Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 11, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 5

    Jacq waited for Dana to go on, but seeing she had not plans to continue, Jacq continued to probe. “So you don’t have any anger, or you don’t wish you could wash your hands of the whole situation?” Dana answered honestly, “I’m do feel anger now and then, not really too much toward Alice, as for washing my hands of Alice. Never.” Jacq made a mental note, that she did not say anything about anger toward, or washing her hands of Alice.

    Alice for her part sat there quietly waiting to hear what Dana had to say, she looked up at Dana and quietly said. “You’re having a really hard time sleeping, and I think you might be overly focusing on me, and not what this has caused within yourself.” Dana looked at Alice, thinking how Alice was not going to make this about her like she did with her Doctor. “Al, I’m not the only one having problems sleeping; and I do not have to take pills to help me sleep.”

    Jacq looked toward Alice waiting for her to explain. “I’m not taking pills Dana.” She then looked at the therapist. “Well I am, but not like that sounded. My Doctor gave me sleeping pills to help me sleep. Plus I’m taking medications for pain, and anxiety, and two of those prescriptions Dana either asked for or agreed I needed to take, so don’t even go there Dana.”

    Dana looked at Alice, like she was thinking ‘sure whatever.’ “Al, I doubt very seriously your Doctor meant for you to take all three at the same time just before bed. Alice I know you, you are just trying to numb your brain before you go to bed so you do not have to remember. You know maybe if you didn’t feel the need to numb your brain, things wouldn’t happen to you.”

    The minute the last sentence left Dana’s mouth she though, ‘Oops’. “Al, I didn’t mean that.” Alice just stared at Dana, not believing they were getting into this so soon. “Yes Dana, you did.”

    Jacq, feeling a little lost in this conversation turned to Alice. “Would you mind explaining, what she meant by that.”

    Alice took a deep breath, hating she even had to go into this. “The night of the assault, I had a few drinks, plus I did a little pot and coke with a friend. I’m not even into doing drugs; I was just trying to have a little fun that night.”

    Comments

    1. Deb!! I love ur writin! its fantastic! I love this story line its so serious yet with alices sense of humour in with it a bit it makes it fantastic! I love the relationship u have goin on between alice and dana its amazin!

    2. I think I told you this before but let me do this here. The things I enjoyed most about this chapter:
      – The touches of fluff and humor were great, it evens out the pain of the subject and true to life

      – I’ve always thought you did a great job capturing not only Alice’s fear but the impact it has on Dana as well. The protective nature of Dana was perfectly expressed.

      – The moment that Alice felt her fears set in at the beach was spot on and real.

      – Last but not least, Dana thoughts about the treadmill was so true cause that’s exactly how I felt when I have to run indoors lol.

    3. wow Debs. i’m starting to dread the ‘comment box’ cause i feel like i keep writing the same thing to you but really- this story is wonderfully concieved and delivered. I am hanging on every word- can’t wait to see where you take them. and HOW do you make such a painful experience so romantic?

    Leave a Reply