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Beaten, Working Toward Recovery Chapter 5
I usually like to see my patients once a week, but I would like to see you two in three or four days depending on your schedules. In our next session, lets talk about that night. I want the two of you to write down everything you remember about that night, plus how it makes you feel while you’re remember. Ladies till next time.”
DANA’S SUV
Alice was putting her seatbelt on as she turned toward Dana. “Dana, you don’t really think I have a problem with drugs do you? I don’t, I hope you realize that.” Dana bowed her head down she really was feeling pretty bad about saying what she had said in the therapist’s office. “No Al, I don’t think you have a drug problem. I do wish you hadn’t done any drugs that night with Shane. But I shouldn’t have brought that up with Jacq.” Alice reached over and placed her hand over Dana’s hand. “That’s OK, I’m glad you got it out, and Dana I agree I wish I hadn’t of either. Trust me I won’t ever again.”
Dana started her car, and then looked over at Alice before putting it in gear. “Al, can we do something today? You can wear my jacket so nobody will see your arms. And with those Charlie’s Angels sunglasses nobody can really see your eyes.” Alice had to smile at her friend. “Charlie’s Angels sunglasses?” Dana smiled back and nodded. “Yes Charlie’s Angels, I swear when I watch I love the 70′s on VHI, those are the same sunglasses Farrah Fawcett is wearing.” Alice looked shocked then laughed. “I like my Farrah Fawcett sunglasses. So Dana what do you want to do?”
Dana thought for a minute. “I don’t know, let’s go for a walk, I know you can’t do anything too strenuous, we could walk at the beach, maybe find a bench on the trail and watch the people. I just know I want to do something, other then going home, and I know I need to workout, but I really want to do something with you, that’s not about the beating or the therapist, just something fun.”
Alice thought about it too, “OK Dana let’s go walk on the beach, then do some people watching.”
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I really love the relationship between Dana and Alice. I hope you will continue this story beyond their healing.
Deb!! I love ur writin! its fantastic! I love this story line its so serious yet with alices sense of humour in with it a bit it makes it fantastic! I love the relationship u have goin on between alice and dana its amazin!
i love it when i see a new chapter of this posted, and i wasnt disappointed, great job :D
Love it. Keep it coming. I espically enjoy how they care about it each other.
i really like where this story is going so far and can’t wait for you to post again. keep em comin.
I think I told you this before but let me do this here. The things I enjoyed most about this chapter:
– The touches of fluff and humor were great, it evens out the pain of the subject and true to life
– I’ve always thought you did a great job capturing not only Alice’s fear but the impact it has on Dana as well. The protective nature of Dana was perfectly expressed.
– The moment that Alice felt her fears set in at the beach was spot on and real.
– Last but not least, Dana thoughts about the treadmill was so true cause that’s exactly how I felt when I have to run indoors lol.
This post is killer..Post s0ON..
It was a wonderful chapter and I cannot wait until the next post you write wonderfuly
this story is amazing. i applaud you. keep up the great work
wow Debs. i’m starting to dread the ‘comment box’ cause i feel like i keep writing the same thing to you but really- this story is wonderfully concieved and delivered. I am hanging on every word- can’t wait to see where you take them. and HOW do you make such a painful experience so romantic?
i love all of your fics, theyre all great and this one rocks :o) cant wait for the next update. xx
I love this and this is going to be a long hard road for alice and dana but will they find there true feeling for each other please post soon
I love this chapter. All seem so real, the therapist,the fears, the relationship, its fantastic.
Oh and the fara fawcett glasses are great.