I let out. Okay, this is when I know I’m deep shit with her when she’s all arms crossed, face has changed and like totally didn’t believe that I don’t want to meet her family. It’s not that I don’t want to… I mean someday, yes… but right now, it’s rather complicated.
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i saw this coming…but i hope you will let them be happy at the end, cause shane isn’t bad…she deserves to be happy
That was good and intense. Let Shane tell her, then have a real hot scene because they’re just too much into each other to deny one to the other even in such a stressful situation… This is good !
i love this fic, saw the whole argument. I think shane should tell her, but at the same time shouldn’t. i don’t know. Maybe something could go down that would reveal her secret but at the same time prove her love for Carmen. Eaither way carmen will find out eventually i just hope they have a happy ending. Shane diserves to be happy.
I think Shane should tell her before she finds out in an other way.. Because I think she will find out one way or an another. I don’t know.. Maybe Shane should ask Alice for some advice on how to tell.. or something. And I LOVE this!
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I want more baby!!!
love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It’s soooooo beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!! They deserve to be happy… I love them together!!!! Thank u 4 posting! By the way, I agree with Irowen69… Carmen should find out… but it owuld be cool even if Shane tells her… Carmen would be happy because Shane would have been honest with her… but please, Carmen has to find out!!!! Shane is not bad… she’s just… she’s just Shane!
Wow this is intense! Shane should totally tell her, but Carmen is gonna freak out…but then again if Shane doesn’t tell her, Carmen is gonna freak out! There are so many ways this could go. I think in the end Carmen will understand why Shane was being so secrative, but Shane’s lifestyle is a lot to take in…I don’t know how I would feel if the person I was in love with told me they have killed people and that they are next in line to take over a crime family! This story is totally kickin ass!!! More Please!!!