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Badlands – Chapter 9
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“Since I have you… I can think… it’s all right, I’ll get through this because I have you next to me…” She said.
I feel like an asshole and I am one. I looked at my feet and everything that I find interesting on the floor. I can’t meet with her eyes. I can’t bring my self to say ‘I’m sorry Carmen… but my dad says stay out of rough part of the hood and Jenny would laugh at me even if I try and start to talk to her about this.’ I can’t.
“Carmen…” I said and she already knows the answer when she throws her arm in the air in defeat and walked away from me. I need to explain to her, whatever it is. I need to make up a lie or something. But I know the answer that would make her happy is to go her mom’s place with her.
“Carm, don’t walk away from me…” I said and went after her. I leaped though the stairs and caught up with her; I grabbed her shoulder but was shrugged off. I walked behind until she slams the door of her room shut in front of my face. Nearly hitting my nose.
“Jesus” I let out instantly. I knocked on the door furiously. “Carmen, c’mon open up…” I said a few times. I hear her packing her DJ equipments, making a really early start. I looked at my watch and it was 11.45am.
“Carmen… baby, can you open up and we can talk about this…” I said through the door with my knocking. I was getting mad by the second and my knocking is getting bigger and louder by the second.
“What?!” She screamed. I heard the noise of the hard equipments falling on the floor.
“Open the fucking door!” I said. Knocking with my fingers are no longer working and now its all of my fist. This is extremely fucking disappointing.
“What do you want?!” She screamed and opens the door. Standing between it, still don’t want me to get in. I looked at her, frustrated.
“I wanna fucking talk to you…” I said.
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i saw this coming…but i hope you will let them be happy at the end, cause shane isn’t bad…she deserves to be happy
That was good and intense. Let Shane tell her, then have a real hot scene because they’re just too much into each other to deny one to the other even in such a stressful situation… This is good !
i love this fic, saw the whole argument. I think shane should tell her, but at the same time shouldn’t. i don’t know. Maybe something could go down that would reveal her secret but at the same time prove her love for Carmen. Eaither way carmen will find out eventually i just hope they have a happy ending. Shane diserves to be happy.
I think Shane should tell her before she finds out in an other way.. Because I think she will find out one way or an another. I don’t know.. Maybe Shane should ask Alice for some advice on how to tell.. or something. And I LOVE this!
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I want more baby!!!
love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It’s soooooo beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!! They deserve to be happy… I love them together!!!! Thank u 4 posting! By the way, I agree with Irowen69… Carmen should find out… but it owuld be cool even if Shane tells her… Carmen would be happy because Shane would have been honest with her… but please, Carmen has to find out!!!! Shane is not bad… she’s just… she’s just Shane!
Wow this is intense! Shane should totally tell her, but Carmen is gonna freak out…but then again if Shane doesn’t tell her, Carmen is gonna freak out! There are so many ways this could go. I think in the end Carmen will understand why Shane was being so secrative, but Shane’s lifestyle is a lot to take in…I don’t know how I would feel if the person I was in love with told me they have killed people and that they are next in line to take over a crime family! This story is totally kickin ass!!! More Please!!!